Harry

yea man gs tho

these lyrics are solid they flow well and the content is there some pretty good imagery and references in there too i would focus on rhymes and tecnicality so use some more multis to keep consistencey and add some internals to keep a solid structure bar in bar out

i got pure hate lets call it ice in my veins look in my eyes what they say take a knife slice your veins take blades to your own face so you cry the blood and feel the pain you inflict on me see my brains derelict from freedom i keep smellin shit you give me i feel constantly peed on and when it gets too far i go full retard my respect is resented i defend my rep through the heckles im in shackles earning sheckles worth three pence release me or i go deep vent lose my cool like air vents i was spared my parent dont care about my carelessness im barely living but im barely dead it scares me heckless it scares me senseless the idea of being on my deathbed but all you haters do is ignite me till my heads in flames burn me alive till i got a blackened shredded brain . . #HOOK All I wanna do is walk away, Cause I don't wanna lie to you. Something in your eye says "Please, Don't go... But I just wanna walk away... Cause if I stay I'm gonna end up hurting you... And I don't wanna break your heart, baby... . . everytime you stick a knife in my bare heart everytime you twist that knife and collect blood everytime you laugh at my pain and open my scars with your blades and bring darkness to days and plaster my face and my arms that you break coz im a cast away from breaking a f*cking castaway but im dangerous i aint playing i aint shaving at my veins for you to fart at my grave and dance when ive fainted passed out from the pain im on a farm in a cage in a pharmacy in a rage coz they wont sell me shit coz im underrage and then i sit in class in a strange place scribblin rhymes on my papers expectin for an A grade and then i come home and get hate in my face screamed at for ages forced signing mental health statements stealing 20’s from my moms purse to run away with and then i go to my safe place and the only thing i get is degraded . . #HOOK All I wanna do is walk away, Cause I don't wanna lie to you. Something in your eye says "Please, Don't go... But I just wanna walk away... Cause if I stay I'm gonna end up hurting you... And I don't wanna break your heart, baby... . . im at a stage where im sayin f*ck the world and its haters im stuck in a swirl where im fading in and out of consciousness waiting am i wrong to be grateful and say grace every meal pray every evening jesus please dont leave me dear god im breathing but every breaths deceiving i gasp for air my lungs are bleeding is this for all the times i f*cked up recently mucked up the streets i lived even keyed a mercedes i cant help it the stress its taking place over intuition made me brainless making me crazy taking turns to have rage fits even my raps are the same shit i hate this i hate that my subject matter dosnt matter no one even gives a fake shit i dont fake shit i take shit from you and my fake friends every f*cking day bitch but im trapped blocked away in unlockable space i wish i could just turn my f*cking back and walk away . . #HOOK All I wanna do is walk away, Cause I don't wanna lie to you. Something in your eye says "Please, Don't go... But I just wanna walk away... Cause if I stay I'm gonna end up hurting you... And I don't wanna break your heart, baby... heres the recording https://soundcloud.com/harryweintroub/walk-away