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  1. Hello, Again I haven't posted for a long while, life gets busy. These lyrics are about how someone can have a hold over you that they can control how you feel. I understand it needs some tweaks but your input would be greatly appreciated, thanks ''You Look Good Today'' Today I pray that you will be nice, I pray that you will be kind. You hold all the cards, If your hand is fine, then i'm fine. I'll dip my toe in the water, If its cold then I'll go. When the grey skies come, You'll be sure I know. Then I feel so low, So low I could give up. You say to me: You look good today I bloody love this beautiful calm You look good today. Please be nice all the time. You look good today. Suddenly the beams they shine. You look good today. Now you got me, With your sideways look, I feel so damn not good. I need you to cradle me Like a child, I crave you. But you flipped the penny, It landed on its head. I'm living on a fifty-fifty. And you, you make my bed. Then I feel so low, So low I could give up. You say to me: You look good today I bloody love this beautiful calm You look good today. Please be nice all the time. You look good today. Suddenly the beams they shine. You look good today. When the wind changes, one day i'll go. When the bruises fade, then i'll go. When I feel strong enough, but not right now. Your grip is too tight.
  2. So I've been going through Pat Pattison's free online songwriting course through Coursera, and I have been working on this song idea for the final week's assignment. I love the lyrics, but I'm having a hard time finding the right melodic rhythm when setting them in meter. I feel like this tune is just a step or two away from being something great, and I can't quite put my finger on how exactly I need to adjust it to get it there. SO I'm turning to you guys to get some feedback. What do you think of what I have so far? Where are its problem areas? Trick That Lady Verse:She struts to the barDressed to celebrate a wakeFor life she snuffed outOf a gestating flame Legs casting fishnetsFrom a flesh-hungry waistShe's dragging the bottomOf this College Boy LakeHer craft is down to scienceBut it's religious how she moves for the killShe pounces on her preySinks her teeth into his youthComes back to do the same another dayVerse:So I strut to the barOrder two bourbons neatShe lights up her cigarette Caresses her kneeTaps her body against meLike she's playin' tambourineAs red-ribboned secrets Twist her tongue in a teaseShe undressed me with her eyes of chartreuseAs we talked over night caps and a song Through her thinly veiled ruse She sank her teeth into my youth But my amphetamine words had numbed her jaw Pre-Chorus: I let her pull on my strings I pose as her figurine I walk through her maze And feel her walls Pretending I don't know the reason Where her tattoo is placed Or the magic words To make her kingdom fall Chorus: I'm gonna trick that lady I'm gonna trick that lady I'm gonna trick that lady I'm gonna trick that lady Bridge: She fancies herself The Queen of Hearts But I know her game I'm counting her cards I'll call her bluff Right when she comes The moment she sees she is mine Pre-Chorus: I let her pull on my strings I pose as her figurine I walk through her maze And feel her walls Pretending I don't know the reason Where her tattoo is placed Or the magic words To make her kingdom fall Chorus: I'm gonna trick that lady I'm gonna trick that lady I'm gonna trick that lady I'm gonna trick that lady
  3. Hiya everyone! Just wanted to introduce myself and share a bit of my journey! Well, first I'm a singer/songwriter I play guitar, piano...and just recently got back into songwriting...In the past 3 years or so I've been recovering from addiction to alcohol and addiction in general....It's been a long road but I'm committed to sobriety & recovery mainly for the music! It has been what has kept me alive...reminded me of my purpose. I put out an EP in 2013 but only had a couple performances to promote and such because I was basically drunk all the time....a high-functioning drunk, but a drunk at that. I didn't know how to perform sober and it started to really scare me. Long story short, I couldn't keep it together and so to save myself I stopped performing and focused solely on getting sober for quite a few months... I had a rush of inspiration in 2014 after a friend had passed away but then I got scared....all the self-doubt just poured in... it all seemed too much.... so I focused my creative energies on dance, painting and cooking/baking...merely anything to avoid music...but fast forward to this year my grandmother passed and I sang for her and couldn't avoid that it's been so much of my identity and