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CellarDoor99

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  • Birthday September 11

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    I just write song lyrics. Some of them have melodies too.
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    I listen to pretty much everything.

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    China
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    Female

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  1. On this summer's eve just wait for me Cause I've got this love I need to share Wait for me in a midsummer night's dream Wait for me anywhere, I'll meet you there This summer's eve, just wait for me Just wait, wait, wait for me
  2. So since I'm already here, I'm going post some lyrics. I'm not that confident about my lyrics, but I'm posting it anyway. Now this one, I'm not sure about the title and the last chorus, and I feel the choruses are too short. Anyway, feedback please! The copyright at the bottom probably not necessary (who will steal this anyway) but just to be safe. Burning Potions with the Moonlight (Hocus Pocus) Underneath the wicked full-blown moon Got a set of spells I wanna try out Prey all you want, morn'll never come soon Drown in your own moans and shouts Love potion, seduction, it's all in the motion Dash of sugar and splash of wine Friction, tension, wind blowing away the caution I'll do anything to get back what should be mine (Bridge) Hocus pocus, don't lose focus Now repeat what I want you to say (Chorus) And even the wrong words seem to rhyme Parsley sage rosemary and thyme Faking promises that I'll be fine Try all I can he'll never be mine (whoo!) Underneath my wide, full blown smile Lies a wicked dark little smirk Being in the sheep's clothing has its perks I think I'll just stay by your side, for a little while Higher, higher, ignite the fire Enchant me, entrance me, get me hypnotised Don't tire, every push a bit more stronger She doesn't deserve you, it's bout time you realised (Bridge) Hocus pocus, you need not focus She and I are gonna just have a small talk (chorus) And even the wrong words seem to rhyme Parsley sage rosemary and thyme One step and you'll out of line And all alone making these words rhyme And I'd mutter some nonsense To keep you on your toes Burn a whole lot of incense And fry a few bones Cause you're on your way to being petrified And it's fun to watch you terrified (chorus) And even the wrong words seem to rhyme Parsley sage rosemary and thyme I've strung you up in a line And he watches and he just feels fine © 2013 Jiwon Heo All rights reserved
  3. Hi, everyone. I just made an account today, and I'm going to use this blog to post all my lyrics. I write lyrics in my spare time, and since I'm not doing anything with it, I thought I could give it to someone who can actually make music out of it. If you see something you like, just contact me. You need my confirmation to use it, but I don't mind if you make some changes to it. I don't require money, but I want to hear the finished product and be credited for the lyrics. My lyrics' style varies (greatly) according to my mood (like my music taste) so I'm sure there's something for everyone. I'm not that confident about my lyrics, but I'm posting it anyway. Some feedback will be nice (don't worry about being too harsh, but I need constructive criticism, so don't just throw insults at me. Or you can just throw praises at me, which will do wonders to my ego). I have a lot of stuff, and I'll keep posting. My email address: holdon2thislullaby@gmail.com Thank you, Jessie.
  4. Welcome to the forums CellarDoor99 :)

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