Annanash

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About Annanash

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  • Birthday 01/06/1996

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  1. great advice, definitely gonna use some of it- thanks a lot!
  2. the lyrics sort of speaks to me, motivates me to get out and do something, and i think its really special when a lyric has the ability to do that. all in all- great job!
  3. Thank you so much, i love that idea with the letter being described more. How about in the ending of each verse, there could be lines like "this piece of paper might be old but in it, i mean every word told" and "as i put this envelope in the rusty mailbox i dream the words in ink will change your thoughts" or do you think it should be more specific or something else?
  4. very refreshing song, i like the first verse mostly though, and i agree that the line is used a bit too much, yet i can imagine if the line is song with at very catchy melody, it could be a good thing because it would make the song very memorable. But as i said, just reading the lyrics without a melody i agree that the line is used a bit too much. best regards, anna
  5. Please let me now what you think of the lyrics to this song i made? feel free to criticize! The chorus is the "the rain always finds you..." part. i see you trying so hard but you can't escape who you are i would help you, i would lift your chains if i could but a dog cant ever be a cat some things are just like that you might call it life and maybe i just might The rain always finds you you're always to be found the sun wont come near you you're under a dark cloud life, you never understood others easily could they were never ones to complain then again, they never felt your pain You say you're out of luck nothing good comes your way but did you ever even look? maybe it does'nt find you, and its because you stay cause The rain always finds you you're always to be found the sun wont come near you you're under a dark cloud its like a rollercoster and every time you get closer to the top, you'r afraid to drop but if you just relax, it never feels as bad you see, the reason why i cant lift your chains is because you always had the key when you're ready for a change you'll be set free and the sun you will see The rain always finds you you're always to be found the sun wont come near you you're under a dark cloud
  6. Just wrote this song, please let me know what you think and feel free to critisize. I was considering removing the chorus and replacing it with the first 4 lines of the first verse, so that the first 4 lines in the first verse would be the chorus instead- what do you think? Also if you can think of a better name for the song, please let me know:) Verse: this is a letter of regret for everything i ever said i realised it this fall but i was too ashamed to call wont you come visit me soon il be sitting at the porch under the moon you can bring a bottle of jack and we can drink it from does fancy glasses i really wanna make a mence maybe if you'd like, we could be friends chorus: im sorry and its true you'll read it black on white but i really do miss you wish you would come back one of these nights Verse: a letter may not be enough(i know) but its a beginning, and i wont stop looking at your old frames but the pictures inside dont look the same time was rough on us bill and i know i didnt help and im sorry for that and more but know my house always has an open door Chorus: im sorry and its true you'll read it black on white but i really do miss you wish you would come back one of these nights Verse: if i could, i dont think i would erase your scars cause if i could, i think it would change who we are so come back wont you billy come back to the mountains and be silly Chorus: im sorry and its true you'll read it black on white but i really do miss you wish you would come back one of these nights this is a letter of regret that i really do hope you get
  7. Welcome to the forums Annanash :)