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  1. Hello colleagues! You helped me before to pinpoint problems in my previous versions of the lyrics. After 6 revisions I think it is pretty close to the finish. I wanted to do a very last check before recording it. Please let me know what you think of it. Any help or comments or suggestions will be much appreciated! ---------------------------------------------------------------- *** Inside Your Game *** 1st Verse: Call me, just call me, tell me what you're up to I'm so tired, tired of doing time, with no sign to hear you 2nd Verse: Play me, you can play me, re-frame me inside your game Stay with me, stay and lie to me, I'll never be the same 1st Chorus: I try again... to get to you when we're starting to play yeah we're starting to play And though there was no one who won in this game I'm still gonna play the same I try again... thoughts are flying away with no sign of regret with no reason to stay Want them to break free and get out, I don't care while you're still around 3rd Verse: Longer, days get longer, I'm longing to catch sight of you It's stronger, gets much stronger, and wronger and past due Bridge: Out of my mind! Truth or lie? I have no clue. Are you on my side or am I left behind? It's so uncertain. I can't get close to you 2nd Chorus: I try again... to get to you when we're starting to play yeah we're starting to play I know there was no one who won in this game I'm still gonna play the same I try again... thoughts are flying away with no sign of regret with no reason to stay Hoping to get to the firm ground. Lost or found? Ending: Are lonely nights here to stay? Will I be lost in this game? Or should it turn around and we'll be heading to another round Forever seasons changing one another and I'm sure that day will come The day when I hear steps behind my door
  2. Songstuff lyrics critique board

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  3. Newmember

    hey guys! Im kind of new here so any friendship offer would be greatly appreciated. also, im an amateur in writing lyrics and i dont know how to make a tune for my songs. but im looking for someone who could review my songs and tell me what he/she thinks about it, so if you know anybody, or somebody who knows anybody i would be really thankful. so anyone?
  4. Lyrics Critique

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  5. Need A Lyrics Critique

    im a 17 year who wants to be a rapper/buisness owner, and i need help to see if im any good lyrically. Verse 1: black sheep i have become a social recluse from all the social abuse it makes me want to hang up the noose make it tight never let it loose would people miss me or would i not need a excuse for my absence and thats the reason for my eteranl sadness and that on top of my mental madness and my hearts new found blackness ive tried to fight it but ive become satins apparatus and because of this convoluted and my personality has become so diluted because ive been secluded i speak in pain and i speak it fluint maybe i would be different if i had been included but i had to be secluded Chorus im tired of being the black sheep tired of being the outcast thats why i started rhymeing and spitting real fast but the depressions seeping in and i cannot outlast and like i said im tried of being the black sheep wish i had a friend to keep me from the eternal sleep when the grim reaper reaps
  6. There's Always A First...

    Hi guys, Since it's the holiday season and all and it's all about sharing I've decided to share one of my first songs that I wrote about 10 years ago.. I'de like to know what you guys think about it, how it makes you feel, if you can relate to it, what you think would improve it, or if you just don't necessarily 'feel it'. Thanks and have a great holiday! "Have you ever felt alone like no one really cares, and when you talk to them they just stare into space. This feeling kind of sucks.. cuz you feel like.. an old toy thrown away, a birthday forgotten, A call never returned, a person dying. Sitting here by myself in this empty hollow space, memories playing in my head of old times. White fabric surrounding me, dust on clocks gathering.. This feeling kinda sucks.. cuz you feel like.. an old toy thrown away, a birthday forgotten, a call never returned, a person dying.. Thinking of all the friends I've ever had, a distance memory of the past. I call, but they never pick up.. This feeling kinda sucks.. cuz you feel like.. an old toy thrown away, a birthday forgotten, a call never returned, a person dying.."
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