brings so much joy to others even if I don't make money off of it ...singing for my grandma showed me how valuable my gift is. So I guess you could say that now I am giving it "one last shot" in a way....Well, at least I told God like You need to help me, protect me, and strengthen me if this is what I'm meant to do because my fears are trying to bring me down making me feel like I can't handle the emotion of it all again....or give up/sacrifice/bleed for it all over again....I know music isn't what made me drink but it opens up so many emotions and once you share it it's like a drug for other people....I guess I'm just trying to figure out if/when I'll be ready to share my songs...so that's kinda where I'm at....I've given myself the deadline of October 31st to finish at least 5 of the main songs I've been working on and decide if I wanna record them or what to do....but wow what a journey it's been I've gone through years of lyrics, journals, past old/unfinished songs to try and find any diamonds in the rough! There's so much I want to say through song and I know I must be patient but at least for October I'm working super hard because I've taken big risks to pull this all together again...mainly that I'm in heaps of debt and been writing part-time as I waitress part-time praying that it's gonna be worth it.....I'll be picking up another job in November to bring in more income so I gotta trust that God will be workin miracles through me this month. I mean it is His work anyway. So any prayers and good thoughts would be greatly appreciated and will be sending the same back to you!! Looking forward to conversing on different topics here and hopefully helping one another out! Love & blessings, Anex
  4. Hi everyone I made a story-like song. It's called 'lonely pirate'. I only write the lyrics, so I'm hoping for some feedback on that, the music isn't mine. I would love to hear your opinion! Here is a link to the video: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=He13HskPWEI Lonely Pirate 0.00min -> 0.04min instr 0.05min -> 0.19min deep in the dark there was a pirate he had a black ship yet he was lonely as hell he didn't know what to do didn't know what he missed he never thought never thought that he missed some love 0.20min -> 0.26min instr 0.27min -> 0.41min as soon as the sun went down he would look at the sky thinking about this girl that he left on shore he saw her once before but never after that he only saw her once but couldn't forget her face at all 0.42min -> 0.44min instr 0.45min -> 0.59min he was the one who saw her from far far away but no one could tell him he was in love with her there was no way that he could ever know all that he knew was the friendship of his mates   1.00min -> 1.14min all he could ever think of was sailing through the night going on adventures through the whole wide world from the north to the south and all the way across from the east to the west crossing all the seas 1.15min -> 1.28min instr 1.29min -> 1.44min deep in the dark there was a pirate he had a black ship yet he was lonely as hell he didn't know what to do didn't know what he missed he never thought never thought that he missed some love 1.45min -> 1.51min instr 1.52min -> 2.05min he was always trying to find new things one day he found an old looking treasure map destination unknown he said he would go ship ahoy and then he went on his way 2.06min -> 2.09min instr 2.10min -> 2.24min then at the end of their treasure hunt he was at the shore where they left before isn't this where I saw that girl I would love to see her if I can even just once more...   2.25min -> 2.39min then on one night while he looked up watching the stars a voice rang out to him it was the girl that he loved and it turned out that she wasn't afraid of him at all 2.40min -> 2.53min looking at the stars together with him she now sits on the deck at night he couldn't give up the sailing at all but she didn't mind as long as she sat next to him 2.54min -> 3.09min and the lonely pirate no longer felt alone he looked at the stars with his girlfriend from the shore now he wouldn't wish for treasures anymore he didn't find the treasure but he found so much more 3.10min -> 3.26min he threw the treasure map back into the sea and that is the same place where it can still be found today
