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  1. Barely Blue

    Barely Blue Draft RogersonLB V1 remember how I felt so cool strutting with the in crowd good as anyone there in school how these new jeans made me so proud Chorus That's a long time ago and there now Barely Blue Got those old well used faded 501's on Sure they're now a little worn front pocket hanging out and down both knees are gone Bring back memories of you, memories of you, Barely Blue Got those old well used faded 501's on , Barely Blue V2 We caught the bus to the shopping mall walking in the buzz I got then My ego getting a size too small You smiling and saying please buy them Chorus That's a long time ago and there now Barely Blue Got those old well used faded 501's on Sure they're now a little worn front pocket hanging out and down both knees are gone Bring back memories of you, memories of you, Barely Blue Got those old well used faded 501's on , Barely Blue Bridge You'd wrap you arms around me tucking your hands in round the back laugh and kiss me saying I love you lots Its why these pants are the fabric of my memories of you, Chorus That's a long time ago and there now Barely Blue Got those old well used faded 501's on Sure they're now a little worn front pocket hanging out and down both knees are gone Bring back memories of you, memories of you, Barely Blue Got those old well used faded 501's on , Barely Blue
  2. Holding to you

    Hey guys, so this is my first time posting to this forum as well as my first attempt in writing a lyrics to a song, I will really appreciate some comments on what to improve (constructive critique) as well as if you like it. little by little day by day you saw my heart crumble into pieces nothing could be done to stop the pain my laughter became cries my smile became upside down my crying of joy became of pain you're the reason why i'm holding back Hold me in your arms and never let go your the reason why im stading here the reason why i havent let go whisper in my ear the words i never heard before give me the hug im looking for ease the pain that never leaves my side your the reason why i havent let go Days were shorter and nights were longer how i look for the confort you onces gave me the smile you brought to my face the twinkle in my eyes it seems that when you left you took that way too let me remember the memories the ones that held so much love the ones were you and me are one Hold me in your arms... just promise me you'll be back before my hearts breakes a little more just promise me youll be back before i decide to forget Hold me in your arms..... if you decide to leave i wish you well and joy if its not by my side the love your lookin for know your the reason why i havent let go
  3. Straight Shooter

    Another of the ones from last Tuesday, this was written just after the tower song , sort had the pop theme going in my head suppose Straight Shooter Draft RogersonLB V1 Daddy was a loving man got injured in the war But nothing you could see at all one night had changed his life told me in a drunken haze was him or me, no right or wrong Chorus Straight Shooter he said, always be a Straight Shooter It lesson 1 to 10 always be a Straight Shooter Son wont need to tell you again It lesson 1 to 10 always be a Straight Shooter always be a Straight Shooter V2 later when I understood How someone can hurt all the while Still keep giving so much These words struck me so hard and true Better using words than firing guns Chorus Straight Shooter he said, always be a Straight Shooter It lesson 1 to 10 always be a Straight Shooter Son wont need to tell you again It lesson 1 to 10 always be a Straight Shooter always be a Straight Shooter Bridge So now not loading up six bullets Its the six strings I strum Chorus Straight Shooter he said, always be a Straight Shooter It lesson 1 to 10 always be a Straight Shooter Son wont need to tell you again It lesson 1 to 10 always be a Straight Shooter always be a Straight Shooter
  4. World Of Confusion

    Grew up with Enid Blyton books such as the Magic Faraway Tree and the Wishing Chair... World of confusion Draft RogersonLB V1 Life was simple when I wore shorts like the flint-stones no one swore We watched our p's and q's and back door was always open then the world decided greed was good Chorus Feels like I've climbed the magic faraway tree landed upside down in the world of confusion where right and wrong and both the same hate and lust just a passing phase of decaying youth Feels like I've climbed the magic faraway tree landed upside down in the world of confusion V2 School was easy but times now changed lost our leaders while we seek fame TV and flogs with blogs taught us what we somehow needed and like good little soldiers agreed Chorus Feels like I've climbed the magic faraway tree landed upside down in the world of confusion where right and wrong and both the same hate and lust just a passing phase of decaying youth Feels like I've climbed the magic faraway tree landed upside down in the world of confusion
  5. Making Us One

    Always wanted to a cliche song where the fireworks and train motifs of the old movies were used, the story whilst not Pop 101 is certainly real for some friends I have had over the years.. Making Us One Draft RogersonLB V1 Sure I been around All those single nights Drinking out on the town Know some cannot bear to go home alone I wasn't like this till I met you Chorus IF I cant have a life with you Give me one more chance Have you wrapped around me making us one Till the fireworks explode and the train slowly goes If I cant have life with you Give me one more night Wrapped around me making us one V2 Now your saying It was only once Somehow you've gone back to him he's real sorry now and wont hit you again its history crime it will happen again Chorus IF I cant have a life with you Give me one more chance Have you wrapped around me making us one Till the fireworks explode and the train slowly goes If I cant have life with you Give me one more night Wrapped around me making us one
  6. Tails I'm Rambling

