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JayzE last won the day on July 4 2016

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About JayzE

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    Australia

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    Red Hot Chili Peppers, David Bowie, GreenDay, MeatLoaf, Queen, The Who, Rage Against The Machine, The Doors, System of a Down.

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  1. Offline-Online

    Thanks Skin
  2. Offline-Online

    Hi again... Its been a while, but life unfortunately gets in the way.. Here's something i've been working on.. I hope you like .. Regards V Have you seen the picture of Kurt Cobains’ crime scene yet You can bet your ass it’s something that you’d never forget Or the vision of the King of Pop upon the slab Billy Jean has never seen her lovely lover like that And when JFK was put away, you see the autopsy Out on the net always beset with famous necropsy Why the need to post the dead with little respect Did we really need to see Diana in her car, wrecked C It’s the time and place for the morbid Online death isn’t something they forbid Paparazzi life never ends in death Your still photogenic even after your last breath V Do all wanna see Bruce Lee lying dead in a casket Or poor Tupac on his back messed up by a bullet Anna Nicole lost control we knew that she was beautiful But dying to see her lying in a bag is just so awful These visions won’t ever escape your mind But that is perfect if you are so inclined For the rest of us it’s just morbid curiousity The famous dead is something we want to see B Their life was charmed and they seemingly had it all But they were just like us the short and the tall In the end it’s not about your amount of currency It’s what you leave behind that’s your legacy C The money comes out for your last pic alive But once you’re done a new market arrives Doesn’t matter if you’re gone from crime or meth Your still photogenic even after your last breath V Notorious for the way that you died As a victim nothing left but your pride But the internet can easily still take away Every good you did by showing inside Even though we know some photos can lie For what reason we will never know why But as long as we still show some curiosity You can see the dead for eternity C It’s the time and place for the morbid Online death isn’t something they forbid Paparazzi life never ends in death Your still photographic after your last breath C The money comes out for your last pic alive But once you’re done a new market arrives Doesn’t matter if you’re gone from crime or meth Your still photogenic even after your last breath Take a deep breath....... (c) 2017 Jay Egan
  3. Singer looking for songwriter

    Hey there.. I'm in Australia and i like to write in many different genres.. What sort of music does your band play? Cheers
  4. Jayze's Musical Compendium

    I can't seem to see the other comments that it says there are!!! What's going on?
  5. Jayze's Musical Compendium

    Testimonial This song is a stirring call to fight for what you believe in and to let you know that i'll stand behind you only because i don't have the courage to lead myself. The time for venting has long passed I'd cry if i could but the die is cast I'd do what i can if i had the will I'd fight for believing in the right to kill But only those who think that they had the need To cause you pain while dying to succeed Whose got the right to say they're wrong Well me and i'm gonna let you know in this song This is my testimonial, hear me loud, hear me proud I am not a memorial, to those who died, only those who tried Speak up, speak up. You need to be heard Our pain can start and stop with only a word If only we could be as free as a bird Our cultures permitting the rebirth of hate Hold on to your horses will you shut the gate Link our arms together and form a chain Smile and feel the pleasure to destroy the pain The war is in their mind so let it stay in there Tear down bases and destroy their hardware Reaction is the action we must all endure To create a world to live that is sublime and pure This is my testimonial, i will not wait, i'll tell you straight Although it isn't a tutorial, look into my eyes, i won't tell you lies Speak up, speak up. Don't wait to be stirred If you open your mouth your not considered a nerd To hide and say nothing is what is absurd Ignorance is bliss so let's follow the plan And leave all this behind to another man Looking all around it just to big of a task Changing the world is too much to ask You think i can do it, well do it yourself Unfortunately my courage sits upon the shelf But i'll stand behind you as the movement grows Or let you shield me if the cold wind blows This is my testimonial, if you can't hear, open up an ear Won't make it a tutorial, since my birth i've shown no worth Speak up, speak up, that's what i need to do So we can fight together and form a coup Against all of those with nothing better to do © Jay Egan 2014
  6. Jayze's Musical Compendium

    Rope Not what you'd call a positive song, but can perhaps still inspire positivity. V I am finding myself at the end of a rope No chance of respite Now gone is all hope So i look to the sky on the clearest of nights And i pray for a sign I'm in search of some lights C But it's only the darkness i see What i expected was more heavenly While it protects my mortality My heart was the darkest part of me V I open my mind Try to turn on my light But paranoid thoughts put up too much a fight Forsaken, i guess to be taken too soon Life glows like the sun where i'm more like the moon B In the blanket of night I'm that star to your right faded, almost out of sight and resisting all delight C But it's only the darkness i see What i expected was more heavenly While it protects my mortality My heart was the darkest part of me V Still finding myself at the end of a rope No chance of respite Now gone is all hope So i look to the sky on the clearest of nights And i pray for a sign Still in search of some lights Co But still only darkness i see A vision of nothing, the size of a pea So maybe the rope is simply the key And so then i guess i will never be ©2014 Jay Egan
  7. Jayze's Musical Compendium

