Smorgan

Why do my lyrics always look incohesive And have no rythm? Sucks that im not so good with words any advice

I've never been able to understand, I understand that a Falsetto is headvoice, its like pushing your larynx up a bit and making a high pitch. But Chest and Stomach voice, i dont understand Can someone explain?

I can't seam to get drum beats down. I have no clue why, they turn out sounding kinda shitty. anytips? edit---- I am currently using built in drums, i dont really know what its called but it using the grid. To me it always sound electronic, too digital sounding.

Mostly just to get a feel of what the whole sound should be like and a little recording. Budget would be very steep atm.

How would i go about putting together a little beat or something for backup to my guitar to figure out how a song would sound? Drums are to expensive and i live in a tiny town, no buddies with these instruments