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  1. 2 points
    Yep, I am most certainly unique, but then again we all are. True beauty lies in the individual's soul. What we see on the outside is just an illusion.
  2. 2 points
    ITS TRUE. I made this post because of my jealousy over his pink newborn handsomeness!!!! I would RULE this place if it weren't for you..... CURSE YOU YOU HANDSOME MARSUPIAL!!!
  3. 2 points
    Ray, There is no one who looks quite like you! So clean shaven, even!
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    It's amazing that a discussion about arrogance can attract so many posters. All I have to say to symphonious7 is that I am by far better looking than him. If you all take a look at the photograph of me on the left you MUST agree that I am the most handsome individual on Songstuff, on this planet, the solar system, the Milky way and the universe. It feels so good to be a humble personality and one day I must give up the crack pipe.
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    Here's what I've got so far, thanks to all the input. There's also a Slush Pile below for lines I had left over. Sort of wondering about switching L1 & L2 in the Chorus. Table for Two Revise 3 Patty Lakamp © Copyright 2017 V1 I don't need to give you diamonds and pearls I know you by now, you're not other girls You don't need to tell me flattering lies You know me by now, I'm not other guys Chorus Doing what we do Loving who we are Hearts across the table Table for two Just me and you Table for two V2 Looks that pass between us, start of a smile All the private moments mile after mile Everything I want I see in your eyes Giving you my heart and all that implies Chorus Doing what we do Loving who we are Hearts across the table Table for two Just me and you Table for two Bridge: Each of us traveling our lane in the race Always coming back to our own special place Tiny café, table for two Two hearts at play Just me and you Chorus Doing what we do Loving who we are Hearts across the table Table for two Just me and you Table for two V3 Daily conversations, chapters of life Writing our own story, husband and wife Making a choice for the other one’s sake Rolling with the tides, the give and the take Chorus Doing what we do Loving who we are Hearts across the table Table for two Just me and you Table for two # Slush Pile At our special table Set for us two Loving who we are Doing what we do Just me and you Table for two Anyone can see Love in plain view Two hearts at the table Table for two Just me and you Table for two Table for Two Revise 2 Patty Lakamp © Copyright 2017 V1 I don't need to give you Diamonds and pearls I know you by heart, you're Not other girls You don't need to tell me Flattering lies You know me by heart, I'm Not other guys Chorus: Loving who we are Living as we do Sharing life together Table for two V2 Looks that pass between us Start of a smile All the private moments Mile after mile Everything I want I See in your eyes Giving you my heart and All it implies Chorus: Loving who we are Living as we do Sharing life together Table for two Bridge: How could something accidental Turn into love so consequential? (Do I need two more lines here?) Even then we both were aware of We had something to take good care of Chorus: Loving who we are Living as we do Sharing life together Table for two V3 Daily conversations Chapters of life Writing our own story Husband and wife Chorus: Loving who we are Living as we do Sharing life together Table for two This Is Who We Are Patty Lakamp © Copyright 2017 V1 I don't need to give you Diamonds and pearls I know you by now, you're Not other girls You don't need to tell me Flattering lies You know me by now, I'm Not other guys Chorus: This is who we are This is what we do All you want is me All I want is you Instr. Bridge V2 Looks that pass between us Start of a smile All the private moments Mile after mile Everything I want I See in your eyes Giving you my heart and All it implies Instr. Chorus: This is who we are This is what we do All you want is me All I want is you Instr . V3 Time reveals our story Chapters of life Living out our vision Husband and wife Chorus: This is who we are This is what we do All you want is me All I want is you
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    Is there a place for video critique on here already? I can't find it... if not, should there be? Or maybe it's part of the song critique? Just with thinking about YouTube I wondered whether it would be helpful to have a place to post videos in development for feedback. People don't bother so much with 'showcase' since opinions are less welcome I think.
