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About Annanash

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  • Birthday 01/06/1996

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  1. Headaches

    Hey guys, just wrote this song. Let me know what you think! Can't really seem to come up with a good name for it either, I thought of calling it "Drunk", but that just sounds more like a party song to me. For now I've called it "Headaches" but feel free to suggest something else! Over and over againDown this bottle for helpBut time after timeThere's just none to findI'm so hungover from lifeknow these headaches better than my mindbut lately, I swear I will trybaby, just hold on for tonightCause my head hurts but my heart's worse Just give me a chance I'll fix it, after this dance But I feel drunk, when I sing this Cause it wont make sense, cause we don't I wake up like I'm deadYou're sitting on the bedDon't tell me thoughI already knowGot so drunk that I couldn't speakGuess the Jack just spoke for meTold you things I didn't meanNow you no longer speak to meAnd my head hurts but my heart's worse Just need one more chance After one last dance And I feel drunk, when I sing this Cause it won't make sense, cause we don't Baby, baby , pleaseIf I feel it, aint it real?Ooh Ooh baby pleaseNo, dont you leaveAm I drunk, when I sing this? Cause it don't make sense, cause we don't My head hurts My heart's worse You said no more chances And I'm still here dancing noooo, baby noSo danm drunk, when I sing this It won't make sense, cause we don't
  2. Blue

    Thanks for the comments guys! @Timbre, I agree about the bridge, I didn't think it really worked either, so will either change that or remove it Do you think the 2nd verse should be changed or just cut down? I agree that simplicity is key but also feel that the section is saying something important, do you think it would make a difference cutting it a bit down to something like: Tear yourself apart Cutting my heart drunk on pain It's all games
  3. Blue

    Just wrote this song, supposed to be a sort of stripped down country blues song, maybe with a little bit of a janis joplin vibe though. Let me know what you think! You have a power over me you hate to use but can't let it be Anything you say, I'll do I any kind of way, I let you Hurt me , cause that's what you do cause when you hurt me, it hurts you too and you hate yourself, like no one else So your favorite thing is to hurt me come back just to desert me and my favorite thing is to let you Do it over, baby do Then at least we share this blue You tear yourself apart cutting through my heart God danm drunk on this pain all we know are these games So you left it there for me to find did her like you do my mind hurt me, cause that's what you do feels like home, all we ever knew misery, sure loves company So your favorite thing is to hurt me come back just to desert me and my favorite thing is to let you Do it over, baby do Then at least we share this blue You love me, baby don't you too much for my own danm good sometimes I wish I'd never met you Cause don't you just love to hurt me Come right back to desert me And don't I just love to let you Do it over, come on do it over, baby do At least we share this blue
  4. "the Rain Always Finds You"

    great advice, definitely gonna use some of it- thanks a lot!
  5. It's All On You

    the lyrics sort of speaks to me, motivates me to get out and do something, and i think its really special when a lyric has the ability to do that. all in all- great job!
  6. Comment On My Song "the Letter"

    Thank you so much, i love that idea with the letter being described more. How about in the ending of each verse, there could be lines like "this piece of paper might be old but in it, i mean every word told" and "as i put this envelope in the rusty mailbox i dream the words in ink will change your thoughts" or do you think it should be more specific or something else?
  7. Odd Fish

    very refreshing song, i like the first verse mostly though, and i agree that the line is used a bit too much, yet i can imagine if the line is song with at very catchy melody, it could be a good thing because it would make the song very memorable. But as i said, just reading the lyrics without a melody i agree that the line is used a bit too much. best regards, anna
  8. "the Rain Always Finds You"

    Please let me now what you think of the lyrics to this song i made? feel free to criticize! The chorus is the "the rain always finds you..." part. i see you trying so hard but you can't escape who you are i would help you, i would lift your chains if i could but a dog cant ever be a cat some things are just like that you might call it life and maybe i just might The rain always finds you you're always to be found the sun wont come near you you're under a dark cloud life, you never understood others easily could they were never ones to complain then again, they never felt your pain You say you're out of luck nothing good comes your way but did you ever even look? maybe it does'nt find you, and its because you stay cause The rain always finds you you're always to be found the sun wont come near you you're under a dark cloud its like a rollercoster and every time you get closer to the top, you'r afraid to drop but if you just relax, it never feels as bad you see, the reason why i cant lift your chains is because you always had the key when you're ready for a change you'll be set free and the sun you will see The rain always finds you you're always to be found the sun wont come near you you're under a dark cloud
  9. Just wrote this song, please let me know what you think and feel free to critisize. I was considering removing the chorus and replacing it with the first 4 lines of the first verse, so that the first 4 lines in the first verse would be the chorus instead- what do you think? Also if you can think of a better name for the song, please let me know:) Verse: this is a letter of regret for everything i ever said i realised it this fall but i was too ashamed to call wont you come visit me soon il be sitting at the porch under the moon you can bring a bottle of jack and we can drink it from does fancy glasses i really wanna make a mence maybe if you'd like, we could be friends chorus: im sorry and its true you'll read it black on white but i really do miss you wish you would come back one of these nights Verse: a letter may not be enough(i know) but its a beginning, and i wont stop looking at your old frames but the pictures inside dont look the same time was rough on us bill and i know i didnt help and im sorry for that and more but know my house always has an open door Chorus: im sorry and its true you'll read it black on white but i really do miss you wish you would come back one of these nights Verse: if i could, i dont think i would erase your scars cause if i could, i think it would change who we are so come back wont you billy come back to the mountains and be silly Chorus: im sorry and its true you'll read it black on white but i really do miss you wish you would come back one of these nights this is a letter of regret that i really do hope you get
  10. Welcome to the forums Annanash :)

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