  5. Hi everyone I made a story-like song. It's called 'lonely pirate'. I only write the lyrics, so I'm hoping for some feedback on that, the music isn't mine. I would love to hear your opinion! Here is a link to the video: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=He13HskPWEI Lonely Pirate 0.00min -> 0.04min instr 0.05min -> 0.19min deep in the dark there was a pirate he had a black ship yet he was lonely as hell he didn't know what to do didn't know what he missed he never thought never thought that he missed some love 0.20min -> 0.26min instr 0.27min -> 0.41min as soon as the sun went down he would look at the sky thinking about this girl that he left on shore he saw her once before but never after that he only saw her once but couldn't forget her face at all 0.42min -> 0.44min instr 0.45min -> 0.59min he was the one who saw her from far far away but no one could tell him he was in love with her there was no way that he could ever know all that he knew was the friendship of his mates   1.00min -> 1.14min all he could ever think of was sailing through the night going on adventures through the whole wide world from the north to the south and all the way across from the east to the west crossing all the seas 1.15min -> 1.28min instr 1.29min -> 1.44min deep in the dark there was a pirate he had a black ship yet he was lonely as hell he didn't know what to do didn't know what he missed he never thought never thought that he missed some love 1.45min -> 1.51min instr 1.52min -> 2.05min he was always trying to find new things one day he found an old looking treasure map destination unknown he said he would go ship ahoy and then he went on his way 2.06min -> 2.09min instr 2.10min -> 2.24min then at the end of their treasure hunt he was at the shore where they left before isn't this where I saw that girl I would love to see her if I can even just once more...   2.25min -> 2.39min then on one night while he looked up watching the stars a voice rang out to him it was the girl that he loved and it turned out that she wasn't afraid of him at all 2.40min -> 2.53min looking at the stars together with him she now sits on the deck at night he couldn't give up the sailing at all but she didn't mind as long as she sat next to him 2.54min -> 3.09min and the lonely pirate no longer felt alone he looked at the stars with his girlfriend from the shore now he wouldn't wish for treasures anymore he didn't find the treasure but he found so much more 3.10min -> 3.26min he threw the treasure map back into the sea and that is the same place where it can still be found today
  6. https://www.facebook.com/caitiehiatt/ Please go check out this page. This girl is beyond amazing~ Please like and follow everything! She will be famous one day!
  7. Hey people of the sea, I could use a hand here...I am not a native speaker and really want to make this sound not too weird for your english-eyes There´s already guitar and vocals on this one, it´s quite a fast song with stakkkkkato, punk-a-like verses and a rather flowing chorus. I´d appreciate your critique on the narrative/images in general, but above all I am looking for help with some concrete parts I marked blue...parts where I am not quite sure about the language or which alternative to choose I thank you all for your help! JTE ---- On Fire Bored of this life, like to forget. Be forgotten, start out again. Memories, driftwood, float in my sight (in my mindsight?). How I wish I could just burn time. There´s no future, no more, down south, only moments to be worn out. Behind e-ver-y mystery, there is a new reality. [Interlude] No matter the place the pain stays the same. I´ve sold you more than once, but the bucks don´t feel my love... [Chorus]| We´re servants of our past, I said Can´t simply burn it to dust, I said But now there´s something on fire, I can see You put something on fire and I.... believe it´s me! (put on fire vs set on fire...what sounds better?) Nature´s obeying willingly (surrenders willingly?) To the laws of humanity (to the terms of?) Now it is only you and it´s me and we won´t leave our dreams to sleep. [Interlude] We´re playing in the sand We bend coincidence We´re ruling the dice We´re making both worlds collide [Chorus] [Bridge] You came, you sung, you inspired Now it´s thought, said and set on fire I´d rather stand alone... than I would let you go (not sure about the image here...I´d rather stand alone, than I would NOT let you go? It´s about maintaining freedom in a relationship, what do you think?) I´d rather fall myself... than I would let you down I could only be who I am... If you let me be your man (don´t like this one much, it´s too...pathetic?) [Chorus]
