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Giora Tal

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About Giora Tal

  • Rank
    Noob

Contact Methods

  • Website URL
    www.gioratal.com

Profile Information

  • Gender
    Male
  • Location
    United States of America
  • Interests
    Music, Blogging, Anchor, Radio

Music Background

  • Band / Artist Name
    Giora Tal
  • Musical / Songwriting / Music Biz Skills
    songwriting, singer, production
  • Musical Influences
    Bjork, Fiona apple, Tori Amos, Kate Bush, BANKS, Bat For Lashes

Collaboration

  • Songwriting Collaboration
    Interested

Critique Preferences

  • Getting Critique
    Give It To Me Both Barrels
  1. Draft #1 When You're Not Happy

    Thanks, glad you liked it. I'm not sure about the "100 raindrops in your heart" I think I was trying to describe raining as an emotional storm, does that make sense? The lyrics are actually only the first verse. I'll upload the track with the vocals so you can listen to the structure. I'm aiming for A-A-B-C for now.
  2. Hi all, hope all is well. I usually write lyrics once I have a basic melody and maybe structure. This is the melody track Here is the first draft of the lyrics, what do you think? Maybe it's the weather, 100 of raindrops in your heart. They say it would get colder but you haven't felt warmth in a very long time. Wake up every morning, and you feel like you left something behind They say it would get harder, but harder is no harder when you're aching all the time.
  3. Grand Oak Tree

    Nicely rhymed
  4. Conjured up this song in the dead of night

    Thank you for that. I tend to agree, a live show should be polished and structured. That is why I'm trying to piece together the puzzle as I go. I appreciate your remark for the chords not changing. That is another thing I need to prearrange for a smooth transition. Much appreciated, G.
  5. Hi community, I want to share with you this track I conjured last night. I'm working with Abletone and Launchpad (Novation Mini) so the argument is being set live. I like the idea of creating a live show but I find it confusing and hard to set it up first. Do you have any suggestions on how to "structure" a live track? how do you decide the arrangements before? Thanks!
  6. Hi all, I'm Giora tal

    Hi all, my Name is Giora Tal and I'm a singer songwriter living in Portland. I teach guitar on my free time in my local community center and make small music production in my home studio. I wish to collaborate with more artists and make some cool music. I currently have a few music blogs, YouYube, SoundCloud and some more. Feel free to visit and share. Giora T.
  7. Hi all! I'm trying to write a song (after a long time) and I'm blocked! Main theme: I'm trying to write about a situation where your life partner is feeling shitty and things are not going well for him/her. You are doing well and work hard for it and you look at your partner and thinks they can do better and they should stop blaming the circumstances for their problems like blaming a force of nature for destroying everything (out of your hand) I want to use the "Force of nature" as a metaphor for "problems" and in overall tell a story from the "Happy" part of this relationship and how this "shitty" weather, can influence and ruin stuff. first draft: Verse 1: Maybe it's the weather, 100 of raindrops in your heart. They say it would get colder but you haven't felt warmth in a very long time. Wake up every morning, and you feel like you left something behind They say it would get harder, but harder is no harder when you're aching all the time. Chorus/Pre chorus: Forces of nature, washing you inside out Laying on a feather, won't get you anywhere. So stop blaming the weather, when you get stuck Forces of nature, washing you inside out. You can listen to the tune I work with for this song here Thank you!
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