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  1. Deus Ex Machina

    Thanks in advance for any critique... Smashing Pumpkins were a big influence, given the not so subtle reference in the lyrics...so, if you like the genre then I'd really appreciate your feedback. I think there's too much muddiness going in the middle, so any advice for cleaning that up is also appreciated. This was recorded using Reaper and stock plug-ins (incl drums). If you have a similar setup I'd love to hear your production tweaks and hacks (if appropriate for this forum). Thanks for listening. deus ex machina my mind won't concede although feeling defeated I think therefore I can believe my brain is still beating my heart is still bleeding my toes are all tingly, you see she's smiling, she's a god machine i'm 3 sheets I can barely see how easily I can be free the beat that's beneath my feet is the beast that will feed on my siamese dream she's smiling, she's a god machine she steals every scene, she's a god machine scene after scene i feel I've gone to hell in between saved, suddenly a god machine, she's a god machine i've seen this scene last week i'll fall into a sea of deceit saved, suddenly a god machine, she's a god machine excuse me please, did I have too much to drink, I don't think I'm ready to leave her beat that I'm feeling is it real or am I teasing tragedy she's smiling, she's a god machine she steals every scene, she's a god machine scene after scene i feel I've gone to hell in between saved, suddenly a god machine, she's a god machine i've seen this scene last week i'll fall into a sea of deceit saved, suddenly a god machine, she's a god machine
  2. Hey SongStuffers, this is probably the most fleshed out demo I've done so far so any feedback (performance, production, but especially songwriting). I'd like to know if you like the song of course , also what you don't like. I tried to reference a Foo Fighter's track for the mix...I don't pretend it's anywhere near the quality but I'd appreciate any feedback on the attempt to recreate that sound. Lyrics: When there's a light on You just can't rely on That someone's home The bed is warm waiting for you You try to lie to yourself Believing anything That makes you scream That makes you feel like you can't sleep Until you find Another light in your night Stars on fire burning brighter than the sun And then you'll find That you realize that you had A shooting star in your hand the whole time Under the covers You thought there were others But you’re the one Who didn't want to know the truth There comes a time when You open your mind to That someone who Believed in you all this time And then you find Another light in your night Stars on fire burning brighter than the sun and you'll find That you realize that you had A shooting star in your hand the whole time ** bridge ** A shooting star in your hand Ain't it grand? Aint' it grand? And then you find Another light in your night Star on fire burning brighter than the sun and you will find That you realize that you had A shooting star in your hand the whole time A shooting star A shooting star in your hand (c) ken payne, 2017
  3. Hi community, I want to share with you this track I conjured last night. I'm working with Abletone and Launchpad (Novation Mini) so the argument is being set live. I like the idea of creating a live show but I find it confusing and hard to set it up first. Do you have any suggestions on how to "structure" a live track? how do you decide the arrangements before? Thanks!
  4. Got to

    Hey again, thank you for your critique. Got to Got to, got to get right, Got to, got to get right, Got to get to you, To help me pull through, Breath in, to block it all out, Breath in, to end this long drought, Do not to freak out, Breathe in and shout, Yeah, Drink this, to drown in the night, One more to, vanish your doubt, Out comes the clues, I don’t remember those shoes, Yeah, Got to, got to get right, Got to, got to get right, Got to get to you, To help me pull through,
  5. Tiger Balm

    Hey folks, Thanks for your critique. Temporary name - song is not about tiger balm... Tiger Balm Calling all stations to gather your man and tell them to prepare for the worse, The enemy's coming he knows where we're hiding our lines have already been crossed, Our lines have already been crossed, Take this dear minute, reflect on your choices, forgive everyone you have known, You will all be heroes, when this is over, we'll say that you bravely fought, We'll say that you bravely fought, Now pick up a shovel, a stick or a stone, and stand up for the cause that remain, For our faith has been handed but our minds are still free to act out the right scene till the end, Act out the right scene till the end, act out the right scene till the end, https://soundcloud.com/leosherman/tiger-balm
  6. Breaking Blue (demo)

