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lubeck

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About lubeck

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    Oasis, The Beatles, The La's, The Rolling Stones, Ride, David Bowie, The Kinks, Led Zeppelin, T-Rex, Belle & Sebastian, The Sex Pistols, The Verve, Alvvays, Supergrass, Neil Young, The Smiths, The Strokes, Bob Dylan, The Stone Roses, The Zombies, Burt Bacharach, etc.
  1. Hi ! Thanks for answering I think the piano part is very good ! Here's the track: Verses : Am - Em - Fadd9 - C Pre Chorus: Em - G - Em - Fadd9 - Em - G - C - F - G Chorus : Am - Em - Fadd9 - C Outro : Am - Em Could you play the melody on the piano and PM me ? Thank you !
  2. Hi Ben ! I see a bit the Dylan's influences there. I especially like the guitar, I get some Desire-era vibe. Good job
  3. Hey ! Cool to see a fellow french on the forum. The song sounds very professional production wise. Just for curiosity, what bands are you're inspired from ?
  4. Thanks for the feedback guys ! This is only little acoustic versions but I hope I'd record a proper version very soon !
  5. Hi ! I'm looking for a pianist to play on one of my tracks. I wonder how it will sound on a piano and I wish some of my tunes to have piano on it. Of course, I'm taking it as an exchange and if anyone needs a collaboration for a guitar part or to sing, I'll be happy to contribuate !
  6. Hi ! There is an other demo, called Mrs Brown. Actually two versions. One just acoustic, the other with a drum machine. Lyrics Here's the story of this oh, sweet confusion The only one that takes my pain away And when she came with doctors in profusion You knew that all your problems will fade away Hey, hey ! Mrs Brown ! I only whisper that it was our time Hey, hey ! Mr Brown ! Could you sit there and take the white line And when she lets her present, through the tissue She gives me a lovely whisper, it was all fine And while she gave all my dreams through the issue She knew that all this story was all mine Hey, hey ! Mrs Brown ! I only whisper that it was our time It's gonna end my invitation, and gonna my reputation (Not finished lyrics) I'd like to know what bands that song reminds you of, please
  7. Hi ! There is an other demo, called Mrs Brown. Actually two versions. One just acoustic, the other with a drum machine. Lyrics Here's the story of this oh, sweet confusion The only one that takes my pain away And when she came with doctors in profusion You knew that all your problems will fade away Hey, hey ! Mrs Brown ! I only whisper that it was our time Hey, hey ! Mr Brown ! Could you sit there and take the white line And when she lets her present, through the tissue She gives me a lovely whisper, it was all fine And while she gave all my dreams through the issue She knew that all this story was all mine Hey, hey ! Mrs Brown ! I only whisper that it was our time It's gonna end my invitation, and gonna my reputation (Not finished lyrics) I'd like to know what bands that song reminds you of, please
  8. Hi ! I like the feel of it. Sounds raw. I see what other people mean about that last chord of the verse, it didn't put me off that much but you're free to change or add anything. Globally, a nice song.
  9. I like the flow and the groovy attitude to it more than anything. I find the "We don't we screw the revolution" line quite catchy aswell, especially the way you sing "revolution"' Good funky track.
  10. Thanks to all for the feedbacks It's a really simple (and a badly recorded) demo of of the first song I've written. It might sound a bit boring but the tune will have strings on it that'll make it better. The bones for a song are (it's got verse/pre chorus/chorus) here but it might sound a bit without dynamic. I'll see if I'll record an other try in some days.
  11. Hi ! I like the melody. I like even more the folk feel, a bit Dylan-ish. This sounded well produced to my ears, the chord progression is easy but as it is with 90 % of folk songs and it works well ! Good job !
  12. Hi ! Thanks for the feedback. I agree the lyrics aren't the best. However, I must say they are quite honest and were written without thinking "oh ok let's write about love". It was just what I was feeling at the time.
  13. Hey ! Quite like the agrgesive acosutic guitars. Very cool solo, could go on for a long time.
  14. Hi ! I like the guitar and the drums a lot on this song. However, I agree with what Nick said above, the vocals are too far behind in the mix (I know it's one of my problems aswell ahah). Keep it up !
  15. Hi ! Great guitar strumming, very good vocals. I like the atmosphere of the tune, the chord progression is cool aswell. My favourite part is the refrain, which adds a lot of "pressure" (don't know if it's the right word) to the song. Good song !