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Alex Witt

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  1. Glimpse Of My Life-AP

    I just dropped this sick rap on #Rapchat. I call it 'Glimpse Of My Life- AP' listen here: http://rapch.at/stbg/Dt2QdtDvvD
  2. Fact or Fiction(Finished)

    VERSE 1 Fact or fiction I'll leave you in the past. Like I'm ditchin class. That's a fact because I don't know how to act. I live with a bunch of drug addicts who love to smack. Their lips and act like no one is listenin. I react by sittin back and wishin. That I could go back to when there wasn't so much opposition. This position has led me to be malnutrition. It feels like a curse but I just spit a verse. And everything seems to disburse. From my conscious. Let's be honest. You don't know what's racing through my oddest. f*cked up personal conscious. I am really self-conscious. Of the continuous nonsense. I don't think of the consequences. Of my obnoxious responses. I've never had a guilty conscious. Because half the time I am semi-conscious. From all of the pills I be poppin. Chorus If you could be in my shoes for just 1 day you will realize it's hard to say. I love you in every shape and way. Upside down and beatin down in so many ways. Buy atleast I know the path I wanna take. On my knees I pray everyday, bless me lord and show me the way. Before it's to late and I can't find a way out of this place. Verse 2 I could tip over the edge . like the movie over the hedge. I'm a squirrel your a nut Imma dig up old hurt. And slam you in the dirt. Then dig you back up when I'm ready for my desert. Idk what led me to wanna tip toe to the ledge. In a blink of an eye. You could be tied up in all of the lies. And left behind as a chalked outline . I'm not gonna lie I personally intellectually don't find this fine. Your a faggot who stands with your tail between your legs and acts all dramatic. So stop with all the static Before I transform back into and addict. If I do I'll rip you up and store you in my attic. I don't run or hide behind a bamboo fence. I don't give a f*ck what you sense. Imma just give you my true 2 sense. That's full of dense knowledge. Because I'm on my way to graduate from college. And your stuck in a 5th grader's knowledge. I'm like a burnt fry there's no goin back to being nice. I add a little spice. To the Everyday life. There's a little spike. When I add my own flavors of life. It's like a knife is removed my heart. It feels likes it's ready to start. Back up again to begin a new life. Chorus 2 If you could be in my shoes for just one day You will realize it's hard to say I love you in every shape and way. Upside down and beatin to the ground in so many ways. But at least I know the pathway I wanna take. On my knees I pray everyday, bless me lord and show me the way. Before it's to late and i can't Find a way out of the place. Verse 3 I stand on my boulder. Head High with broad shoulders. Because I know who I am a man. with a plan. To take whatever they said I could have. And I will settle for nothing half. No one can take this. You will have to kill me before you rake it up and take it. That's all I am sayin. Now show me you ain't playin. And do what you were sayin. Shut up and listen to my order. Your the peasant in the present and I'm your master with your casket. You can diss me with whatever you may say. But I gotta warn you that will be a big mistake. It will be the last thing you will be able to say. And you'll be left in dismay. This is the first day of May. 6 days before my birthday. So you better get me a cake to eat and not hurt me. Or I'll beat you when your 23. Replace the 2 with a 3, and 3 with a 2. And that's the age you were f*ckin beatin Me too. Chorus/Outro If you could be in my shoes for just 1 day. You will realize it's hard to say. I love you in every shape and way. Upside down and beatin down in so many ways, But at least I know the path I wanna take. On my knees I pray everyday. Bless me lord and show me the way. Before it's to late and I can't find a way out of this place. Lord save me from the darkest days. Not sure what type of beat yet, add any suggestions if you have any,thanks!
  3. Honest Critique (not the finished product)

    Just as above this is dope asf Bro, this the type of song that I could smoke to at night. Just need to work more on your delivery.
  4. Black Sheep

    I really like your flow man, good rhyme scheme. Youshould try to put more words inside a bar that rhyme, and still accomplish what your are trying to say.
  5. Beautiful Pain Ft Eminiem & Sia

    Great bars and story! Really wish the MP3 worked so I can hear how it sounds!
  6. Insomnia

