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Hey all.....life has been quite a turmoil lately, so I haven't been able to do much recording. Here is one I'm working on....I'm mostly looking for crits in the the lyrics, overall song flow and my biggest bugaboo...timing . Production....well....I'm learning some new things but it's still my weakest point. Consider this a work in progress. As always, any and all comments are welcome....(hint: 'you suck' is not helpful) Missing You copyright 2017 JH Michaels, all rights reserved Verse 1: I look around and I'm all alone How do I stop this empty ache in my soul Our life was bright as a sunny day Since you're gone it all fades to gray Refrain: Every day, and every way, oh.. I'm missing you Every day, and every way, oh.. I'm missing you Verse 2: I tried to find a way to make you stay But no matter what I did, you went anyway It's you I find I...I really need So that my heart won't continue to bleed Refrain Verse 3: What do we do when it's all gone bad And we're just a shadow of the dreams we had Somehow I wish it could be The way it started for you and me Refrain Bridge: Oh baby please won't you come home Oh baby please won't you come home Refrain Bridge2: Oh baby please won't you come home Why did you leave me all alone Refrain Bridge3: Oh baby please won't you come home I can't stand being all alone End
This is one I just wrote a few days ago...feedback appreciated BATTLE SCARS when he was a young lad he'd wish upon the stars but all his hopes and dreams were stolen by a war these days he spends his time in a hole in the wall bar making backroom deals to treat his battle scars he's got shrapnel in his shoulder a nightmare in his head he sells his pain pills for a needle and a bed people pass him on the streets but they can't look him in the eye just another forgotten hero left hung out to dry his life once showed promise but now he don't give a damn he lost his ambition in the jungles of Vietnam most of his old comrades are either dead or in jail lord when he dies let him into heaven he's already been to hell written and arranged by Toney Wright Stu Pendergast....lead guitar