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  1. I wrote this song after I watched the Netflix series 13 Reasons why. What do you think about it?
  2. pop demo

    Hi everyone, Never got this song critiqued. I wrote it, came up with the melodies and harmonies and laid down the vocals for the demo (I'm not a singer or rapper). Lyrics below. Let me know what you think in general. I'm just starting to look for pop producers to work with so I'm trying to figure out what songs could attract them to want to collab with me. Thanks in advance! Under The Moonlight LYRICS Verse 1 Hey babe I’ve been looking at you Doing your thing the whole night Had to say something before You walked out my life I don’t got no lines I’m just hoping that I’m your type Cause you’re my type Yeh, eh Eh, eh Pre-chorus One dance Is all I need girl To show Show you my world And maybe We’ll fall in love tonight One dance Is all I need girl To show Show you my world And maybe We’ll fall in love tonight Chorus 1 Under the moonlight (5x) Verse 2 Come with me I can see a smile Coming in It’s starting to show All you gotta do’s take my hand And we can go, oh Get lost in the moment While we’re dancing real slow Real slow Oh, oh Oh, oh Pre-chorus Chorus 1 Bridge Ready Hold on me real steady Don’t worry bout a thing Cause I’mma treat you like a lady Like a diamond Girls like you It’s hard to find them You got something special And that’s why you outshine them It feels Like this right here was meant to be This magic between you and me It’s like we’re starting our story Starting our history Chorus 2 Under the moonlight (9x)
  3. This is an original song called formation. I started jogging and then started writing and I kinda put them together and this is what I came up with. Lyrics: Well, I crossed that dangerous bridge, and I won't be back again I'm on a road where I see a path, I'm in a place where I can't look back I keep on going till there's nothing left, till times up and I'm out of breath I keep on runnin', runnin' free, ain't nothing stopping me I look ahead and I see a light, my eyes are open wide far from where I use to be, trust me, I don't miss misery been down in the dumps and now my heads up, so watch out for me I'm the first to arrive but the last in line, and now it's my time to turn on the light; turn on the light Dedication, motivation, I'm taking it into a running formation Dedication, motivation, I'm taking it into a running formation The doors are open for me, I just need to walk in no hesitation, no waitin', answering the callin' blue sky fresh wind, I feel the light again big moves I can't lose, running in my shoes forward march, in line, I hope I make it in time I see the place, no mistakes, I like it when the ground breaks gimmie room, no attitude, just let me break through walk in wit da big grin, this is where the story begins Dedication, motivation I'm taking it into a running formation Dedication, motivation I'm taking it into a running formation Dedication, motivation I'm taking it into a running formation Dedication, motivation I'm taking it into a running formation so watch out for me
  4. Hey folks, I'm returning after a pretty good hiatus. I haven't written a lot lately but, I've been tinkering with this song a bit. This version is mostly up to snuff by my standards as far as the performances and recording. It's not at all final though. I thought I'd ask for feedback before I get too far along to learn new tricks. Any and all feedback is welcome and very much appreciated. Let it rip! Here's the new mix. I took as much advice from the reviews as made sense to me and what I'm going for with the song. Give this new version a listen if you have a chance and see what you think Got one cigarette one more drink but I'm over it so much for getting some sleep tonight I got friends I can't save we gotta get out while we still feel brave I don't care if I see your face again I won't be around when the walls come down This is my last song, I'm going to hong kong You want me, come find me. I leave nothing behind me No apology right now I'll go to a place that no one else'll know I need a robot butler for a friend but I'll be back to fight if the money's right This is my last song, I'm going to hong kong You want me, come find me. I leave nothing behind me This is the last burnt bridge from Hung Hom to Kellet isle this time the world is ours you could have it for a smile lined up single file This is my last song, I'm going to hong kong You want me, come find me but bring yourself an army No apology
