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Part of my past Verse: We're just strangers Pretending to know each other Even with all this anger and sadness in my eyes You can't seem to understand That I'm tired of this lies Everything I love eventualy dies Verse: We're slowly dying Like a candle burning out We have made a home build on hopes and doubt The hopes you took down I can only stand here and shout Hoping that you could find out Chorus: I'm the only one fighting But I've never been a knight Not a princess waiting for mister right Just a girl in love Hoping you would be her last If you just sit their inside your silence This all will be a part of my past Bridge: We're becomming ashes Of the fire that used to burn Too much water pouring down from my cheeks If I drown or swim If I lose or win You just stand aside Thinking about ways to hide From the dissapointment in my eyes Chorus: I'm the only one fighting But I've never been a knight Not a princess waiting for mister right Just a girl in love Hoping you would be her last If you just sit their inside your silence This all will be a part of my past Chorus: I'm the only one fighting But I've never been a knight Not a princess waiting for mister right Just a girl in love Hoping you would be her last But you just sit their inside your silence And now you're a part of my past

Thanks! I really like being a mom ^^ And we have been blessed with such a good and happy baby girl No sleepless nights for me!! Finding peace is really important!! A welcome back for you to than ^^

Hi Lois, Is this a lyric you posted to get some critique than you can better post it somewhere here: http://forums.songstuff.com/forum/13-lyrics-critique/ This one is for challenges and I don't think that's what you're going for.

It's been 2 years since I last was here... time flies! Happy to see that there are still people here who remember me I've never give up on writing or forgot this place. I was just in a really bad place and really thought about just giving up. I began to isolate myself from everyone. Positive thing about it is that I wrote a lote of stuff. Not soo much lyrics but just thoughts and feelings put on paper without any structure. So myabe in time I'll rewrite them into lyrics. Allthough I think that some of them are a bit too depressing. Anyway too keep it short. I've found myself a new love a new job and moved too the other side of my country (I'm glad it's not such a big country ) And now I'm counting down to 30/03 cause if everything is going good I'll be a mom than from a baby girl. Not sure if I have it in me to be a perfect mother but I will love her with all my heart and do everything I can to keep her happy and safe and I hope that will be enough. For the first time in my life I'm just happy. It feels that I am where I need to be and I found myself some peace. So a welcome back to myself on here and I hope I will stay now!

I've really been strugling with this one. Deceided to write about what I feel with all the terorism attacks lately in the news. Not really happy with the end result but it was the best that came out at the time. No one has the right too decide No one has the right too decide Who lives and who dies Doing it in the name of your so called god Doesn't make it right We all have the right to breath Until faith decides it's time to leave Not you with a gun in hand Innocence lost to make a stand No one has the right too decide Who's wrong and who's right Aren't we all the same for what you call god Does it make it right To kill for what you believe Leaving all the rest with the grieve I guess I seem to forget You don't even know what's regret No one has the right too decide We're black and we're white We all believe in something or a god I hope it will be allright That one day we'll open our eyes And love will conquer the hate and lies That this war will end That enemies will become friends

Hi James, I enjoyed reading your lyric Found it brilliant that you've changed the words of the chorus every time but it still fits perfectly into the melody. Good good job!!

It's been a long while since I wrote a lyric so I might have forgotten some rules... anyway here it is. Verse: You must know by now I cannot take your sorrows into my hand I've got no place for you to land So just keep on flying Into the sky, following the sun I cannot fly, I can only run Verse: You must know by now I'm damaged and far beyond repair That my best friend Is this voice inside my head Love is something I always seem to destroy Chorus: Their is a storm raging inside I've got no place inside my mind Why can't you just see I'm made of all these scars I've been through too many wars Verse: You must know by now In this heart lives no joy It seems I'm addicted With the fighting, lying, denying Cause that's all I ever knew The reason I always come crawling back to you Chorus: Their is a storm raging inside I've got no place inside my mind Why can't you just see I'm made of all these scars I've been through too many wars Verse: You must know by now I'm damaged and far beyond repair That my best friend Is this voice inside my head Love is something I always seem to destroy Bridge: You must know by now In this heart lives no joy Before I destroy You better start to run Chorus: Their is a storm raging inside I've got no place inside my mind Why can't you just see I'm made of all these scars I've been through too many wars

Hi Les, Thanks for the read and the comment I guess I have miss understood the challenge (again)... You have some good suggestions. I think I just need to startover again and make a whole new lyric with the advices of you and louie. Make it more a lyric about pop culture Verry big thanks for your time and the advices! Now I can rewrite

Thanks for the read and the comment! Been bussy so finally some time again to check the forum here You gave me a lot of options to think about. You're better with words than me Going to take your advice with me as I rewrite this! Verry big thansk for the time you put into it!

Verse: I still can recall the song That I kept playing on and on Give me love, so he sang Your love was never mine to began Verse: You and me were two sparks Together a fire that left marks In ashes now, alone again As you took the runaway train Chorus: From Londen to New York I've been everywhere It never felt like home Without you there So why don't you come over For old times sake Getting drunk with Jack Making love on Whitesnake Just for old times sake Bridge: Like a dream within a dream Only you Could make my body tremble and scream Never in for the love only the lust But only in you I could put my heart and trust Chorus: From Londen to New York I've been everywhere It never felt like home Without you there So why don't you come over For old times sake Getting drunk with Jack Making love on Whitesnake Just for old times sake

Hi James, Thanks for the read and the comment! I'm glad you liked it

Only got 2 of the 4 ready for now. Hopefully the other 2 will be finished in time. Frozen fears Verse: Snow covered heart It's too early Allready getting dark So I seek my shelter In empty words, hollow eyes Verse: I miss the sun It's too late Winter allready began My heart shatters Like the ice under me feet Chorus: As I sit here by the fire It dries up my tears Keeping me warm tonight But it can't melt away My frozen fears My frozen fears Bridge: Counting footprints in the snow Hoping they will lead me back home To a place I can belong Where I don't need to fear my heart 'Cause it's still loveable and strong Chorus: As I sit here by the fire It dries up my tears Keeping me warm tonight But it can't melt away My frozen fears My frozen fears First rays of spring Verse: Birds begin to sing As flowers start to blossom Your kiss awakens me From my deep winter slumber Verse: My heart is melting To sunshine in your eyes I start to forget My frozen fears by the fire Chorus: We danced in the first rays of spring You took my hand, began to sing The sweetest sound caressed my ears Your fingers whiped away my final tears Verse: A new beginning As winter is fading away I found my place Beside you I will remain Chorus: We danced in the first rays of spring You took my hand, began to sing The sweetest sound caressed my ears Your fingers whiped away my final tears

I was just a little bit confused cause in the challenge description John mentioned a rough limitation on emotion. I've got 2 lyrics right now. Got stuck on the other 2.

So prevalent mood... I'm just writing about feelings and memories and situations inside that particular season. But I guess that's wrong of me? It sure is a challenge this one!