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Dani

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    Girls, longboarding, music, drawing, art.
  • Location
    United States of America
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  2. Dani

    Can someone help me know how to use this site? 

    1. Buck

      Hi Dani. I'm new here and happened on your post. 

      You asked for critique so here are a couple things. I think you need to focus more on one idea and develop it. You are using mixed ideas and metaphors. One example would be "you're lost at sea" but"need to be free ". I'm doing this from my iPhone so I don't have the words in front of me. I hope this helps a little.   

    2. Islandwriter

      Hi, Dani. I wanted to talk about your lyrics but can't find where to do so. Sorry.

      David

      PM me if you want to talk more off the forum.

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