    Minor Celebrity Born from another set of lyrics, Rapped, i decided to make it a little more mainstream by adding a chorus and streamlining the verses. Brings to mind 'Stan' by Eminem...Rapping verses intertwined with a nice melodic chorus. V Do I take to heart the fact my part is at an end I can't pretend that all my life was with a friend A richness and fulfillness is something I desire My dreams fuel my engine where inside's a burning fire In open reflection my needs perplex, need interjection While the irony of the situation puts my heart into convulsion Where do I go from here, why do they cheer for all my failures? This isn't reality TV where we're all showing our genitalia's C Why can’t you all give it up for me? Why can’t you pretend to be happy…for me? I’m doing the best I can Cos in the end I have a plan To become another minor celebrity V Mix and match a fraction to achieving a reaction Give your mind some protection before it reaches putrifaction Put your fears to the side and conquer to divide Put your rhythm on the line don't let others decide The beat to which your feet undulate, never retreat Bury that seed of doubt and let it die under your feet Reach the ocean with devotion to whatever your cause And let one swift motion have you sink in your claws C If I do it I will do it on my own There’s no doubt I’ll give it all down to my bone I’ll fight through negatives And the obstacles it gives For my need to become another B-grade celebrity V Take the lead and always heed your own observation Don't try to bleed for your need for adulation You will get through the haze and not be cathartic Fight your way through the maze with strength, not lethargic Sterilize your mind and find clarity in all you do Defined, divine and sweet like a honeydew Before you know it, the show will blow it your way And then you will know that you are well on your way C Why can’t you all give it up for me? Why can’t you pretend to be happy…for me? I’m doing the best I can Cos in the end I have a plan To become another minor celebrity © Jay Egan 2014
  8. Jayze's Musical Compendium

    Ladies Man I don't want to think i'm all wine and roses, i like to dabble in all genres and while it's not a habit of mine, this one is built to shock....I apologise in advance to any sensitive viewers. If you're easily offended.....i'd skip this one!! I'm not a big rapper but i like to give it a go now and then...Word to ya Grandmother!! I am here, i am there, i've got lipstick in my hair But i'm all good cos in the hood they've got jism up in their front and back, mouth and rack and i don't even care Dump and stroll, thats how i roll and i'll pinch their underwear. Many say i'm a rat and i'm sure they have their reasons But i don't care, thin or fat, i am open for all seasons Bring it on, you like it long and i'll have a bitch for dinner But in the end, i'm up your end and i'm feeling like a winner People hate me for who i is and not for who i aint I'll have them know i'm full of jizz and i'll blast it on their taint Yeah i'm sick ,do i give a f*ck, hell no, get on the bed You know it's only when i'm done when i let you give me head I gotta reputation for satisfying bitches my card is always full, don't care if you on rag or riches They hanging off my dick, like a decoration Theres just no need to smoke some weed and settle for masturbation And while you assholes jealous, it simply doesn't matter A brother can have her after me, just hope you can handle splatter So if you got the goods, and can pleasure all the ladies Just make sure you got the hoods, or you'll be havin' all the babies People hate me for who i am and i can handle this Just don't bother me after i'm done and i need to take a piss Yeah i'm sick, but don't touch my dick just let it all hang loose Or else your stuck, cos without a f*ck, i'll still fill you with my juice ©2013 Jay Egan
  9. Jayze's Musical Compendium

    Victorhyme A short motivational ditty to get people across the line. A rap with a cool bassline would suffice. By the time my mind is sublime from a rhyme I'm inclined to find the time to design Another way to stay ahead in this day Can i say i'll stay and play this very way I know i'm in the game cos i rock to be in it It's no secret that i've got to have it I have the drive and i have the will And i'll do anything. Hurt, maim or kill Competition can be bitchin' if you're ahead at the start Pulling off a great win if you have the heart Against all odds you can manage to score Rise above them all and show them the door That's how you do it You need to pursue it You've got to want it Then you can do it Run the race, second place is not your grace Find a space, increase your pace to save face Take the lead so you can feed on your own greed Then bleed if you need to succeed, yes indeed Persistence creates distance and leads to defiance Resistance and essence extinguishes reliance Fight in the light to maintain your right You're a knight, take delight as you move out of sight Then you'll have it Cos you need it Now you've won it Was it worth it? © 2013 Jay Egan
  10. Jayze's Musical Compendium