  8. I. when your sky and earth fall and you just can't bounce back when you fought and fought but now you've cracked because they've learnt their lines but you still don't know how to act and they shine white like angels while you consider funeral black when you speak your mind but they all look bemused because you say it's not the sunlight but shadows cast you muse when you want to smile like them but memory has mouth refuse and you've nothing to gain and only your life to lose CHORUS. i know steel feels cold risen against your temple pressed to your thoughts while your finger trembles while eyes cry bullets and you wrestle the mental and joy one day someday seems incidental dwell boy, dwell she hears you yell in being caught you realise just how low you fell it's pink and supple petaled passage of rose softens the steel if it's her you chose II. when you're blind to the light of both the moon and the sun 'cause everyone's got someone but your love life, hasn't begun when thoughts of inducing final sleep you just can't outrun 'cause you've counted life's reasons but can't think of one when you've made the decision that's it's all over come first light when in hand you tie loop and knot thinking rope's more than might when thinking about falling standing at seaside height when thinking of hanging up the gloves retiring from life's constant fight CHORUS - Extended. i know steel feels cold risen against your temple pressed to your thoughts while your finger trembles while eyes cry bullets and you wrestle the mental and joy someday seems incidental dwell boy, dwell she hears you yell in being caught you realise just how low you fell it's pink and supple petaled passage of rose softens the steel if it's her you chose to dwell boy, dwell at you she yells do you truly believe it's you for whom now toll the bells you she'll adorn inside warm is born here comes snug medicine ceasing all thoughts forlorn
  9. Even though I know how difficult it is to get a ballad cut in Nashville because everyone wants mid to uptempo songs, I still wanted my last song of the year to be from the heart. This story song is one that has been kicking around in my head for a couple of years, but is finally finished. Brent, my friend and producer, completed the final mix on Christmas Eve, so it was a nice Christmas present to myself I guess. I hope you all enjoy it, and I hope you all had a blessed Christmas with family and friends. I know I did. Best, Marvin http://soundclick.com/share.cfm?id=13282448
  10. Now i'm not just wriring some lame rhmye, but do you remember that one time, where we came at the same time? Thay was more than just some play time and more historical than some gay crime, it made me think you were my perfect design, fine, even if it wasn't a sign, you didn't have to lie, to make it so hard for your goodbye, you were so dark with tears in your eye, even though i expecially came by, not only just to say hi, but to bring by your clothes and clarify your oaths. I thought there was still hope, you just stayed still and said nope, you played some sick joke, i prayed you would stay stoked, one day your throat, will close and choke after you realize, that there are allot of guys with the same eyes, same size, but a different disguise, i'm not your regular bloke! So how bout you go bite on some soap, starting a fight, by prevoking me with insults, makes you look like a goat, like everything i've done for you is revoked! But i know you like your hair pulled and being choked, you must find it amusing that my pillow is soaked after i awoke, from a dream of you, giving him the same glare whilest being stroaked...
  11. Hi folks, this is a new video for my song "Sometimes". My brother and I made the video as we are practicing to create videos for my music as well as others. The only issue we had was that I recorded the song live in 4 takes and I didn't use a click track. We had a tough time editing the 4 live audio tracks to the video tracks. We will never do another video like this again. Way too exhausting. I welcome feedback good or bad. Cheers, David
  12. You were sleeping You were lost, and you were found And I was happy My whole life had turned around I was waiting And I hoped you’d wait for me But I was wrong My whole world was make believe And he came along He was strong and he was proud Now you’re happy And I’m a sad face inside your crowd (Chorus) And I’m alone And you have your handsome prince I have lost moments And you have your true love’s kiss And I can’t sleep, Cause I know he’s holding you I can’t breathe My snow white thoughts are turning blue I doubt you’ve changed But I’m not the way I was before Call me Lonely Cause I’m not Happy anymore Damn those birds How can they sing a happy tune? Damn the trees Damn those cartoon raccoons too I’ve had enough I won’t whistle I won’t work Don’t look at me Like I’m some kind of jerk He had it all But he still took it all away I was Happy Now I’m begging you to stay Chorus I was high How quickly did I fall? I stand broken Like the mirror on the wall You over looked me Am I such a little man? It’s not fair Though you’re the fairest in the land And while you slept Your dreams were coming true And I can’t sleep All I do is think of you Chorus
