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  1. Lyrics Writing Challenge #8 - The Pop Song

    i have a lot of spare time
  2. Lyrics Writing Challenge #8 - The Pop Song

    chorus Save the Children in the UK Save the Children in the world save a child thats a boy save a child thats a girl educate a child to elevate there mind today knowledge is a power that will help fight on another day verse 1 this disasters taking its storm its flooded our whole town we really cant take it any more we need to rebuild, but we cant because we are poor we lack the finance for resource we need financial support help us build a new house help us build a new school help me rebuild my home help me rebuild my mall bridge theirs a child in pain there is a child on the floor wont you help save a child anymore theirs a child south east a child west and north chorus Save the Children in the UK Save the Children in the world save a child thats a boy save a child thats a girl educate a child to elevate there mind to the world knowledge is a power that will help fight on another day verse 2 a hungry child cant afford to eat so they go hungry all o the week they need nutrition not a meal protect our children help them heal we can spend 5 dollars on a dog treat spend money and not eat we need to thhink about others and how there living is real one action real simple can make you a hero chorus Save the Children in the UK Save the Children in the world save a child that's a boy save a child that's a girl educate a child to elevate there mind today knowledge is a power that will help fight on another day bridge save a child be a hero build a school buy a meal be a winner you can make a big change your the diffrence so can i were all the same were all children
  3. I challenge any rapper to send for me

    No text battles only audio
  4. I challenge any rapper to send for me

    coming back like booomarang with a tune dat boombbam no chitchat im back with a barakah stacked to counterreact an attackers attak fear the champ hitting back with a sick track so you sit down see if you can really ride da riddim are you kiddin i will kill im its forbiden not to listen to the wisdom of a spirit on a mission staying hidden to the system like convict to a prison ima win it like a winner im winner im a a winner you wanted a 2nd verse here it is reimbursed more lyrics better flow even tho were taking turns i dropped sybles so fast i had to slow it down but it was still to fast for the pace your going now your not a challenger just amateur why a 4 line bar should be enough to damage ya
  5. New Hip-hop track looking for feedback

    great track! it's refreshing to hear a different style that stands out like this. i like beat lyrics and flow. keep it up alo
  6. I challenge any rapper to send for me

    trapped behind bars a man who met a force i think it was you? oh yeah of course he raped your mouth and broke your jaw you were gobsmacked with a dropped jaw you get bood of stage you get so much booz another time wasted you dont no what to do because your mind is a pub it echoes the voice of an intoxicated drunk i don't record with an iphone if IPHONE studio engine(ere) i could waste money recording clear but your used to echoes with a lonely beer i punched you with a punchline broke down the ink line with a double entendre and you think your buzzing with a homo phone shove it homo where the light don't glow be a mirror reflect yourself check yourself before you wreck your self don't double think but would it blow your mind if your girl blew my head cause shes a stupid bitch
  7. Lyrics Writing Challenge #7 - Protest Song

    V1 outside in the cold on A Friday night looking up to a velvet sky everybuddys out counting the stars i see stars on the ground COUNTING stars in the sky the time is 11:59 the dates december 31st 1999 10 SECONDS LEFT untill we pass our time into the future 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1 V2 welcome to the 20th century where technology will grow and become a must necessity we'll all separate and reconnect smartphones and faster internet now were stuck together in the world wide web well i guess that's the way it was supposed to be it 2000 and 17 and i wonder still what the future is yet to be C.1 smart phones dumb people what is the future what is the sequel more work more work less fun less fun more work less fun V3 I hope we still find time for each other spend time with our loved ones put down the distractions go out and take action stop taking my time id rather be in nature than inside time to start taking whats mine time to start taking whats mine C.2 less work more fun more fun less work we the people are the future another sequel so more fun more fun more fun more fun
  8. I challenge any rapper to send for me

    you dont deserve a second verse it woulda damaged ya your not a challenger a beast your an amateur not a savage not a good rap battler why ill take my slow time takin the mic from this embbaresment then when im done throw it back at him like a javeline impacting in to your abdomen sending you travling into the backof a blacked out ambulance now were gambling the chances of having an accident are staggering were close to crashing into traffic were currently battling with good thing im only imagining this a cotamamated bandage wrapped around your neck as were strangliing it you think the story over well im still unravelling bitch
  9. Today id like to go to the music shop close to my place, and purchace a mic. the main use will be for lyrics to be recorded over rap, but with a smooth style. however as a producer id also love to be able to record random sounds, to create original samples, to manipulate. i also have three or 4 musical instruments in my house, which would be nice to record. is there a mic where i can fulfill all my recording needs. the number one priorty is, and would be, for rap. im clueless about mics, so wouldnt know which type to use. im currently using an old karaoke mic, which is ok, but kinda sucks. moneys not an issue, lack of knowledge is alo
  10. I challenge any rapper to send for me

