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Anton Stam

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About Anton Stam

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  • Birthday 08/06/1995

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    Greece

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  1. Baby belly

    Congratulations!!!
  2. Turned My Back On You

    thanks "katana"
  3. Turned My Back On You

    v1 Since I left you I grew weak and staggered Each blurred thought of you Cut me like a dagger chorus I've got too many problems To lift my eyes and search for you I've drawn all the curtains And I turned my back on you v2 My deep feelings I got tired of doubting For girls like you I need to stop scouting chorus I've got too many problems To lift my eyes and search for you I've drawn all the curtains And I turned my back on you v3 I don't understand Why you tolerated me lying Now I lack the strength To look you in the eye bridge Every word we spoke made us both laugh Can't forget your blinding white smile you had chorus I've got too many problems To lift my eyes and search for you I've drawn all the curtains And I turned my back on you v4 And at least You should know I'm sorry About me You don't have to worry
  4. Without Warning

    v1 You didn't show me The way out Instead you showed me The way down You led me to you Gave me your lips Tld me sweet words Then placed your bricks chorus I hurt With pain I couldn't feel I laughed With joy that wasn't real Without warning We said Goodbye Without asking me You borrowed my life... v2 You said I'm beautiful Then hurt me bad You said you like me But it wasn't your heart You took it all back and Took a piece of myself Now you've made it your own Which you will soon forget bridge I falsely believed Hoped indeed And now I cannot say Who really is to blame Can't remember your face Though it's just been three days Since we met last time And we only met twice.. And we did say goodbye With our glowing eyes
  5. Hurt

    You made me never Want to look back again You made me lose Who I really am You made me hurt I may never Miss the way I lived I may choose To eventually forgive Despite the hurt The nectar of amnesia is too toxic To heal the open trauma The rusty methods of plain logic Will never fill the chasm You couldn't see The distance between us You couldn't do The things you should have done You made me hurt I fell too deep Defenceless and alone Salted my wounds Surrendered to the cold But endured the hurt The nectar of amnesia is too toxic To heal the open trauma The rusty methods of plain logic Will never fill the chasm
  6. You Here

    It's a good suggestion. I'll keep it in mind, thank you. (:
  7. Stampede

    I really never understood why a single word has so many meanings. Also, your phrasal verbs and prepositions give me a headache! I try to use single-word verbs as much as possible. But the most interesting thing of the English language is pronunciation. Grammar is very, very easy compared to the Greek one.
  8. Stampede

    Hi Mike, Very poetic, I like your word choices, also the structure, although more uncommon, is a refreshing break from the usual ones. Had to use Google translate a few times! Lol In the chorus, did you intend to rhyme "a" with "us"?
  9. You Here

    Sorry I wish I could change it and make it clearer but it's difficult. Also, I think burnt is a good word to replace broken. In Greek when we say broken photographs we mean Broken frames
  10. You Here

    "I got in your house Saw you and went blind" Its a dream I had. I got into my girlfriends house, saw her, then there was blinding light and then I woke up.
  11. Throw Away The Veil

    Okay, now I understand, thanks!
  12. You Mean The World To Me

    Exactly! But because they don't last I try to avoid them.
  13. You Here

    Hi Bryan, Thanks for the comment! Sorry, what i meant is broken photo frames but it doesn't rhyme with glass.
  14. You Here

    v1 Tonight I feel heavy Under the night clouds For you, waiting at the port Alone in the crowd But you... ch You here Why aren't you? You here Why can't you be? v2 Today I feel cold Even if it's hot outside I got in your house Saw you and went blind But you... ch You here Why aren't you? You near Why can't you be? You here Why aren't you You near Why can't you be? br Now I see you only In the cracked glass Now I see you only In broken photographs ch You here Why aren't you? You here Why can't you be?
  15. You Mean The World To Me

    I have to warn you, from my experience summer romances are usually nothing more than temporary enthusiasm. Lol
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