1 pointVery nice Neil!! I especially like the chorus. I might think of changing one line in the chorus. I know it is good to drive home the "hook" and it does work well as is but I think I would replace one of the " "i'm all yours if you'll be mine" lines. Great write!!
1 pointi dig this.. i envy the USA when it comes to place names ... phoenix, jackson, etc, give a real visual effect on a song... even to those who haven't been to the US or even know of the places mentioned the still make you feel like you have been there... if i wanted to write a classic rock song it wouldn't be right not to mention a few places like alabama or LA or new orleans... the list is endless... nice and simple would be a great blues song... neil