    Hi Songstuff community, your feedback is super appreciated. Breaking Blue One last call for all my lost causes One more shot to give all I got for a chance One last fall, on the floor I get up and, take one more Another day I fail to erase my regret Another way I try to make myself forget I was on the side, of the road You were driving by, didn’t slow Under the blue of a thousand moons Are the broken truths of a thousand fools The blue is breaking I'm breaking blue the blue is breaking I'm breaking blue You've set my life on fire I'm feeling higher You say that you're a liar I see desire I am breaking blue I'm awake but my eyes are shut I can hear my scream but my mouth's not open When you're around, there's no sound You shut me up, when I'm down Under the blue of a thousand moons Are the broken truths of a thousand fools The blue is breaking I'm breaking blue the blue is breaking I'm breaking blue You've set my life on fire I'm feeling higher You say that you're a liar I see desire I am breaking blue Under the blue of a thousand moons Are the broken truths of a thousand fools
  7. Under The Moonlight

    Hi everyone, Never got this song critiqued. I wrote it, came up with the melodies and harmonies and laid down the vocals for the demo (I'm not a singer or rapper). Lyrics below. Let me know what you think in general. I'm just starting to look for pop producers to work with so I'm trying to figure out what songs could attract them to want to collab with me. Thanks in advance! Under The Moonlight LYRICS Verse 1 Hey babe I’ve been looking at you Doing your thing the whole night Had to say something before You walked out my life I don’t got no lines I’m just hoping that I’m your type Cause you’re my type Yeh, eh Eh, eh Pre-chorus One dance Is all I need girl To show Show you my world And maybe We’ll fall in love tonight One dance Is all I need girl To show Show you my world And maybe We’ll fall in love tonight Chorus 1 Under the moonlight (5x) Verse 2 Come with me I can see a smile Coming in It’s starting to show All you gotta do’s take my hand And we can go, oh Get lost in the moment While we’re dancing real slow Real slow Oh, oh Oh, oh Pre-chorus Chorus 1 Bridge Ready Hold on me real steady Don’t worry bout a thing Cause I’mma treat you like a lady Like a diamond Girls like you It’s hard to find them You got something special And that’s why you outshine them It feels Like this right here was meant to be This magic between you and me It’s like we’re starting our story Starting our history Chorus 2 Under the moonlight (9x)
  8. Midnight Hour (demo + video)

    Hi all.. inspired by HoboSage's recent video posts, I decided to try one for the latest song I am working on. It is made in Adobe Spark on the iPad. Hope you enjoy.... this is just a bit of fun.
  9. Hey everyone, Been working on recording an EP for quite some time now to little avail so decided to finally get things into gear and tried doing it myself instead. I'm aware that some timing, phrasing, and pitching is a bit off, and production value is pretty low quality in general since it's just a quick do-up on my home equipment, nothing special (will probably just use it as a demo to get recorded better elsewhere), but would love any and all feedback, especially regarding the song! https://soundcloud.com/joshmaier/home-demo-1/s-lk3OE Thanks in advance, lemme know your thoughts and hope you enjoy! c: Lyrics: Verse 1 Should I walk through the door Into the streets outside Carve a way between the clouds Across the midnight sky We'll leave it all behind Forget about those summer nights When the sweat poured off our skin Before the dawn brought new life Verse 2 Staring out into black Wonder if we go back What could we become? Hearts pound in our chests All those little secrets We'll never lay to rest Chorus Tell yourself it's just a dream Holding on to simple things Til we find our way back home Cause time is always on the run Hand yourself a loaded gun Can you ever call this home? Bridge Saw that light crash against the wall Held your hand through it all As the impact hits my skin Heard your voice, through the room it called Out my name as we fall Through the howling of the wind Chorus Tell yourself it's just a dream Holding on to simple things Til we find our way back home Cause time is always on the run Hand yourself a loaded gun Can you ever call this home? [How could you ever call this home?] Tell yourself it's just a dream Holding on to simple things Til we find our way back home Cause time is always on the run Hand yourself a loaded gun Can you ever call this home?
  10. My Everlasting Sunshine

