huwt

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About huwt

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    England (UK)

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    I like to think i'm sponge. I'm trying to soak up more.

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  1. I love a good story line, and musicals for that matter.
  2. Liked the lyrics. Personally i would like a bit more interest rhythm wise in the guitar. I know simple is good sometimes and i agree, but i think your lyrics were let down by your music. I would shorten or do away with the interlude. I wanted it to carry into the next verse and chorus. Just my opinion. Still a gorgeous love song, which really conveyed the dulling of outside influence when you're in the bubble with that special person. That's what i got.
  3. Cheers David. Don't know if i could've knocked it up there back then, and haven't actually tried, but i'll give it a go tomorrow and let you know how it goes. Thanks for the feedback .
  4. Has a certain musical quality to it. I could see this on stage. Don't know if it was meant to, but it works. A great story, loved the wailing guitar.
  5. Tasty harmonies. Loving the laid back feel to the short builds in tension then suddenly back to the harmonies. Lots of little interesting sounds scattered throughout which had me hooked. Unfamiliar with organic soul but if this is it i'm hooked. Welcome from a fellow noob.
  6. So hey. My first song post. One i did a year back. It's typically poppy so sorry for that. I struggle lyrically. Usually when im genuinely happy with something it's the ones that sort of fall out of my ears onto the paper fully formed. Usually quite a messy process. If it doesn't happen like that i usually spend weeks going in circles of 4-5 different songs trying to write them at the same time. I post a lot of things on youtube, but having found this i really wanted to get feedback on my lyrics and the song in general from some people dedicated to the art of songwriting. So please, be brutal. Also i hate that i wrote baby but i can't take it back now. - Huw You hide your eyes behind the magazine But I can feel them daggers as they stab at me You think you look so mean in your low cut jeans But I can see in you eyes that your not that keen You, swagger to the beat But i've, got the two left feet And we're, just like chalk and cheese But I can't stop the feeling when you look at me You're like nothing I've seen You say you've got nothing on me Well you're nothing to me I'm nothing to you Give me the chance To show what I can do I've had enough I need to get myself away from here You always told me I was never good enough for you my dear Give me on good reason And I will pack my things and go There's just one thing you should know Baby, I'm not gone... Don't tell me its the cards that i'm dealt The dealer don't know just what I felt Let me remind you the way that you'd melt When we dropped to the floor You loosened my belt You've got that “something, something†And I? Well i've got nothing And we're like a ranging inferno And I'll miss the flames Cause I like how it burns so You're like nothing on earth How are you gonna let me prove my worth? I've got my guitar, you know I can sing Sit down right there while I do my thing I've had enough I need to get myself away from here You always told me I was never good enough for you my dear Give me on good reason And I will pack my things and go There's just one thing you should know Baby, I'm not gone... We've had our fun can we do this again? Now we both where we should begin You know that I'm right You know that it's zen You'll never find this With these other men So you can always find another And I can always find another We'll never work together But the feelings we shared they'll linger forever So, I'm just gonna be A notch on your bedpost The boy from your dreams I'll never find someone But I can pretend Now what we had must come to an end I've had enough I need to get myself away from here You always told me I was never good enough for you my dear Give me on good reason And I will pack my things and go There's just one thing you should know Baby, I'm not gone...
  7. Hey

    Hey there. 21 year old songwriter from Brighton,UK. Looking for help in the lyric department. Already loving what i've heard on here, already uncovered a few gems. Should be fun.
  8. I agree with Avit. Very Athlete feel to your voice, and piano. I liked the airy feel you put into the ambient mix. I think you could've taken the ambience further.
  9. This was a great place to find myself for my first click on the forums. Beautiful lyrics. Beautiful guitar. Played it through three times while waiting for my confirmation email to come through. Thank you .
  10. Welcome to the forums huwt :)