    Had the idea of the chorus on Sunday night but wanted a different lover before I started writing it out just now... Tails I'm Rambling Draft RogersonLB V1 Like paper cuts and rose thorns Can be the small things that hurt the most What strangers say is shampoo on a bald head PC but the acid tongue and actions of a loved one just sent me on my way again Chorus Far away see the tumble weed coming Feeling the soft dust rise up between my toes as I start walking down this unmade road I'm not a gambling man but when I flip this old worn coin Heads I going, tails I'm rambling V2 She wanted me to come back crossed her black heart and giving me her word to never go back to cheating on me again Chorus Far away see the tumble weed coming Feeling the soft dust rise up between my toes as I start walking down this unmade road I'm not a gambling man but when I flip this old worn coin Heads I going, tails I'm rambling Bridge Stuff this town and country who wont give anything back But when you don't treat all men as equal and look after their health Chorus Far away see the tumble weed coming Feeling the soft dust rise up between my toes as I start walking down this unmade road I'm not a gambling man but when I flip this old worn coin Heads I going, tails I'm rambling
  7. Hi Guys This was sparked by a post made by Gary in connection with a post made by James and I thought what an interesting exercise so I had a go. Not sure if it works that well but had a good time trying to get it to go together, does it work? I'm not sure I've used the WWWWW in quite the right way they are meant to be? There are alternative ways for the verse and chorus at the bottom, I sort of like them but would appreciate any feedback. Hope you enjoy the read. Cheers Les Who-What-When-Where-Why V Who the hell Do you think you are Who the hell Do you think I am I'm not your woman anymore And you sure ain’t no man V What the hell Did you think would happen What the hell Did you think I’d do I think it's time you left now It's the end of me and you C Why why why Don’t you leave me alone I don’t want to see you anymore Why why why Don’t you just go away I don’t want you knocking at my door Anymore anymore anymore V When the hell Were you going to tell me When the hell Were you going to break the news Bad for you that I found out Now it's me that gets to choose (you lose) V Where the hell Do you think this is going Where the hell Do you think it will end I was your woman and your lover Now I'm not even your friend B You’re a thief You’re a cheating liar You stole my heart Threw it in the fire C Why why why Don’t you leave me alone I don’t want to see you anymore Why why why Don’t you just go away I don’t want you knocking at my door Anymore anymore anymore Alternative ways of verse and chorus V Who Who Who The hell do you think you are Who Who Who The hell do you think I am I'm not your woman anymore And you sure not my man C Why don’t you leave me alone I don’t want to see you anymore Why don’t you just go away I don’t want you knocking at my door Anymore anymore anymore
  8. Should I Continue or Scrap This Song? https://soundcloud.com/mrsick2/bleeding-out-draft Chorus: I Think My Baby Hates Me, Im Bleeding Out I Think My Baby Knifed Me, Im Bleeding Out I Think My Baby Shot Me, Im Bleeding Out Please Somebody help me, Im Bleeding out.
  9. Now

    Here you go. I won't say much else other than it's a production draft. I need to compress the vocals and bring the piano forward more. Your feedback is greatly appreciated! Thanks guys! -Alex NOW - 01.27.13 DRAFT Now – Key of Am Verse 1 From the very first breathe From the very first stretch of the morning You’re the one on my mind You’re the reason why I get going You put a smile on my face You put a spring in my step and its showing From a love so divine From a love that that never stops growing Pre-Chorus With you around With you around With you around My world is smaller Chorus 1 Now That you’re around My world is My world is smaller Now That you’re around My world is My world is smaller Now 2-Bar Break Verse 2 Take a look at the clock It ticks to the beat of our story Back to a time Back living lives of our own In the here, in the now I move along always knowing It’s the time To live my life Pre-Chorus With you around With you around With you around My world is smaller Chorus 2 Now That you’re around My world is My world is smaller Now That you’re around My world is My world is smaller 8 Bar Bridge Piano Solo 8 Bar Vocal Bridge Cause I do what I do And I say what I say Just because you made your way Into my life Cause I do what I do And I say what I say Cause of each and Everyday Pre-Chorus With you around With you around With you around My world is smaller Chorus 3 (x2) Now That you’re around My world is My world is smaller Now That you’re around My world is My world is smaller Ending It’s smaller now With you around It's smaller now With you around
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