Leo

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About Leo

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  • Birthday 10/31/1982

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    https://leoandthedude.bandcamp.com

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  • Gender
    Male
  • Location
    Australia

Music Background

  • Band / Artist Name
    Leo Sherman
  • Musical / Songwriting / Music Biz Skills
    Singer/Songwriter
  • Musical Influences
    the Smiths, Beck, Blind Faith, Cat Stevens, Johnny Cash, INXS, Elton John, Talking heads, Arlo Guthrie and The Band

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  • Songwriting Collaboration
    Interested

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  1. Hey there, Here is a 1+1 demo for the above lyrics. I would appreciate any comments. Thanks https://soundcloud.com/leosherman/brand-new/s-7XIAn
  2. Hey Sreyashi, Thanks for your comments, Those certainly are good questions. I need to have a thinker on that one, 1. your'e definitely right. 2.Yep that sounds better. 3.I like it as well. I feel I went the 'wrong way about' with those lines. Thank you very much. There's a demo coming.
  3. Lyrics written, just now, to a melody I'm working on for the past couple of days. Thanks for listening, thanks for commenting, Brand new What ever I find, I try to forget, To wake every day, Brand new, Keeping this way, I could leap through my days, Not taking the past, With me, I used to pretend, To not miss the blues, That's why I have failed, Again and again, and here in the end, all I will say, I hope we will meet, Brand new, And time went on by, But I stayed the same, I tried to change you, You wouldn't, You kept it all, No matter how small, Rolled it up in a ball, To play with, I used to pretend, To not miss the blues, That's why I have failed, Again and again, and here in the end, all I will say, I hope we will meet, Brand new, So I take my turn, Trying to learn, To take but a piece, With me, To wake every day, and try to let go, Of worries or foe, Beat them, I used to pretend, To not miss the blues, That's why I have failed, Again and again, and here in the end, all I will say, I hope we will meet, Brand new,
  4. Hey Alex, I think your song is pretty good. It's not really my kind of musical style, but I'm hooked. You got a very nice singing voice, and I like the overall structure and story of the song. While I can't really offer much advice about arrangement (except that I would keep it light, drum and base), I have a few small remarks regarding the lyrics. I would suggest replacing the word 'love' with 'be'. I think it's wrong to say it that way. The scene you describe of 'being with out him' feels unrelated to me. I just don't understand what's going on. I would suggest telling about regular day to day life, but it's not the same 'with out him'. I would drop the soon, the line feels to packed to me. I really enjoyed your song, Good luck,
  5. Hey folks, Our dated internet radio interview with a radio legend. https://www.sparemin.com/myrecording/2681/_branch_match_id=367472620246596598 Thanks
  6. Thanks Rudi, I think they had a lyrics once. But, if you choose an individual song you will get the lyrics for it. Sorry for the inconvenience.
  7. Hey Blitz, Do you write/play/record music? Not that you have to. Welcome
  8. I think in art there shouldn't be any rules. Also in life, but that is a different matter. Sure, some might find the change in lyrics or structure annoying. But others will appreciate the continues growth. In other words, you can't please everybody, unless you get them all drunk. I say, play the song the way you feel it should play.
  9. Origional post edited again.
  10. Hey scotsman, Thanks for your comment, it's a good point. Do you think it might work if the line will go "I feel lonley" instead of being? Getting a little intimate. I feel lonley when I have a big fight with my partner and were not talking. Evenn though technically im not alone. Thanks again
  11. Thanks for your comments Arty, I think I understand your remark on 'limitless'. I must admit instinctively i likr the way limitless rolls of my tongue. It might be a getting too used to domething sort of thing. So, I will try and play the song with "life had not limits back then" for a bit and see if I can make it work for me. Thanks a bounch for your critique. I will fix the link, thanks.
  12. Hey Jenn, Youve got a nice singing voice. I can only offer the following amature advice: 1. Relax your shoulders. 2. Be aware of breading in between phrases. 3. Don't drink and record. 4. I'm sure there is better advice online. Happy hangover
  13. Hey Gecko, Sounds interesting. Cant wait to hear your music mate.
  14. I wouldn't mind writing lyrics for this... if you are interested. Send me link to download and Ill send you a draft for your thoghts.