I posted up the first lyric I'm completed in a little while. here:

I am one

There's a few comments in the thread and some explanations of my reasoning, if not my inspiration.

Please drop by and have a read, and if you feel like it leave a comment.

Critique did bring up an interesting point of discussion. Several actually! The debate of directness of a lyric came up and the need for balance both within a lyric and across a portrfolio of lyrics. Ok, well it interests me!