  5. Hello gang. This is a song that is a bit of a different sound for me. I've never put it on anything that I've released, probably because it's so different from my usual attitude. I've always thought it had some merit though. Just wanted to share it and hear your opinions. It was recorded a while ago and maybe not up to my current standards. I still have the tracks though and can make edits. That said any and all feedback is welcome and hoped for. This introduction is longer than the song I dreamed the stars up in the sky were summer days that passed us by and the flowers and the loon were disappearing like the moon and in my fright, compelled into the darkness I ran down the hallway to your door Cold and trembling in the light I tried to tell you about my night and how the stars up in the sky are summer days that passed us by and just then there came a flash across the window and you said look... they're coming down again They're coming down again. They're falling down
  6. Hey folks, This is a rework of a song I posted once before, but It's so different I didn't post it in the same feed. It's a 1+1 but if it works out i'd like to do more with it in the future. See what you think. Don't hold back on the comments please. https://soundcloud.com/spadanny/ring-a-bell New Version https://soundcloud.com/spadanny/ring-a-bell-1 How do you do? It's nice to meet you. or have we met? I think not yet. Just now, somehow, out of the blue You ring a bell. Do I know you well? You ring a bell where I'm standing You ring a bell. Do I know you well? Cause you ring a bell in my heart It's such a f*cked up night you give a lovely light that brings to mind a long forgotton time that never happened but it might You ring a bell. Do I know you well? You ring a bell where I'm standing You ring a bell. Do I know you well? Cause you ring a bell in my heart
  7. Hi Guys, check out my new song "High or Low" "High or Low" - By Michael Law (Original Song) "High or Low" - Music & Lyrics By Michael Law http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hBK9LIK_50U Youtube http://www.youtube.com/michaellawltd Facebook https://www.facebook.com/MichaelLawLtd Google + https://plus.google.com/u/0/+MichaelLawLtd/posts
  8. Thursday Night Original Song - "Recurring Dream" http://emilyandersonmusic.com Lyrics: "I woke up in the morning to a crash of thunder and a flash of lightening. I sat up thinking of my recurring dream that was rudely disrupted. In the dream I'm running from something, and my feet pick up off the ground, and I slowly rise, higher and higher, to the top of the trees, then I keep going to the top of the clouds, with a cold mist in my face. I'm thankful for the rain and I'm happy for electricity. But when it wakes me up, I remember to pray that the morning finds us alive. And dreams are barely there like memories except they never were. And when the thunder dies down I can go back to sleep, but the dream has faded. And when it returns on some other night, for the moment I'll pretend that it's real.
  9. A few friends have told me this reminds them of another song. I'm pretty sure the recording and arrangement are decent, but I'm wondering if it's worth listening to despite the chord progression being pretty typical. I'd like to know what you guys and gals think. Also feel free to tear up the song and arrangement and recording in any constructive way Hey lady, I've learned my lessons about love And it just hit me like a dove I want to be your paradise cause lately, I've been so long lost at sea You look like heaven to me Can I be your paradise Paradise... Hey Lady, you can't say nothin' I ain't heard I'm gonna hang on every word I want to be your paradise Cause baby Ive had it all as they say and it don't do much for me I want to be your paradise Paradise... ive made the same mistakes over and over again I've just got one more bottle and one more message to send Can I be your friend Hey listen you know nothing works out how we plan you can build a castle in my sand I want to be your paradise hey baby, I want to swim in your lagoon I want to jump over your moon I want to be your paradise Paradise
  10. This is an older song that I've remixed and would love to hear some honest opinions on. Anything from the mix to the lyric or anything else that you feel like shareing is welcome. Thanks so much. Its only been heard locally and mostly by friends so its still open for suggestions. I decided I would raise my head one time to see what we'd begun Saw the arm of a man that was ten feet tall hold a candle to the sun It was late one night I shook awake I was rattled by the sound of sirens wailing through the wind as the fire was coming down Looked in a hole dark and low where they'd never seen the sky saw fire dancing in the pan and the fish lay down and fry it must have been several weeks ago that I fell outta line saw a world of men falling in the see and the blind leading the blind If you'd seen what I've seen you would still be running away there's no life without love