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    Hi there, Any comments/critque/suggestions welcome and much appreciated. Pop tune and feel. Marked Areas and the bridge? are almost spoken the way i'm thinking. Peggy Copyright 08/11/2017 Peggy L. Smart-Barnes You Don't Have To ---------- V 1 -------------- It's not a matter But something inside Put it in place I learned to decide --------- V 2 ------------- So far from perfect Still wonder why Eyes full of specs Makes it easy to cry -------- C 1 ------------ So so for sure Something good to know You don't have to use anger with me Trust me (spoken) Thought about it Hides what's to see You see. (spoken) You don't have to use it with me Not me (spoken) You don't have to You don't have to use it with me -------- C 2 (m1) ------------ So so for sure Something good to know You don't have to use anger with me Trust me (spoken) -------- B 1 ------------ (Spoken or bring it up) Really? Really! Explosions burn Too much aftermath I hate that So much It's easy to walk away Easier to talk With me Okay -------- C 2 (m2) ------------ So so for sure Something good to know You don't have to use anger with me Trust me (spoken) -------- V 3 ------------ Life's never perfect We love and we try It's never in steps We hardly know why ---------- V 4 -------------- It's not a matter I wouldn't lie Put it in place We learn to decide -------- C 3 ------------ So so for sure Something good to know You don't have to use anger with me Trust me (spoken) Thought about it Hides what's to see You see (spoken) You don't have to use it with me Not me (spoken) You don't have to You don't have to use it with me You don't have to You don't have to use anger with me Trust me (spoken) Trust me (spoken)
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    What does that mean? Exactly? l read this made my own mind up but joe bloggs next to me he see's different? all down to interpretation as we see it! Still a brill write Skin
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    I'm with Tom on this. I understand his frustration at the literal and common usage interpretations of 'Talent'. Common usage of the word talent has come to embrace spooky elements. To some its become synonymous with the term 'gifted' which is (IMO) an archaic and clumsy. Talent: An empirical example. An athlete is described as talented. This athlete is a middle distance runner. One day she suffers an accident & has a leg amputated. The loss the limb has deprived her of her talent. Talent: A non-empirical example. An opera singer might be described as 'naturally' talented. Does the talent originate from genetics (Samnite) or culture (Italian) or is it supernatural (god-given)? We don't know. Bottom line: Jenn asked My answer is please rethink the question because 'talent' and 'skill' can be synonymous. ie: there is no difference. Most people understood what she meant but I'm havng trouble with it. I think she means Innate ability vs hard work, but I could easily be wrong. However I do have intuition. Example: When Pahchisme Plaid compared Mick Jagger with Queen, my intuition told me she really meant Freddie Mercury instead of Queen. Though its an unlikely possibility that she might be A/ Comparing Jagger to the whole band or B/ Comparing Jagger to HRH Elizabeth II Language is always changing and we can usually tell when people use words in a different way.
  10. 1 point
    Wish you all the very best with this! Keep sharing your learnings with us 😊
  11. 1 point
    thank you so so so much :D!!!!
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    lol probably not worth getting too far into this but... I think 'Skill' means the ability to do something, and we tend to link it with meaning things which are done well ...to a high standard... but... if a person naturally has the ability to do something well, then they already have the 'skill'. You can develop/learn a skill/ability but you can also have a natural skill/ability... How much you can have naturally is debatable but we all have some natural skills, and some of us are just made with an advantage in or for some...
  13. 1 point
    Fixed. Well should be. It had been disabled for some reason, though you were able to re-enable it in your profile settings. I did it for you.
  14. 1 point
    Seriously...much of how an individual views this depends on their definition of 'talent". Personally, I dislike the term because it implies a complete intangible. What you've described I tend to think of as ability or potential, both of which are more easily defined & understood. Ability or potential an individual can nurture & develop, or chose to neglect & disregard. Ability & potential I consider more of a head-start towards something....kind of leg-up if you prefer. As human beings, we understand what our options are with innate ability & potential. What do you do with "talent" and how does one know if they actually have it? The whole concept is too "pie-in-the-sky" for me. AND, too many damn people end up using "lack of it" as an excuse to quit before they've even put in enough time & effort to find out if they actually have it or not. Tom
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    Peggy thanks for read and critique changed a couple of things john
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