    I really like your flow and details in it. Nice structure too. Keep up the flow and keep using a wide range of vocabulary.
  7. Fact Or Fiction

    Thank you so much man!! Really appreciate it. I just started doing this about a month ago, so I just wrote whatever came to my mind and diddnt even think about the structure and stuff like that. I am definitely going to do what you said and do that hw lol. Once again I really appreciate all that you have provided me to better my self as a writer.
  8. Psychos Halloween

    Thank you really appreciate it. I already listen to Ritts and his flow and rhymes are sick! Can't wait to check your stuff out!
  9. Psychos Halloween

    Thanks for the advice. I am looking for any type of critique.
  10. Psychos Halloween

    Thanks
  11. Psychos Halloween

    Yeah Ik. What are you trying to say
  12. Psychos Halloween

    Gobble gobble shut up with the squabble, be a model drink this bottle and let your body wobble. Collossal, awful yeah that's yo nozzle. Your like ol Donald except with a f*cked up personal novel. Let me remodel your nozzle because you look so goggle. Imma grab my pliers and turn you back into the 1963 Michael myers. Trick or treat welcome to my street it's nice to meet. Imma beat you and eat under the sheet just to see if it taste a little like wheat. Defeat, repeat cause I'm an elite your pathetic and incomplete. Shh be discreet and take a backseat because you can't compete Pete. So go on and retreat like a sheep. I'm goin to preheat the oven to reheat petes legs, arms, and stomach to eat before I go back to sleep. Stick my cleat on your throat to watch you choke like you ain't got no control. I've been mistreat so I feasted on a deceased priest and mix his blood with some yeast to make him some treats. Take you up to my suite and unleash the beast. Hit you wit my meat and make you shriek, leak and maybe bleach you if I feel the need, and repeat if I don't feel complete. Let's take a sneak peek, but first let's have a family feast, and eat Pete.
  13. Fact Or Fiction

    Fact or fiction I'll leave you in the past like I'm ditchin class. that's a fact because I don't know how to act. I live with a bunch of drug addicts who love to smack there lips and act like no one is listenin. It feels like a curse but I just spit a verse and everything seems to disburse from my conscious. And let's be honest you don't know what's racing through conscious. I'm really self conscious of the continuous nonsense I think of and I don't think of the consequences of my obnoxious responses. I do not have a guilty conscious because half the time I am semiconscious from all of the pills I be poppin. I could tip over the edge like the movie over the hedge. I'm a squirrel your a nut imma dig up old hurt to put you in the dirt. Then dig you up when I'm ready for my desert. In a blink of an eye you could be tied up with all of the lies, And left behind as a chalked outline. Your a faggot who stands with your tail between your legs and acts all dramatic. So stop with all the static before I turn back in to an addict and rip you up and store u up in my attic. I don't run or hind behind a bamboo fence, I don't give a f*ck what you sense Imma give you my true 2 sense thats full of dense knowledge because I'm on my way to graduate from college and your stuck in a 5th grader's knowledge. I'm like a burnt fry theres no goin back to being nice. I add a little spice to the everyday life. There's a little spike in my life when I add my own flavors of life. It's like my heart is ready to start back up again and start a new life. I stand on my boulder, head high with broad shoulders because I know who I am I'm a man with a plan to take what they said I couldn't have and I will settle for nothin half. No one can take this You will have to kill me before you take it, and that's all I am sayin, now show me you ain't playin and do what you're sayin. Shut up and listen to my order your the peasant in the present and Im your master with your casket. I guess it's back to the slavery days back when blacks use to slave everyday and escape if they may. But now it's Mexicans who are in the way so I say lets take it back to the good ol days and make them my slaves for the rest of my living days. You can diss me with whatever you may say, but I gotta warn you that will be a big mistake, it will be the last thing you will ever say, and Youll be left in dismay. This is the first day of May. 6 days before my birthday so you better get me a cake to eat and not hurt me. Or I'll beat you when your 23. Replace 2 with a 3 and 3 with a 2 and that's the age I'm f*ckin beatin you.
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