  11. Hey guys. I've finally finished the recording of my album. Two years in the making. I owe a lot of gratitude to you guys for the feedback and helping me make it better. Anyhoo, here's the last song I've recorded for it. I'd appreciate any and all feedback, critique, or comments. Thank you! In the after hours the CB never sleeps I was never one for judging the company it keeps We mostly eat in silence and go our separate ways yesterday a stranger raised a hand to wave and I guess I would be lonely if that were all there really is Chorus If I could sleep all the way to lydalisk would I wake up in the comfort of your arms how many nights I dreamed of your sweet kiss but in my mind I'm on my way, the way to lydalisk If you change the dial, something comes across some say it's static, never grows no moss gotta keep the wheels in between the lines must be getting somewhere following the signs and I think, there's something out there as I climb another ridge Chorus Bridge Com'on love, fight like a man You've got to give me something I can understand I could drive all night, and I just might, If I don't find someplace to land Chorus
  12. This is a new song I've been working on, so please excuse the poor recording quality and the first cut vocal track. Is it worth taking to the next step and making into a better quality recording? All opinions and criticism are welcome! Thanks guys! Lyrics: Angels have fallen, And gotten back up, You are no different, So please don't give up on me, Said a million times, That you've had enough, But still you never, seem to leave, You're the kind of person, Who wants the ending, Before the story, Never want to battle, But you always want the glory, And I'm sorry about the past, It isn't my intention to insult you, But if you let him walk all over you, He's gonna do it again, Angels have fallen, And gotten back up, You are no different, So please don't give up, Said a million times, That you've had enough, Angels have fallen, Fallen down, You told him again, That you're done with his nonsense, But when everyone tells you to leave, You're always on the fence, These threats without action, They still have no meaning, Regardless of how many, Times you repeat them, You're the kind of person, Who wants the ending, Before the story, Never want to battle, But you always want the glory, And I'm sorry about the past, It isn't my intention to insult you, But if you let him walk all over you, He's gonna do it again, Angels have fallen, And gotten back up, You are no different, So please don't give up, Said a million times, That you've had enough, Angels have fallen, Fallen down, He isn't what you wanted, So why not try to take a chance, And if you ever really leave him, I'll be waiting for you, For you to take my hand, Angels have fallen, And gotten back up, You are no different, So please don't give up, Said a million times, That you've had enough, Angels have fallen, Fallen down, Angels have fallen, Angels have fallen, And gotten back up, Angels have fallen, Angels have, Angels have fallen, And gotten back up. Update: Thought I'd also post a version that just includes vocals and guitar for those who think that it would sound better:
  13. Hey! I am a singer-songwriter from Estonia. This is my first single "Subtle" from my first album "To Console the Inconsolable" http://aboutpoetry.bandcamp.com/ The video is also made by myself http://youtu.be/MG9Yw0S7GDY What do you think? If you like it, feel free to share it on your facebook Peace! Maarja https://www.facebook.com/aboutpoetrypage
  14. Hi, I wanted to know what you all think about this song, whether it is the melody, the lyrics, or the production which attracts you! I posted links of soundcloud and the music video from youtube. https://soundcloud.com/itssamad/moments-samad-prod-by-harsh
  15. Hey everyone! I've got a new song and video: If you like it, feel free to share it with your friends! Peace! Maarja https://www.facebook.com/aboutpoetrypage
  16. Back Years ago, I played in a band called the Trust. I remember we where rehearsing in and old railroad car and came up with this one, it was one of my favorite songs to play. so fun so much energy. I hope you enjoy my version of it as much as I liked re creating it. http://www.mixposure.com/terry-ponder/audio/17452/tongue-tied Peace
  17. 'The world is filled with people ​who's troubles get lost in the crowd ​No way to deal ​with all the pain they feel, ​lost with no way out ​But not anymore ​We won't be ignored ​by the world we'll conquer ​This is our time to soar' Could I get some opinions? This is my first attempt at song writing. Thank You!
