Roi252

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  1. Hi again! This is my 2nd time posting here... Hope you'll like this song I wrote over a month ago. I would love to hear any opinion! Also, sorry if I have mistakes with my English, corrections are very welcomed. Lost/ RoiThat one time, you were talking to meI love you but you set me freeLosing my heart, losing the aim, losing the gameLosing it all 'cause you were my friendDoes love lasts forever?Does pain ever pass?I want you now foreverBut now I am lostI heard about people breathing airI heard life is not fairHeard about food, water and sleepBut I don't care, the pain is too deepDoes love lasts forever?Does pain ever pass?I want you now foreverBut now I am lostWill life get better?Would you come back?I want you now foreverBut my heart's at stakeI want to start breathingI want to see the sunI want living and dreamingDon't tell me that we're doneDoes love lasts forever?Does pain ever pass?I want you now foreverBut now I am lostWill life get better?Would you come back?I want you now foreverYou put my heart at stakeBut now I lost itI feel like a dopeTell me that you found itI can use some hope
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    Well, thank you again! I actually did not think I made it clear this song is about a good friend... My main focus was on the emotions, and not the exact story. It should be general, fit into several stories (besides mine) and change according to one's perspective. Funny thing, I like this song more and more with time, becoming on of my favorites... And yes, you are right, this story has been told like a million times. But ,as you said, million and one sounds about right to me LOL I'm also thinking about posting here another song soon. You are very nice, I'm glad to hear from you!
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    Hi retro! First of all, thank you so much for your kind reply! I'm very happy to know I did good with the English aspect of the song, I was a bit concerned about that... I can totally understand why it looks like just another song about "A singer who is just begging for another shot at someone who royally RUINED their life", I recieved a few comments like that before about this song. But... It is not EXACTLY that. It is similar, but if you look closely, and maybe I'm the only one seeing it, this song is about someone who ruined the singer's life, the singer is wishing for just one more shot, and yet is aware that this shot will never come. It contains hidden anger, frastration, and by saying "I hate to be - Be living without you" there is no asking for another chance, but hating the situation that cannot be changed. Talking about music, I actually have the music for this song in my head, pretty much... Hope to write it down, someday. I, actually, didn't think about the missing reason. Thank you. You maybe right about that. To be honest, this song is personal about my feelings, and was written about someone who I loved deeply, but we never had a relationship, beside being best friends. The only bondings between us were our strong and special friendship, and my love, who wasn't mutual. Thank you so much! Hope to keep hearing from you, and I'm so sorry for my LONG comment
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    Hello everyone, my name is Roi. This is my first time posting here I want to share with you this song I wrote about 2 weeks ago... Opinions are very welcomed! Also, my English isn't perfect, so any corrections on that matter are welcomed as well. I Hate to Be/ Roi [Verse 1] I miss my life, miss my feelings Miss you here, miss believing I miss those times, miss all out talks Miss the air, miss dreaming But you don't care - Why?! [Chorus] I need to see you one more time Need to feel your body against mine I want to look into your eyes Wanna hear your voice laughing with me But now you're gone, and I hate to be [Verse 2] One Friday morning, I woke up Thinking 'bout you, wanted to cheer you up But when we met, you just ignored - me Left without even talking to me But I… [Chorus] I need to see you one more time Need to feel your body against mine I want to look into your eyes Wanna hear your voice laughing with me But now you're gone, and I hate to be [Verse 3] Remember all the times you made me cry! In those two months, more than in my entire life And all those fears, I hate those times You messed up my life, I was in love But now I hate all my love [Chorus] I need to see you one more time Need to feel your body against mine I want to look into your eyes Wanna hear your voice laughing with me But now you're gone, and I hate to be [Bridge] Be afraid, looking so scared Be in love, with you and not someone else Be here writing 'bout you I hate to be - Be living without you [Outro] Oh Be living without you You Thank you for your time! Hope you liked it
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    Hi, My name is Roi, I'm almost 17, from Israel. I write lyrics to songs/ poems in both English and Hebrew. I would like to post here my songs (those I write in English, of course), and I will appreciate any replies, suggestions and opinions. I'm very sorry if my English isn't perfect in my songs as well as in my comments... Corrections on that matter will be very welcomed! Looking forward to knowing you all! It seems like a great place Roi.