davidnyc64

Ok cool, thank you! David

Hi forum, I was wondering if there is a good place on songstuff (forum) to post a new video? My brother and I have been experimenting with making videos for my music as well as other artists. Any help would be great! Thanks, David

Your lyrics are honest and I feel where you're coming from. I agree with the others on this point, make it clear what are the verses, chorus and if bridge if there is one. Listen to songs that move you and make notes on changes in tempo, verses etc. You're off to a great start, just remember that song writing is a process. It's not like writing in a journal where there's no need for rhyming or story telling. Keep it up and don't get discouraged. Tryng to write words that explain an emotion is not easy. Be a student of this art and you'll see your own growth as a song writer. I've been writing for over 20 years and I'm still learning. Good luck to you!