    So this is a instrumental demo I made that I think I'm going to use for the intro to my EP. As you may hear in part of the song, my 2 year old came into my studio area while I was recording, but her voice sounded so pure with the song that I decided to just keep it. Thanks for the feedback! https://www.youtube.com/embed/vxfmEqZWD90
  11. Is this the right pleace to post this? Did record this song/demo at home (on a Boss BR600). Just two guitars and the vocals. It is not ment to be a perfect demo just a recording to get/give an impression about what the song could become (Idea for a song). I would appreciate some feedback. What do you think of what I have so far? Thanks in advance Roll the dice: Let’s roll the dice, let the game begin. What are the changes, to lose again. If this is what you’re living for, If this is what you’re longing for. No one said it would be easy, but it might be worth trying. For there may never be a time like this again (bay). And you may never get a chance like this again. For you may never feel alive like this again (bay). And the clock keeps ticking… Let’s roll the dice, double our lost bet. Let’s grab that last chance, before we go to sleep. And in the morning we’ll start over, and try it all again. No one said it would be easy, but it might be worth trying. For there may never be a time like this again (bay). And we may never get a chance like this again. For we may never be alive like this again (bay). And the clock keeps ticking…
  12. Updated 9 JUN 2016 Updated the link with another version of the song with a cello+piano arrangement. It was a collaboration with a cello player from North Eastern India. Beautiful musician named Adiel. Thought I'll update it here. Glad to be back on this side of the forum. [Update 23 Dec 2015] Finally, another new recording. Took the song up a semi-tone higher, made a small change in the lyric and left some space for the string section to come in the end. This is still a demo recording but hey, I can learn things out of it by treating it like a studio track. A lot of my friends have found a liking to this song and the title "Sleep" has kinda stuck. Oh well lol ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ I've got an update for the two songs I posted a while back but then this popped out of nowhere yesterday. Thought I'll sit with it and make it solid while the idea is fresh in my mind. It's a lullaby for a baby inspired from a very adorable one that I know of. Just a rough track. Sleep Sleep, close your eyes, pick a dream Let your heart discover a world like no other You're free to roam and to know no defeat Don't cry, don't cry We'll find our place and chase away All of our worries and wait for the day To shine on our faces, make no mistake when I say Sleep, I'll keep you warm in my arms While you take your chances in all your adventures This world is blind to the colors that you see Don't cry, don't cry We'll find our place and chase away All of our worries and wait for the day To shine on our faces, make no mistake when I say sleep [possibly an instrumental string section with verse chord progression] We'll find our place and chase away All of our worries and wait for the day To shine on our faces, and this melody will stay while you sleep
  13. Hello, last week I started working on a new Song. The Song was recorded "highly professional" in my Bedroom so please don´t mind the quality. I wrote the Lyrics and the Music. You can clearly see and hear that I am not a native speaker.. BUT... at least it´s authentic. I wrote the Lyric myself because I felt like there was something on my mind, I wanted to say or more, trying to express. it makes perfectly sence for me, don´t know if it does for you.. Thank your for listening and giving feedback Martin p.s.: Please use headphone´s "Lay your weapons down" (Demo - Bedroom Sessions) Lay your weapons down Lay your weapons down Lay your weapons down Lay your weapons down Lay 'em down Her father died in war, hunted down like a fox While politicians in suits have their summit talks Drink Champagne and shake hands, so they can´t feel her fear Agreed to build a fence and meet again next year We look for superstars on radio stations With millions on the run, in other nations Hear the cries, hear the cries, of those who´re on their way They may not reach the land, where they hoped to stay Lay your weapons down Lay your weapons down Lay your weapons down Lay 'em down Religion got abused by some fanatic guys Too many to blame, they are on both sides An Alliance dropping bombs in so called air defence and let the people starve, on the boarder fence There´s murder, rape, abuse, people on the run Most of them hunted down by men with guns Those who speak out their minds awaits a long nightmare Of torture and swords until they dance on air Lay your weapons down Lay your weapons down Lay your weapons down Lay 'em down Solders entered her town, left it in dust and flames With brave hero´s eyes, „just one death is to claim“ A woman on her knees, cries out „What have you done This one man you just killed, was my only son" Is this war game the right way to bring the world peace is it what we call, the world´s greatest desease The girl speaks out her mind „this world shall be ours Let weapons be replaced, by beautiful flowers“ When will there be peace on earth? I had a dream, a world in peace Lay your weapons down Lay your weapons down Lay your weapons down Lay 'em down
  14. This is a song that started as a silly joke between me and my ballerina daughter and morphed into something I hope is more meaningful. It's been through a few variations and I'm hoping I'm finally closing in on something that works. Idea one was to go into an extended coda off the second chorus, but I felt like it lost some of the whimsy that appealed to me in the first place. Idea two dropped the coda, extended the second chorus and just ended there, but it felt like it wasn't quite complete. Which leads me to posting Idea three. It splices a bridge and solo in after C2, with a shorter version of the extended final chorus. It uses the same acoustic/vocal demo that the earlier versions were built around, with a minimal amount of layering to get the idea across. Specific questions: Does the bridge work? If not, what isn't working? Can I just go back to the version without a bridge? I'm ambivalent about the last line of the bridge, so any feedback there would be much appreciated. Thanks! EDIT: The song is undergoing a metamorphosis, so I'm taking down the mix until the update is completed. V1 She’s got pimples on her nose Ballet blisters on her toes Her mother says, "that’s just how life goes" V2 Dinner time, sit up straight Frozen fishsticks on her plate Her mother screams, “we’re running late.... get in the car!" C No it doesn't pay for her to cry So she takes it all in stride That's how a kid gets by In suburban life V3 Her brothers barge into her room Steal her backpack and her shoes Her mother sighs, “What do you want me to do?” C No it doesn't pay for her to cry So she takes it all in stride That's how a kid gets by... B Stand back world It's only a matter of time You can't keep this girl From taking to the sky C It doesn't pay for her to cry So she takes it all in stride That's how a kid gets by... That's how this kid gets by Suburban Life
  15. Be Happy

