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dinnerwithgreedo

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dinnerwithgreedo last won the day on January 2 2013

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About dinnerwithgreedo

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  • Birthday 01/15/1976

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    https://www.facebook.com/pages/DinnerWithGreedo/136800269740346?ref=hl

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    Male
  • Location
    England (UK)

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    Interested

Music Background

  • Musical Influences
    The Beatles, Foo Fighters, Metallica, Oasis, The Beach Boys, Paul McCartney

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  1. Here's the final version... with drums!
  2. Thanks Oak. Drums are on their way!
  3. The composition reminds me of Madonna for some reason. It's got a '90's feel to the song too. It's a good song but i think it's more of an album track than a single.
  4. Very well sung and very atmospheric. The only thing i'd change is 'human mistakes'. Is there any other kind?
  5. I loved the unexpected chord. The piano is good but becomes a bit too repetitive. Overall though, i like this song. Needs a hook though.
  6. This is great. Just needs a stronger vocal.
  7. This is currently without drums. I have a very kind member of forum working on some new ones but does anyone else wanna give it a try?? Pleeeeeease
  8. Um...... i don't think it is a British expression. Pretty sure i came up with it. (Don't quote me on that). Thanks for the kudos!!
  9. I was plagued with the drums whilst recording. Still not overly happy with them but never mind. ** UPDATE** I got rid of them. Enjoy http://soundcloud.com/dinnerwithgreedo/easy-lazin-1/s-28Ito LYRICS It's Monday morning and the sun's in the sky And whilst I'm still yawning, I'm wondering why I work a nine to five when I don't want to go Opportunity to skive, and I want you to know I could get used to easy lazin' I've got that lazy feeling on my mind I could get used to easy lazin' I've got that lazy feeling And I don't want to spoil it now by going to work. Sun shines on the river, reflection catches my eye I hope this pint will deliver whilst I'm wondering why I work a nine to five where I don't wanna go Opportunity to skive, and I want you to know I could get used to easy lazin' I've got that lazy feeling on my mind I could get used to easy lazin' I've got that lazy feeling And I don't want to spoil it now by going to work Do do do do do do... etc
  10. Thank you so much Kafla
  11. Thanks for all the replies. I'm now sick of this song. I must have re-recorded the vocal 20 times already... i guess that's the best i can sing it guys. And produce it for that matter. If anyone wants to have a bash at producing this themselves (HoboSage is kindly gonna try), all the tracks can be found here. http://www.mediafire.com/folder/pb765jhgg4q2t/What_You_Crying_For_BITS You can even sing it if you like. Enjoy.
  12. I wish i knew what you meant by 'for the lounge'. It's finished as in i can't be bothered with it ANY MORE. I had technical difficulties whilst making this which meant i had to listen to it a hell of a lot more than i normally would... so i'm currently sick of it! There's always room for improvement in my 'producing' (and vocals come to think of it) but alas i'm not skilled enough. I do think i write a good song or two though
  13. This is an old song that i have finally finished (well..... you'll be the judge of that ). Enjoy https://soundcloud.com/dinnerwithgreedo/what-you-cryin-for Lyrics I've got a sentimental picture that i keep upon the mantel. It's not my favourite picture of you but it's all that i can handle. And she said, leave it out you don't know what you're talking about leave it out you don't know what you're talking about Do you know what you're cryin' for? Do you know what you're cryin' for? Do you know what you're cryin' for? Do you know what you're cryin' for? I've got the feeling that we've been here and i've heard this nonsense all before. I olny say these things to hurt you. Sentimental picture to the floor. And she said, leave it out you don't know what you're talking about leave it out you don't know what you're talking about Do you know what you're cryin' for? Do you know what you're cryin' for? Do you know what you're cryin' for? Do you know what you're cryin' for?
  14. Hi guys, thanks for all your comments. Never let it be said i don't listen........ i've gone back and removed many cymbal crashes! Thanks for the advice.
  15. Thanks for the reviews guys. Much appreciated.