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Jenn

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Jenn last won the day on August 9

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About Jenn

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    Female
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    United States of America

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    ayyye I don't know
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    Everything.

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  1. In From The Dark

    I used to write notes in my phone like crazy. anytime a lyric came into my head.. it doesn't happen that much anymore. I've kind of learned to filter and direct it better, and sit down and fully acknowledge something when it comes across. The only time I'm successful with forced writing is when I've had an idea brewing in my head, or have started it at a previous time.. so I know what you mean
  2. In From The Dark

    unfortunately i don't have the capability of singing freely.. I can only do it when everyone's out of the house. But I agree, most times my best melodic lines/lyrics come out of pure improvisation. And it's how I know a song is working. But mostly, I'm able to have a general idea of where I want to go with a song, both lyrically and musically. But lately, I've just had noooo idea. It's like all my musicality has left.. it's kinda scary haha. I think the answer is just to keep trying though. To push through it until I find something. And maybe choosing a topic that I'm not familiar with... It's funny, whenever this happens, I tend to write about nostalgia.. maybe being able to go back to where I was musically. Anyway.. strange.. Thank you
  3. In From The Dark

    This is in a style that I wouldn't usually write in!! I was also going for MonoStones style in the instrumentals so this is actually me going out on a limb here and it feels terribly uncomfortable
  4. Emily

    I agree with zyzzyva.. when I read the chorus, my stomach actually dropped. and that's hard to do. However, the verses were a little too impersonal and seemed like they were written just so that they would rhyme Honestly, I would start over and just keep the chorus. I don't think the verses even need to rhyme. Just have a good flow and emotion and you'll have it.. Just my thoughts... And I'm sorry if you feel like this.. at least you're putting it into song
  5. Embrace The Gloom (a work in progress)

    I'm not the best critiquer for lyrics.. but this is what I would chance. take it or leave it of course good luck
  6. In From The Dark

    I've been having suchhhhhhh bad writers block.. so of course, I'm forcing myself to write. This started out as me trying to copy MonoStone's style, but it took a shape of its own... (I am also not a genius like him :() But... I had a lot of trouble getting these out and would greatly appreciate help shaping them up. I really have no idea what to do for the prechorus, but I think it builds the song well.. and I love the drums [verse] do you remember those golden hills when we sat and watched the world move by us no, we didn’t let any of it bother us I can still remember the sun rising and there was hope and promise and love to be lost no, we didn’t let any of it bother us now we let it bother us [prechorus] All we have are the memories We could start again Is it too soon to see? This time, I'll do all I can [chorus] Will someone bring us home for the night If we go now we can still find the light will someone bring us in from the dark back to the days when everything was alright [verse] I can see it now painting the hills new colors to match the world as it goes we won’t let it bother us Can you see it too? the sun setting bringing in the stars with the night, it’s beautiful we don’t let it bother us now we don’t let it bother us [prechorus] All we have are the memories We could start again Is it too soon to see? This time, I'll do all I can [chorus] Will someone bring us home for the night If we go now we can still find the light will someone bring us in from the dark back to the days when everything was alright Here is a rough sketch of the music.. I'm not absolutely loving it at the moment. But.. https://soundcloud.com/jennifer-kaitlyn-doll/in-from-the-dark/s-Liq41
  7. A Concept...

    oh my god
  8. A Concept...

    ..... ivE BEEN OUT
  9. A Concept...

    You guys are freaking killing me hahahahahha ok ok ok I've come up with a new song idea if you don't mind dek ... im going to try to make a song sound like yours.... with all electric instruments so it should be interesting if you'll allow me of course
  10. A Concept...

    See the only difference between me and you is that there would be a storm on the sea as well
  11. A Concept...

    I sure hope it's his real name!!! That's what I've been calling him haha
  12. A Concept...

    Dek is who I dream to sound like
  13. A Concept...

    funny enough, I'm having a really difficult time coming up with words/melodies for the first half the second half has been easy This may be abandoned though ... can't be forced thabk you
  14. Hey.... I'm in st Pete... sometimes ..
  15. My Name Is David

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