    Hi all, just a bit of fun but open to critique if you have any suggestions. Bryan if you read this its the happy song I said I would post to get you out of your darker lyrical phase lol! Hope you enjoy and my rendition is not the best but enjoyed trying as usual. I heard the intro as a crowd repeating each line after the singer. Be Happy ©Les Service 2015 Intro Today is gonna be a good day Nothings gonna bring me down Good things are coming my way Gonna wear a smile and not a frown C And be happy I won’t be sad Get happy I won’t get mad Wear a smile all day Keep my blues at bay Be happy happy happy as I can V Woke up this morning with a smile on my face The sun was shining in a - sky of blue Feels good to be apart of the human race I hope that you can feel it too C And be happy Don’t be sad Get happy Don’t get mad Wear a smile all day Keep the blues at bay Be happy happy happy as you can B Uplifting happy musical bridge V I can't explain why I feel so alive There must be something - in the air Got a good feeling yeah a positive vibe I hope it's a feeling you can share C And be happy Don’t be sad Get happy Don’t get mad Wear a smile all day Keep the blues at bay Be happy happy happy as you can Outro More uplifting happy music interspersed with “Be happy” “Don’t be sad” to fade https://soundcloud.com/skin-13/be-happy/s-KOkcO
  16. Last Demo Of 2014

    This is my last demo for 2014. The song is called "Too Good To Be Forgot". I wrote this song about growing, and the memories that will never be forgotten. Hopefully it will be relatable to everyone who listens. We kind of went somewhere between Texas country and the Tom Petty realm for this recording. I hope you all like it! http://soundclick.com/share.cfm?id=13004060
  17. Hi Songstuff My friend and I have been writing songs over the past year and have decided to now step out and start gigging and find a bass player. Thing is every person we have messaged has not replied. Even if they message us first saying hey send us some links. Its frustrating because we don't know what we are doing wrong and no one will tell us! Here's the songs. Two acoustic, two made up on garageband. They are a work in progress but we want a potential bass player to listen and see where they are able to fit in and then create some demo's. We have 8 in total but here are the first half. https://soundcloud.com/thebandcalledthe Could someone please give it to us straight?
  18. Hi Guys Been playing with this for a week or so and wondered what your thoughts were? I have struggled with the 3rd verse wrote many variations to try and get it right. I like the 1st n 3rd line although open to ideas on them and any of the lyric of course, no holds barred say what you think please. I have added a link to my attempt at it but my phrasing is off (so is my singing lol!) and my guitar sucks but it gives an idea to how I hear it. I also screwed up the ending in the recording but my fingers were aching so I didn't do another one. Just getting back to practicing guitar. I hope you enjoy the read and listen. Cheers Les Is She Like Me-She’s Not Like Me Stopped off at my local for a cold one There she was sitting at the bar Hair tied back legs crossed so lady like I knew I hadn’t seen her here before I couldn’t help but stare at her pretty face Her eyes had a smile of their own I was wondering what she was doing here I wondered why she was all alone Is she like me, a lonely soul No good reason to hurry home To empty rooms without memories To another night spent on our own I waited for my moment to talk to her We sat chatting for a while She said she was waiting for a special friend I could see that in the way she smiled Her friend came in they rushed to warm embrace Not the normal kiss of two girls I realized then that they were lovers I knew I could’nt enter her world She’s not like me, not a lonely soul She has good reason to hurry home No empty rooms without memories She doesn’t spend her nights on her own Well I gave it a shot Guess it wasn’t my lucky day Maybe next time? Is she like me, No she’s not like me She has good reason to hurry home Is she like me, No she’s not like me She doesn’t spent, No she doesn’t spend, She doesn’t spend her nights on her own Is she like me, she’s not like me to fade https://soundcloud.com/skin-13/is-she-like-me-shes-not-like-1/s-v69BA
  19. Long & Lonely Ride (Demo)

