The Rev Jaystone

Ty for critique it's how I wrote the music to it. The chorus comes in with the hook. Anthemic sounding if that makes sence. But I could give lyrics more depth. I tried to write it simple but ty

Here's a song I wrote to express an attempt at a country southern rock song. All I play it for seem to like it. Very memorable chorus. Critique please. I'm the Hick By The Rev Jaystone I live in the country on a gravel road My wife my dog leave us alone We take a pride in our simplicity To Hunt and fish live naturally My heart is free and I believe In my God guns and my family So Why can't you show me some respect Cause don't you know that I'm the hick Chorus So don't you tempt me Cause I will recompense Yes I am the hick That'll kick your ass you wimp Like a gnat you're bothering me Speaking with harsh words foolishly I warned you before that I'm the hick Now It's fight night in the sticks Chorus. Repeat Bridge I live by what is an unwritten code To drink Jim Beam so very ice cold Fire up some good ol homegrown If you dislike us then leave us alone Chorus repeat Yes I am the crazy hick No I'm not a red neck Yes I'm the crazy hick That kicked your ass you wimp

This is a song I wrote about a relationship coming to its conclusion. I wish I had a singer who'd wanna work on this and my many other songs. So check these lyrics out let me know. Ty The Rev. Jaystone Falling By The Rev Jaystone and she says to mewhy are you still herehave you not noticedthe sign are everywherePre Chorusand she has struck a nervetook more than she deservedstealing my heartbeatgone but I'm breathingChorusSO CAN YOU TAKE ME AWAYMEMORIES I CAN'T ERASEAND NO ONE CAN FEEL MY PAIN I FEEL LIKE IM FALLINGSo tired of chasing flowers that Wilt away and she says to me there is no other wayPre ChorusAnd she has struck a nerve took more than she deserveStealing my heartbeatYour arrows still piercingChorusSO CAN YOU TAKE ME AWAYMEMORIES I CAN'T ERASEAND NO ONE CAN FEEL MY PAIN I FEEL LIKE I AM FALLING