  13. I hear her laugh I picture her face She’ll make this world Such a wonderful place I forgot her name, Could it be Kate? We’re brought to together By a digital fate That dating site Gave me a shove With our stats We should fit like a glove I asked her out Today is the night Is it too much to ask That its love at first sight? And I, I, I, I, I Want a girl who is stacked And I, I, I, I, I Want my mom off my back And I’ve Been searching so long, so long, so long Could this be the start of a beautiful love song? A beautiful love song A beautiful love song I show up on time, I go in the bar Sitting alone, Is my bright shining star My heart starts to race, She’s looking so fine I asked “Are you hellkitty169?” She looked at me, like I was so lame She said leave me alone I’m watching the game And from behind, I felt a tap A girl asked, “Are you Hotboobytrap?” And I, I, I, I, I Want a girl who is stacked And I, I, I, I, I Want my mom off my back And I’ve Been searching so long, so long, so long Can this be the start of a beautiful love song? A beautiful love song A beautiful love song She asked where I lived, I said with my mom I know what you’re thinking, but it’s really the bomb I don’t pay rent, there’s home cooked meals And when I need to, I can borrow her wheels She wanted to know if I was employed I said I make phone aps with my first cousin Lloyd I asked her bra size, I bet it’s a B But if she stuff it, she could make it a D And I, I, I, I, I Want a girl who is stacked And I, I, I, I, I Want my mom off my back And I’ve Been searching so long, so long, so long Can this be the start of a beautiful love song? A beautiful love song A beautiful love song I was a nice guy, everything was on track Then she went to the bathroom And never came back
  14. She’s a mess of gorgeous chaos And you can see it in her eyes She’s a taste of precious freedom Like when a bird first learns to fly She’s a rediscovered moment In a past that you now know She’s a fire you can’t hold on to And a hand you can’t let go (Chorus) And she knows you Like the ocean knows the shore And she loves you Like no one has before But you stand there With one foot outside the door Thinking she can’t weather Your brief midsummer storm She’s a whisper like an angel Calling to you by your name And a horse out jumping canyons That is much too wild to tame She’s a kiss upon your fingers And a smile that is returned She’s a mention and a hint Of a life you once thought burned Chorus She’s an instant, an eternity A lovely autumn day And a linger of a melody You can’t figure out to play She’s a hope that’s still worth having As she’s moving you along And like the rising of the sun each day Her love is never wrong Chorus
  15. The engine turns, but doesn’t start Like my life, it lacks a spark With no thought of inspiration No grain of determination No sense of destination No place to go but home And if the car would start I’d go I’d go, I’d try to drive As far as I can tonight With no thought that I Should even try To make things right this time And my desires burn to ashes As each new car passes me by And I try to find a ray of hope But I don’t, and in the end I know If this is all there is I’ll go I’ll go, I’ll try to drive As far as I can tonight With no thought that I Should even try To make things right this time To make things right this time And if the tables turned Would you turn away? And save your tears for another day With all your good intentions wrong With all the complications you’ve cause If this car would start I’m gone I’m gone, I’m out of here As I lose faith in the value of my fears And all the things that are keeping me here, I’m gone. I’m gone, to a place unknown With no place left to go but home And if the car would start I’d go And if the car would start I’d go I’d go off In a new direction Over burned bridges resurrected With a Torn Moon climbing in the sky It’s so hard to say goodbye It’s so hard to say goodbye It’s so hard to say goodbye But I will try And all the things I hide inside my mind Will reveal themselves in time And before my ambitious spirit dies I’ve got to try I’ve got to try to find a ray of hope But I don’t and in the end I know If this is all there is I’ll go And I’ll go off, in a new direction Over burned bridges resurrected With a Torn Moon climbing in the sky It’s so hard to say good bye (x3) But I will try (x3) But it’s so hard to say goodbye
  16. Hello everyone, I've just released my newest original single - Love Triangle! NOTE: Song is made on iOS (iPhone/iPad) via AppStore app. ***NEW SONG RELEASE*** Love Triangle「愛情三角形」 https://soundcloud.com/tripmx/love-triangle Also, my official music website has also been updated accordingly with the sample preview added! Thank you all!