    Regret Some are harder to edit than others but thanks to the great critique i had i made some changes recommended to me. Thanks to all those concerned. V I truly think, through all these years To sum me up is to see through tears The old regrets of moments past Oh how the years have gone so fast I used to think, when i was young and tarnished with the devils tongue That all my life i would succeed But still here i lay and bleed C My moments passed, my time is at an end My friend, was once, my only memory To keep me sane and push me through life If only i'd kept on the path made for me V Regretting just about everything i'd done Reminding myself of a life with no fun My decisions let me down time again Pushing me deeper into the lions den How could i hold my head up high When i'm dying inside while outside i cry Too elusive my pride as i run and hide from the pain that i know will never subside C Take me back to a better time and place Without these thoughts i know i could save face And any rude comment i'd brush off of my back And you'd never be ready for my comeback V What happened to me why didn't i see the change when it happened to me mentally I never saw the signs, i never knew the times When my confidence left me, no rhymes Why? I'll never know, so i'll just go And fade into black, like at the end of a show I existed for a while? That is the bet To live or to love or to just regret C My moments passed, my time is at an end my friend, was once, my only memory to keep me sane and push me through life if only i'd kept on the path made for me ...if only i'd kept on the path ...if only... © Jay Egan 2013
  11. Jayze's Musical Compendium

    My Shadow Is there more to a shadow that the absence of light? V I stepped out of the darkness and into the light I expected to see my very soul last night But it wasn't there, had me pulling my hair All i could do was just sit there and stare at the wall, that's not all, i also gazed at the floor theres a hole in my heart unlike ever before Even felt, was i dealt, the harshest of hands Is it wrong, i'm too strong, always making demands Why is it i, cannot see, the greatest part of me how i cried, could've died, because i couldn't see... B My shadow, that disconnected part of me I feel hollow, not how i am meant to be I am shallow, more than i am normally Tomorrow, will it possibly come back to me C Its what makes me feel so free And in the daylight i could see That it would always be Until now.... i feel empty V Now everywhere i go, i'm surrounded by light Now not that good since my souls not in sight What does it mean now that it is unseen Is the reason a result of the person i've been How can something like that be so important Though, by it's size, it's demise is just so blatant Can i regain, with no pain, what i am missing To embrace it, let's face it, the thing's a blessing This curse, it gets worse, with every passing second I'll plead till i bleed for what i have beckoned... B My shadow Its faith is what i need My shadow Its warmth is how i feed My shadow Please complete my being My shadow Its light i'm only seeing C Its what makes me feel so free And in the daylight i could see That it would always be Until now.... i feel empty V Will it ever come back to me Can the sun brighten my day Or will it just always be that my shadow's just gone away My very own shadow Did it even ever exist My non existing shadow Gone forever...what a twist © Jay Egan 2013
  12. Jayze's Musical Compendium

    Shut Up and Do Your Job My first post was a part rap, part punk adventure. V Delusional workplace, Headspace is no place Riding your ass, your boss always on your case Making his own rules up as he goes along Leaving you breathless, all’s left is this song C Rising up against the system You want to go but you would have missed them Working slow, your minds racing fast With your future ahead your life has passed V There’s no place like this place, here’s the task Don’t lose face, know your place and don’t ask Put your head down and just do your job Don’t say a word, don't become part of the mob C Don’t rise up against the system Or face the risk, leave yourself wide-open Exercise caution or you could change your life Then good luck trying to explain to your wife….. V Why your best defence was your only offence Jumping a fence, you fell off, your comeuppance Now you’ve lost your job and lost your wife And your seeking relief from the edge of a knife The moral of the story isn’t gory, but the truth Keep your mouth shut not like back in your youth Take work in its stride don’t go on the attack Keeping your cool will help you avoid the sack C Rising up against the system Don’t want to admit that your gonna miss them Now you’re too slow and your brains in a cast You had a life ahead but now its…passed © Jay Egan 2013
  13. Challenge #36 All On You

    You left me for others, my lover, my friend I’m not sure if my broken heart will ever mend I thought that we had an unbroken bond Still maybe I’d go back with the wave of my wand My wand that I used to get you in the first place My place was where I first saw your sweet face To face you my nerves I needed to acquire Acquire a sense of grace so I’d face my desire Desire for you You had me all too But that’s not enough Not what you’d normally do But I didn’t know You had 3 on the go How foolish of me You ARE infidelity Our love was something I could shout about But now all that’s left is just fear and doubt Fear that I’ll let you break my heart again Doubt you’ll get your chance, to my chagrin. Your eyes blinded me to the whole truth The truth that had me relive my youth Youthful when it happened the first time The first time I said it was the last time How can it be In love maybe My lucks not there But you don’t care I’ve suffered enough Yeah I’m not so tough Cos I still have a heart Though it's torn apart You left me for others, my lover, my friend I’m not sure if my broken heart will ever mend I thought that we had an unbroken bond Still maybe I’d go back with the wave of my wand So it’s true You loved a few Thought that would do Well I never knew It is taboo Why did you do What you thought was new Because now we’re through You broke my heart in two And it’s all.. on.. you ©2014 Jay Egan
  14. Challenge 36

    How about just pick a random and unusual topic to write about. Like for example, pantyhose, garlic bread or oxygen. It would be interesting to see from what perspective people look at the world and all within it.... Just a thought...
  15. Challenge # 34 - Why?

    Thanks Joe, I'll take that as a compliment. Glad i could supply you with a natural high, guy!! Cheers.
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