  11. I challenge any rapper to send for me

    i am phenomenal with literacy literally lyrically unstoppablefollow me force im a role model real responsiblephysically i hold a 6 pack on top of all of my abdominals
  12. I challenge any rapper to send for me

    put lyrics. its fine to put text with audio,its text on its own that's not allowed
  13. Alo vs Scoob

    Infectiously spread into to there minds I see clearly now i realise iv got real eyes I see the signs Races erasing the traces of racism False educating there raising our children to race against other races A mason free mason amazing the places there traced in Training for trading the trailing plane are detonating Twin towers structures are failing bombs placed below in the basement Media paid statements Rationalization creating cognitive displacement Why were racist towards nations your mom your mom your mom your mom is an amazing woman she raised you into the world that is strong
  14. Alo vs Force

    im a lyrical king there isnt one line where im not lion like tiger in the woods i swing white against the hood you dont relion your self so let me call you debby downer wannab,able to suckseed as a king but your just like prince ever since you tryed to swallow eminems flow all in one go you little hoe mo more money more media statements scoob if you hear me bitch im still waiting im very inpatient so ill take this battle with force as training but in the end ill leave with noone remaining im phenomenal with literacy literally lyricaly unstoppable follow me force im a rolemodel real responsibble physically i hold a 6 pack on my abdominal ill open up a can an whoop ass put the other 5 into a bag beat youuntil your bodydents into the grass im not a sorry guy but i appolgise for speaking out of place with such a violent ryhme im still tryna counteract violence (count iraqs) why dont we just stop and take a moment of silence
  15. I challenge any rapper to send for me

    im a lyrical king there isnt one line where im not lion (lying) like tiger in the woods i swing white against the hood you dont relion (rely on) your self so let me call you debby downer. wannabe,able to suckseed (succeed)as a king but your just like prince, ever since you tried to swallow Eminems flow, all in one go, you little hoe mo, more money more media statements scoob if you hear me bitch im still waiting im very inpatient so ill take this battle with force as training but in the end ill leave with no one remaining im phenomenal with literacy literally lyricaly unstoppable follow me force im a rolemodel real responsibble physically i hold a 6 pack on my abdominal ill open up a can an whoop ass put the other 5 into a bag beat you until your body dents into the grass im not a sorry guy but i apologise for speaking out of place with such a violent rhyme im still trying to counteract violence (count iraqs) why dont we just stop and take a moment of silence
  16. I challenge any rapper to send for me

    there you go i wrote the lyrics today, so this is just a quick example. i need to practice the flow before i record properly. and i still need to finish writing the whole tune but im hoping youll put a response first so i can add it to my bars to reply back with my first official responce
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    develop one from scratch bro, take things like the way you speak normally, style of writing and beat type. you should develop something new. your rhyme structure choice of syllables etc will influence your flow
  18. I challenge any rapper to send for me

    you lot are supposed to send for me first
  19. MUSIC DAW BROKEN HELP!!

    I just opened up fruity loops to make a beat, i switched over the asio settings from headphones to monitors as i was recording vocals a few days before. i started of picking some sounds and building the skeleton (basic structure) id currently put it hats and fast hats, by the time i got to kick i noticed the sounds were distorted typically a sample rate problem i can resolve by changing the sample rate. i then noticed after that the speed of the whole track slowed and distorted, although changing the sample rate does fix the problem for about 10 15seconds it comes back. i havent yet tried restarting computer or even my daw, which i will be doing after i write this. i hope its not time to get my pc virus cleaned as it has been playing up a bit lately main thing is it wont turn of when i press shutdown i have to hold down the button. if anyone can help please do alo
  20. MUSIC DAW BROKEN HELP!!

    lol it fixed after a restart i think it was to do with cpu and memory cause i noticed that was peaking before now its fine thanks guys..richard what you said makes sense because the last time i used fl was for recording so maybe it needed to clear from recording last time
  21. OUTSS - LIVE SESSIONS EP.2

    this might be the last thing you expect to hear but i think grime would be a good genre for you with the type of lyrics you write. you remind me of this uk artist called majical. nice freestyle keep it up
  22. Rhythm Groove 2

    beats funky, reminds me of the type of beats id jam to on my keyboard when i was younger
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    i like the lyrics there good but im of put by the imitation flow of Eminem. if your good at writing lyrics then a good flow should follow. a unique flow will you set you apart from other artists. it may just be the type of beat because somebeats kinda force you to have a certain flow however established artist will leave there own unique mark on any beat
  24. Stop Drug Overdoses Rap

    ino this is random but i wanna say it lol was gonna say it on my first post. i really like the intro of the video when your walking with a bible and umbrella reminded me of one time i was gonna go to church and instead of carrying my big bible in the rain with umbrella which i was debating i took a small psalms book in my pocket. if it rains again im taking my big bible with umbrella lol
  25. Glimpse Of My Life-AP

    your of beat, lack a flow and sound unclear certain parts. lyrics are not really on point either. i like the beat and your sound but id recommend a different style beat and writing too that beat exclusively
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