  17. Hello my name is Shannon, I'm an Oregonian. First time I have ever posted on a site that I feel fate has lead me to. Looking for insight, guidance, and honesty with my deepest thoughts, dreams and emotions. I'm looking forward to reading and sharing my thoughts on yours. I love to write, ink to paper....there is no format, no template.....just me. I would love to one day hear my words put to music, and be that song with those words that give you goose bumps. I have no favorite genre of music, I engulf myself with any music or song that has DEPTH. Country, pop, r&b, folk, celtic, rock, blues whatever it may be if it has words that resonate with me.."I'm hooked". Thank you for reading, super excited to join this community.
  18. This is the final draft, only madea couple of changes cause the comments on it were good. So thank you.. (VERSE 1) Baby you know, The right things to say. You make me laugh When I am down. Loving you comes easily. (CHORUS) You tell me you love me, He never did. You let me choose, He never did. You make me safe, He never did. I was on guard around him. You make me feel loved, Make me feel wanted, He never did. (VERSE 2) He put me through hell, Made sure I fell. Told myself I was done, Done with love, You came along, That all changed. You made me believe again, Let me start over again. (CHORUS) You tell me you love me, He never did. You let me choose, He never did. You make me safe, He never did. I was on guard around him. You make me feel loved, Make me feel wanted, He never did.    (VERSE 3) I always get the truth with you, I got lies with him. You know my flaws, You don’t care. He used them, used Them to bring me down. You are happy staying, He was happy straying. (CHORUS) You tell me you love me, He never did. You let me choose, He never did. You make me safe, He never did. I was on guard around him. You make me feel loved, Make me feel wanted, He never did. (VERSE 4) No need for me, Too ever doubt you, You have never gave me Reason too. Trusting you is easy. With you, I can be me. Can this always be? (CHORUS) You tell me you love me, He never did. You let me choose, He never did. You make me safe, He never did. I was on guard around him. You make me feel loved, Make me feel wanted, He never did.
  19. This is my last demo for 2014. The song is called "Too Good To Be Forgot". I wrote this song about growing, and the memories that will never be forgotten. Hopefully it will be relatable to everyone who listens. We kind of went somewhere between Texas country and the Tom Petty realm for this recording. I hope you all like it! http://soundclick.com/share.cfm?id=13004060
  20. Hi, Haven't been writting much lately, but decided to post a lyric I wrote 'bout a month ago to see how it'd fare. I consider it pretty good but I would like other people's input, since I like to write good songs and not junk ones. Anyway, the inspiration for this came from a picture in the local paper that had a group of kids in it, that's when I thought it'd be cool to write a song from the perspective of a guy who's fallen for one of the girls in the picture and even though he sees her every now and then he can't make himself speak to her. Here it is, Please Notice Me (Intro) (Verse) I saw your picture in the paper, You looked so good in there Had a smile on your face With a curl in your hair I couldn't tell you how much You inspired me seeing you there (Chorus) So I'm writing songs And they're all about you Each is written for the same reason Won't you please notice me? (Verse) Now I guess I'm a little shy But I'll tell you the reasons why I'm so afraid of turning you off By the words I might not say right But I find it easier to sing a song And let it tell you what I can't even sigh (Chorus) So I'm writing songs And they're all about you Each is written for the same reason Won't you please notice me? (Solo) (Bridge) What do I need to do to get you to look at me? I think I've tried everything in the book you see But that still don't make you notice me So I wrote this song to explain my problem to you (Solo) (Verse) Work so hard to think of words to say But when I see you they fade away Even though I had it all planned out I lose my mind when you pop up But maybe I'll remember these lyrics 'Cos they're so much easier to say (Chorus) So I'm writing songs And they're all about you Each is written for the same reason Won't you please notice me? (Verse) Lyrics should be expressive but I'm not sure if they're enough To explain my feelings for you they'd be more expressive than talk 'Cos I'd only forget what to say Or say some kinda foolish stuff (Chorus) So I'm writing songs And they're all about you Each is written for the same reason Won't you please notice me? (Solo) (Outro)