    https://soundcloud.com/michaelstovallmusic/long-lonely-ride-demo **Thank you to everyone for the feedback! I think I've got what I need for this one. Well, I've been playing this song out for a bit and it quickly turned into one of my favorites. I kept the recording very bare-bones... but I fear I may have made it too dreary and slow. Any suggestions? I like the lyrics (for the most part) Should I speed it up, or add something to it? Anything to make it better or more accessible Thanks for listening. -Michael Lyrics: In my mind is red mixed with green grey and blue fill out the scene on the road of never ending daylight sometimes I feel I've seen too much out on the road and out of touch close my eyes it'll be midnight no one told me it was this crazy on the outside no one told me life would be such a long and lonely ride down the road a little further there's a place I've never seen before I know its gonna hit me tomorrow sometimes I wish I had a place to call my own a woman to warm my bones and miss me when Im gone no one told me it was this crazy on the outside no one told me life would be such a long and lonely ride I dont wanna live just to forget I dont wanna die full of regret I dont wanna be here when the sun sets
  20. Wish It Away

    EDIT: I tried to apply all of the advice the best I could. Didn't redo any performances though.. just practicing mixing. Let me know what you think! Thanks! ------ Hey guys.. here is a song I wrote awhile back for a band but we really didn't play it out but once or twice. Any way, I made this demo at the time so I was thinking of rerecording it with all real instruments. This version is my acoustic with all midi backing. its kind of a downer song about addiction. Feel free to give any thoughts on anything at all as I will be reworking/writing/recording everything. I will probably tweak the lyrics some as well. Thanks guys!! Rock on!! https://soundcloud.com/vspacecave/wishitaway Wish it away Grab on Pull the spell off Drag me (I won’t) walk on my feet If I could wish it away If I could wish it away If I could wish it away, I would It’ll take awhile for me, It could take awhile I could never be Completely selfless and sane It was always easiest To masquerade in pain If I could wish it away If I could wish it away If I could wish it away, I would It’ll take awhile for me, It could take awhile It’ll take awhile for me, It could take awhile If I stay at this place, if I stay at this place I could lose everything, I could lose everyone And I’d never forgive I would never forget I would never forgive myself
  21. Dream Away The Pain [Demo]

    Hey you guys, I just wanted to share this little song I'm working on, I want to hear your impressons about this one. Please keep in mind that it's only a demo recording, and I am not a professional! Maybe one day https://soundcloud.com/jackhalkabar/dream-away-the-pain Thanks for your time!
  22. Imbalance

