Jump to content

Deepak Malhotra 93

Active Members
  • Content count

    22
  • Joined

  • Last visited

Community Reputation

2 Neutral

3 Followers

About Deepak Malhotra 93

  • Rank
    Starting To Play
  • Birthday 06/13/1993

Profile Information

  • Gender
    Male
  • Location
    India

Contact Methods

  • Skype
    deepak.25

Music Background

  • Band / Artist Name
    Deepak Malhotra
  • Musical / Songwriting / Music Biz Skills
    Singer Songwriter
    Lyricist, composer, performance
  • Musical Influences
    John Mayer, Ed Sheeran, Metallica, Megadeth, Tool, Karnivool, John Paul, Joe Satriani, Buckethead

Collaboration

  • Songwriting Collaboration
    Interested
  1. Lyrics: With all the love that you and I are in' Verse 1: City lights keep shinning. Why do you hide? The leaves keep falling right out of sight. The wind it shall blow now, Surfing the sea. But Darlin' I feel you here like the scent of love That you have always been to me.. Chorus: Come hold my hand now, Don't ever leave. I can taste your sunshine breathing in to me You're the essence of my life, My dreams have now come true, But Darlin' this world's a lie, If there's no me,then there ain't no you. Verse 2: I can see it in your eyes The sparkle of that flame Like a thousand diamonds form screaming out my name Because Darlin' in this life All I want to be, Is a man who lived his dreams Like a wish upon a star, for you and me to see.. Chorus: (Repeat) Come hold my hand now, Don't ever leave. I can taste your sunshine breathing in to me It's time to close your eyes Can you feel the freeze? Let if lift our soul outside To land a place where, there is only you and me.
  2. Hey Guys Tell Me What You Think Of My Song?

    Thanks for the feedback P.S The song did resonate with me.
  3. Hey Guys Tell Me What You Think Of My Song?

    Hey Kat! Glad you liked the song. Yes, there are a couple of quality feedbacks I got for this song which I'm going to consider and redo this song. Thanks for listening
  4. Hey Guys Tell Me What You Think Of My Song?

    Yes. I'd have to put that on the mike settings which muffled my voice a bit. Thanks for the feedback.
  5. Hey Guys Tell Me What You Think Of My Song?

    Yes, I'd have to put that
  6. Hey Guys Tell Me What You Think Of My Song?

    Yes, I'm glad I got such awesome feedback. I'm to rearrange the song. Thanks for the feedback
  7. I Know A Girl A Boy Calls Paul

    Trippy song! This could just lead to a new genre all together. Nice work. Deepak
  8. All The Many Reasons

    I love the song CC. It's 'feelfull' I din't the the point of the flute first comping the guitar lines then later having going astray. It could have blend better. Nice composition. All the best! Deepak Malhotra
  9. Hey ! I liked the song. Some feedback : I think Your voice was sonically dint find it's space with the rest of the backing music overpowering it at several parts in the song. Also, I like your guitar tone. Going by the feel of the song , I feel the percussion should'nt have been as loud as they were. The composition was overall well done! Have a nice one! Deepak
  10. Hey Guys Tell Me What You Think Of My Song?

    Lyrics Verse 1: I'm a diamond digger With a heart that's bigger Than the boy who just plays this song.. Woah My touch is a clue, Just one single room, To Heaven and back, and I'm your Ironman I'll hold you so tight, And make you feel right, Your curves are a sight, so let me touch you.. Verse 2: I'm a handsome dealer Classy, rich, heart-stealer, Let me hold you closer beside.. In my arms The look in my eye, Will make you go wild, So stop feelin' shy, I'm your Ironman I'll make you feel good, Just like you should, Let me undo that hook, let me throw it.. In all the land, and the sea, There's just one place, you need to be, My Macanudo and your bikini And a beach side, just you and me The stars are bright, but that's alright.. (I don't need to see) Verse 3: She's a sick heart breaker With some tricks that take her To the moon way above in the sky.. Woah She's crazy and wild, Might just make you cry, She won't stay the night, but I'm her Ironman She'll melt in my sight And look at me right She'll bring me a pint, I make her knees go.. She's got the room, lost the keys, Say's all we need is just you and me', Her suntanned back and my chilled JD, See how she, blows, 3 rings at me The stars are bright, but that's alright.. (I don't need to see)
  11. Hey Guys Tell Me What You Think Of My Song?

    Hey Terry! Yes, I need to strengthen up my vocals. I will definitely work on singing while standing. Glad you like the song. Thanks for the feedback Peace
  12. Hey Guys Tell Me What You Think Of My Song?

    Hey Dek, now that's an honest feedback! The idea for Ironman was a quizzical thought that came to my mind while I was on my way for a movie date. The thought was of Ironman, the sexy, billionaire, superhero whom we all know so well and how he has a humanised, wild and raunchy side to him when it comes to his special lady-love. Have you ever heard of a superhero with a crazy, enviable love life and a mysterious babe to go with it? Well, here's Ironman for you! This song wasn't intended to move people (with my lyrics) but rather to make them feel romantic in a way.. a feeling of 'livin the life' kinna thing. Well, I wasn't lazy in writing the lyrics to be honest. Really put my mind to it Yes, this song is in its early stages. I recorded this song in a studio with not great equipment, hence this sound. I still need to get experience in the guitar tone I want and also my voice settings... still discovering. Yes my voice needs to improve in terms of time and my breath which I'm working on. I'd also call this a demo. But I wont lie about the fact that I did want this to be more polished than it is. Thank you for the honest feedback. Have a nice one man!
  13. Hey Guys Tell Me What You Think Of My Song?

    Thanks Mahesh. Love it here! Yes, I was slightly uncomfortable but I did not think of that affecting my voice. Yes, I too have a lot of ideas that I wanted to layer over this song. Working on it. Thanks for the feedback. Will Post the lyrics
  14. Hey Guys Tell Me What You Think Of My Song?

    Thanks for the feedback Next round for?
  15. Hey Guys Tell Me What You Think Of My Song?

    I agree with you on the point where I was gasping for air. I agree with you on the point that I was gasping for air at places. The lyrics were supposed to be eutopic. Thanks for the feedback
×