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About Mblack

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  1. https://youtu.be/XE-ysB_F2xY
  2. Really nice, I dig it. Smooth vocals with a nice mix that I can see getting a crowd going. Great job. If you're into rap can you check out my two songs. Me, Myself & I, I wrote about my son's real life experiences and then wrote a sequel called 6x8 as a warning to what can happen to him if he don't learn from his mistakes.
  3. Me, Myself & I

    Thank you, really appreciate it.
  4. FAKE LOVE

    I definitely agree with the squeeky wheel comment. I would eliminate it all together or just don't make it so pronounce. Once I got past that and you started singing, it was great. You have a beautiful voice.
  5. Me, Myself & I

    Thank you, I appreciate your feedback
  6. Me, Myself & I

    Thank you. I'm contemplating maybe re-doing it all over. Get someone new to rap it and make new beats. I've been told by a few that it lacks production and breaks. Needs a rapper with more attitude.
  7. Me, Myself & I

    I wrote this rap song back in 2016 dedicated and inspired by my son who had some rough experiences in the early stages of his life. I told his story through music in hopes that other kids can connect to it and not get involved in drugs.
  8. 6x8

    6 x 8 is about not learning from the first time about getting into trouble and drugs with deep regret wishing you had your life back. Freedom and peace. I wrote this song as a sequel to my first rap song Me, Myself & I back in 2016 dedicated and inspired by my son who had some rough experiences in the early stages of his life.
  9. Can we have your story?

    I've always enjoyed songwriting. I've always written country music songs and then I wrote my first rap song back in 2016 dedicated and inspired by my son who had some rough experiences in the early stages of his life. I consider myself to be a true story lyric writer so I base all my lyrics off my experiences or the others around me.
  10. Wow, this is great!!! There's absolutely no critique needed.
  11. I'm Not the Bad Guy

    Great lyrics and and the chorus is catchy. You also have a really good voice.
  12. 6x8 Written by Michael Black https://www.facebook.com/Michael-Black-686133418235440/ CHORUS: C’mon yeah, c’mon it’s like that, It’s like that No mirrors to look at in my 6x8 Surrounded by hard walls that can’t even break My knuckles, my knuckles They gone pay for mistakes I want my life back now But I know it’s too late No mirror to look at in my 6x8 Surrounded by hard walls I can’t even break My knuckles, my knuckles They gone pay for mistakes I want my life back now But I know it’s too late With my head to my knees And the gavel they slamming down Before the man in the gown I knew what was going down I had my life back once But look how I took it for granted I had my freedom and peace But damn it for a moment I had it An addict addicted to trouble Dealing and smoking dope And now I’m only dealing with Noodles and a pack of smokes I had the comfort of home to pee where it’s quiet Now I’m pissing in the prison Surrounded by riots CHORUS: No mirror to look at in my 6x8 Surrounded by hard walls that can’t even break My knuckles, my knuckles They gone pay for mistakes I want my life back now But I know it’s too late No mirror to look at in my 6x8 Surrounded by hard walls that can’t even break My knuckles, my knuckles They gone pay for mistakes I want my life back now But I know it’s too late I stayed hungry Every day they feeding you crap But beggars can not be choosers So I’m throwing it back In line to take a fast shower They only give you minutes At home I swear I used to take a half an hour Tighty whities man I don’t even wear these Boxers, designer belts and Pants hung to my knees Had the comforts at home freedom and peace But I’m in my 6x8 And don’t even know my release CHORUS: No mirror to look at in my 6x8 Surrounded by hard walls I can’t even break My knuckles, my knuckles They gone pay for mistakes I want my life back now But I know it’s too late No mirror to look at in my 6x8 Surrounded by hard walls I can’t even break My knuckles, my knuckles They gone pay for mistakes I want my life back now But I know it’s too late Couldn’t stay away from trouble Or learn right from wrong Should of listened to the words Of another song I was young and stupid I spent some time in Juvie In the big house now Where I swore I would never would be Wishing I was at work And making all that bread And listening to the speakers Pumping in my head Ain’t no beats up here Some people rapping now Sometimes I hear them shout Get me the f*ck out CHORUS: No mirror to look at in my 6x8 Surrounded by hard walls I can’t even break My knuckles, my knuckles They gone pay for mistakes I want my life back now But I know it’s too late No mirror to look at in my 6x8 Surrounded by hard walls I can’t even break My knuckles, my knuckles They gone pay for mistakes I want my life back now But I know it’s too late
  13. 6x8

    Thank you ImKen. I was listening to your song called Can You Hear Me. What a great song!!! Loved everything about it
  14. Me, Myself & I

    Wow thanks so much, it's so appreciated
  15. Rap Book [public]

    You can tell you've got talent by how you were able to create each line with the words you used. Great job
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