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  1. Never the Same

    Hello~ I'm writing this song for someone as a birthday gift. Thing is, he's a celebrity. In the K-pop industry. I know, I'm a bit of a fangirl (hear me out), but I wanted to do something special for his birthday to show him that he's had a hugely positive effect on my life, even if I live on the other side of the planet. (I know there's no guarantee he'll hear it, but I have to try.) A tiny bit of personal BG info: these past two years I've been working through some pretty tough depression, social anxiety, etc. and k-pop (specifically this Idol and the group he's a part of) have really helped me cope. I'm sure you all understand the profound effects music can have, even if you don't know the language it's written in. The emotions and message still transcend. Hopefully that'll give you a bit of perspective when it comes to the intimate and confessional nature of my lyrics. I just was trying to get all my feelings out onto the paper, so yeah. Also, this is my first song- so please, 'give me both barrels,' but just an fyi- I know the lyrics are a bit bland in places. Never the Same -for Jungkook- [V1] Foreign states, separate fates, That's what we are. I tell myself, keep listening and yet, you're so far. [PreCH] This fantasy, of you with me There's no escaping now. So many things that can never be But I refuse to back down. [CH] So i'll keep fighting, and trying won't let you go, I'll climb mountains, cross oceans Just to let you know that even though you've never seen my face, or heard my name- You've touched me in a way that I will never be the same. [V2] When I think of you, all I want to do is look deep into your eyes. I just want to hold you close, Let me be your blooming rose, because I promise you my love will never die. [PreCH] This fantasy, of you with me There's no escaping now. So many things that can never be But I refuse to back down. [CH] So i'll keep fighting, and trying won't let you go, I'll climb mountains, cross oceans Just to let you know that even though you've never seen my face, or heard my name- You've touched me in a way that I will never be the same. [V3] I know I must sound naive, for stirring up these foolish dreams. {I mean, c'mon.} you're on the other side of the world. I just wish that you could see the way that you have set me free-- It's unreal, the things I feel for you. [PreCH] This fantasy, of you with me There's no escaping now. So many things that can never be But I refuse to back down. [CH] So i'll keep fighting, and trying won't let you go, I'll climb mountains, cross oceans Just to let you know that even though you've never seen my face, or heard my name- You've touched me in a way that I will never be the same. [BR] Your smile, it gives me life {and your laugh's how I survive} when I fall down, you're there to help me up. So this is me, I'm thanking you for all the things you've helped me through I'm just one girl, across the world but I love you. [PreCH] This fantasy, of you with me There's no escaping now. So many things that can never be But I refuse to back down. [CH] So i'll keep fighting, and trying won't let you go, I'll climb mountains, cross oceans Just to let you know that even though you've never seen my face, or heard my name- You've touched me in a way that I will never be the same. ___________ words/lines in {brackets} I intend to change. Any suggestions? Thank you so much.
  2. The Escape

    Okay...this is my first time letting anyone read my lyrics but I really don't care, you can go as hard as you'd like on the criticism. I honestly...well, I'm going to post my lyrics because I want to know how I can improve, and I actually cringe 95% of the time while reading my songs. Despite that, here it is! Verse 1 I can taste the freedom on my tongue Smell the scent of joy I'm going, going, gone away from them And I've waited far too long Why did it take so very long for this moment, Moment to come, to come Moment, moment to come Chorus I've been hiding in the darkness Buried under the sheets My heart craved independence And now I'm finally free So let it burst Let it blow Let it shine Let it glow Make it all explode out now Tell the world, now, everybody You and me baby, We're free Verse 2 Keep those blue eyes wide open Remember to never forget Always look hard before you jump And make sure someone's there to break your Fall We can leave this, though, throw it all away Be left with our old memories and make new ones every day Every day Chorus I've been hiding in the darkness Buried under the sheets My heart craved independence And now I'm finally free So let it burst Let it blow Let it shine Let it glow Make it all explode out now Tell the world, now, everybody You and me baby, We're free Bridge Why is it always so Closed in? Why does it feel like the world is Ending? Why can we do nothing that we ever want to do? Why won’t the clock just stop so I can be with you? With you? Chorus I've been hiding in the darkness Buried under the sheets My heart craved independence And now I'm finally free So let it burst Let it blow Let it shine Let it glow Make it all explode out now Tell the world, now, everybody You and me baby, We're free Chorus I've been hiding in the darkness Buried under the sheets My heart craved independence And now I'm finally free So let it burst Let it blow Let it shine Let it glow Make it all explode out now Tell the world, now, everybody You and me baby, We're free (extend note) I can't stop flinching at the horrible-ness haha
  3. Takes You Like Medicine

    Here goes nothin. Wrote the original version of this a long time ago. The lyric has gone thru many edits, the guitar hasn't. It's taken over four years for me to be able to post something here that I wrote, played, and sang. http://soundcloud.com/mcnaughtonpark/takes Takes You Like Medicine Annie buys her dope Down at the station In a plain envelope Got a bad reputation All her thoughts are bound To the run away train They're kept underground Annie's tied to the pain No whistle blows No telling what's coming Seduction knows To keep on drumming Head swirly wind Turning out and insane Feels like the end Annie's tied to the pain She takes you like medicine To make her well again You're better than alcohol Cocaine or heroin Mmmmmm, hmmmmm Medicne You follow her tracks And you mend where she bleeds You cool the motor That runs her disease And you laugh when she tells you that she'll never do it again And again She takes you like medicine
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