  21. Sitting by the riverside I know your standing behind that tree Just watching as I stare into the sunset But not once do you ask why The sun is my love And its been there since day one When others have left When I was defeated and done The sun was always there through the worse And the rays are like a hug held tight I have felt so close To the one thing that gives me hope and light One day when I am torn down I will be with the sun to shine my rays on another person So they can fell true warmth and love
  22. What I am wondering from this song is whether the theme of running (jogging) and the idea of running towards happiness in the form of a loved one come together adequately. Does one get a sense of the narrator's struggle to get where he is? Run From Monday I saw you walking your dog As my lungs Begged for more fuel, I played it cool I would have ran to catch you But I had Miles to go, I'm far from home The tension, like a sickness, Does embrace Weighted shoulders, Taking over The sidewalk is unyielding Propelling me from this place Exhale the dark Now my life starts [Chorus] Today is a paper cut, today is a paper cut Frequent exposure makes the skin rough Layers of crosshatch, strange to the touch Tomorrow another one, tomorrow another one There were times when This distance Was out of reach I was not good Enough, and Neither was she [bridge] I've been practicing, can't you tell All the things I do so well I've been practicing how to speak With tenderness, before I sleep Like most good things I hold true This starts and ends with you
  23. This song is another one that pulls on my heart strings...It is about the same guy I wrote "Through The Years" for...this is the better of the two I believe....I really just love these lyrics...tell me what you think Went Back Verse 1: Ya had me fooled, let me tell ya Actually thought we could be But then you turned on me And everything went back (Pause) You don’t see what you do to me When everything is gone Thought for a moment I’d be okay But everything went back Refrain: Back to square one Where we don’t belong Saw this all before like déjà vu hardcore Heard it all the time Maybe it’s a sign A sign to forget you Verse 2: You know how much you mean to me Yeah, that’s where we began But then you found a friend of mine And everything went back (Pause) You can say that you miss me Then how come you don’t show It was supposed to be me and you Then everything went back Refrain: Back to square one Where we don’t belong Saw this all before like déjà vu hardcore Heard it all the time Maybe it’s a sign A sign to forget you Verse 3: We used to be the best of friends Then we met a very bad end I could be myself That’s when everything went back (Pause) You're probably with her right now Acting as if I don’t even exist And I know what you're thinking Thinking I should be pissed Yeah…that’s when everything went BLACK
  24. regular - verse italic - bridge bold - chorus All critique welcome! Please and thank you! -- Staring at the ceiling Thinking of you Only my heart I’m clutching And in my heart there’s only you I never saw this life so freely Sometimes it’s hard to tell what’s a dream and what is reality I’ve been touched I can hardly stop from crying I’ve been touched Hopelessly in love, I’m dying I’ve been touched I can hardly stop from crying I’ve been touched Hopelessly in love, I’m dying I never thought I would be who I am today Oh, I never thought I would be who I am today So come out and show yourself For my kids, my wife and me Please don’t put me on the shelf All I want is to be I don’t wanna die Wishing there was more to life So come out and save me from this strife ‘Cause you see… I’ve been touched I can hardly stop from crying I’ve been touched Hopelessly in love, I’m dying I’ve been touched I can hardly stop from crying I’ve been touched Hopelessly in love, I’m dying And when the lights go out I hope to see your face before I go out And when the lights go out I hope to see your face… Before I go…
  25. hey guys i need some lyrics for my song , its a slow song i m not that good at songwritting so please can you help me !!!! thanks