    Hi everyone! Most of you probably don't remember me, but I used to post in the lyrics critique section. Anyways, my band and I finally got off our butts and recorded a few demos, so I'll share the one that I feel came out the best, but feel free to check out the others. Lyrics: She says she's not quite good enough. She says it's not alright... She's looking for an excuse again, Another way to lie. And will she tell the truth again? Or will she just pass time? She tries her best to hide her emotions and her life. She stays locked inside where it's safe to be tonight. It's not comforting, though nothing is anymore. Her mind's wandering... Wandering out and, (Away, away) Away from all of her nightmares. (Away, away) Away from all of her cold tears. (Away, away) Away from all of the hardship. (Away, away) Away from all of this bullshit. To them it's like any other day, For her she sees no light. She never wants to come back again. Nothing can change her mind. She fumbles for her keys, and the world still calls her out. A little faith can be just enough to bring you down. As she counts to three with her make-up streaking now. Her heart swells and bleeds as she tries to get, (Away, away) Away from all of her nightmares. (Away, away) Away from all of her cold tears. (Away, away) Away from all of the hardship. (Away, away) Away from all of this bullshit. (Away, away) Away from all of her nightmares. Away, away... (Away, away) Away from all of her nightmares. (Away, away) Away from all of her cold tears. (Away, away) Away from all of the hardship. (Away, away) Away from all of this bullshit. (Away, away) Away from all her ambitions. (Away, away) Away from all of her dreams. (Away, away) Away from all of her friends and, (Away, away) Away from everything. (Away, away) Away and gone... Please let me know what you think of the song and the lyrics since this is what one of our bands singles is probably going to be. The chord structure is pretty simple, with the verses using the vi-IV-I-V (C#m-A-B-E, all with an open e on the high e string to be exact) progression, pretty standard in pop and rock, but the lyrics are what I think are the focal point of the song. The song is about a girl suffering from depression and how her day to day life is so unbearable that even the simplest of things can seem like a struggle that weighs her down until she reaches a breaking point. It's about how even though others may not have it out for her, and even though she isn't alone, it feels as though she has nothing worth living for. Granted since it uses that progression, people will probably ignore the lyrics and just hum along to the familiar tune. With that aside, I feel I should also tell you what we used to record this, and no, it wasn't a toaster. We used a Samsung Galaxy S4, only slightly better than a toaster! Thanks for stopping by and listening to our demo, or reading the lyrics. I won't judge if you didn't want to hear my vocals ~Jess
  23. Bricks & Bones (Demo)

    https://soundcloud.com/michaelstovallmusic/bricks-bones-demo-1 Hello everyone, Well, I've been sick at home for the past 2 days…so I decided to use the time to write and record something new. My vocal is a little weak, but I kinda like it. Anyway, I'd love to hear any thoughts you may have on this (arrangement, mix, melody, lyrics) Thanks! -Michael Lyrics: I don't mind watching the time fly in the arms of the one I love I don't mind watching the lights die when I'm all alone I don't mind chasing down a dream keep my head, stand straight and tall I don't mind breaking my own plans when it all goes wrong Chorus: sticks and stones, honey bricks and bones, now I know its time to move along I don't mind keeping my mouth shut even when I know the truth I don't mind keeping my eyes wide to my disappearing youth Chorus:
  24. Like Radio (Live Demo)

    **The Track is private, so you'll have to click the link Hey guys, I haven't had much time to record any new songs in the past few months, but I sat down and wrote this new one today and wanted to do a quick live recording of it. It's pretty short, and I'm looking to fully produce this one at some point. Im open to any ideas and feedback would be much appreciated (lyrics/melody/structure) Thanks everyone! -Michael Lyrics: Oh I'm losing touch I'm losing my grip on these things oh I can see it now, in your eyes you're losing faith in me Chorus: Just like radio and your favorite shows I'm bound to let you down just like radio I hope you don't forget me now Put that dress on honey lets go dancing again Oh I used to walk right beside you now i found my way under your skin Chorus: Just like radio and your favorite shows I'm bound to let you down just like radio i hope you don't forget me now
  25. https://soundcloud.com/michaelstovallmusic/waiting-on-a-war-mastered **Updated Version** I added a small bridge, and another chorus. Still not sure if i like it or not Hello Everyone, I squeezed in some recording time today, and this is what I came out with. It's not done, and it needs an outro…any suggestions for that would be welcome. Anyway, please let me know what you think about it (lyrics/melody/structure/mix) Thanks a lot! -Michael Lyrics: Does it kill you does it bring you down does it keep you up knowing it comes around and the softest touch can be the hardest part and the saddest song heading straight for your heart when you're waiting on a war is your mind right is your heart turning cold could you scream out loud just to let it all go and the pain comes but you laugh instead and lullabies dance around in your head when you're waiting on a war
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