  18. This song is about that last moment between here and somewhere else. when a moment has gone wrong, its not meant to be a morbid song, just something I think about every now and then. http://www.mixposure.com/terry-ponder/audio/4905/wishing-for-another-day Wishing for another day I’m a million miles away my friend and there’s a ringing in my ears I hear them talking on the wind and minutes turn to years I feel your hands hold me down i see the panic in your eyes i feel my world slowing down and I see you rushing by I’m wishing for another day wishing for a another day I can feel every breath I take Running through my soul and captured by a vacant look while reaching for control I feel your breath on my chest your hands on my face your screaming for answers but its silent in this place I’m wishing for another day wishing for a another day I’m a million miles away my friend and I can taste your tears there’s a movie playing in my head the story of my years I feel your hands letting go I see the sadness in your eyes and I feel my breath slipping away my soul is rushing by I’m wishing for another day wishing for a another day
  19. Heres a song I wrote a few years ago. I've always been partial to it and never thought I had the right recording. Here's another stab at it. As always, please give me your honest opinions if you care to share. Thanks! https://soundcloud.com/spadanny/07-danny-rains-mr-clean Well I've been hard at it remodeling this song and here's the result. Let me know what you think of the new version Here is the new and maybe final version. It's complete with background electric guitar and a slightly remixed bass part. I'm kinda liking it. Let me know how it strikes you. I believe that I have wings to fly but right now I just take the bus Me and boss been living on cheap wine but it doesn't really bother us Now I'll be parking my sports cars and writing my memoirs like nothing this worlds ever seen When my destination catches up with my dreams then I will be Mr. Clean Pleased to meet you, pardon the mess, my other lifes in the shop But leave you name and your address, I'll send a post card when I reach the top I've been thinking big and living small, I guess there's just no in between but when my destination catches up with my dreams I will be Mr. Clean Had a little too much fun last night, I probably should get some sleep instead of laying here holding my head, making promises that I can't keep if lady luck never shines on me, I guess what you get is what you see but when my destination catches up with my dreams then I will be Mr. Clean when my destination catches up with my dreams then I will be Mr. Clean
  20. Hi Guys! & Girls! Sure don't seem to get to spend enough time around here these days! "I've Got A Tree" is about a local logging trend to cut and remove far too many trees for my liking. The sad thing is lots & lots of little critters (as my friend Toney would say) end up homeless. In this song I'm offering up our trees as their new homes. At 1-3/4 minutes, it's more of a midtrack type of a song, but with little effort could be expanded. Thanks a bunch for listening! As always, if you have any thoughts or comments... I'm all ears! Somewhere on it's way to cyberspace, about 25% of the volume jumped ship...I'm sure it's around here somewhere! For some reason it's not leaving a cloud, but you can click on the link and it takes you right to Soundcloud. http://soundcloud.com/rick-glynn/ive-got-a-tree-if-you-want-to "I've Got A Tree" Lyrics & Music by Rick Glynn All Rights Reserved - 2014 Crash in the woods the trees come down only the animals hear the sound Repeat Of the thrashing little branches only the animals, hear the sound Little birdie on the window sill tell me your story I know you will Where do you live now that your tree is gone? how do your babies get along? I've got a tree if you want to live there it's not very big but I'm glad to share And the chainsaw man is coming the chainsaw man is coming I've got a tree if you want to live there
  21. This is a song that will be on my newest CD that no one is going to buy I'd like to know any thoughts you have on it, though I mean for it to be a bit tongue in cheek, so if you have an opinion on whether that worked out I'd be interested in that especially. Also how does this mix sound? Don't hold back on me either. Kick my ass. Fiddle courtesy of my friend Judi Warner. Thanks folks. I'm not into catching every fish in the sea but if you like messing how bout messing with me its not complicated, Im not talking about romance I just love the way you do your mating dance she goes up like a rocket headed straight for the sun she comes down like a leaf and she kicks like a gun she starts swayin' her hips that's when I go into a trance Cause I love the way you do your mating dance The first time I saw her it was a saturday night I wound up drinking whiskey and got into a fight The next thing I knew I woke up drunk in France I love to watch you do your mating dance Its getting hotter and hotter, Im drinkin' whiskey and water The band is kickin' and shakin' bout to bring home the bacon and I'm about to gamble, do you want to take a chance Come show me how you do your mating dance I'm not into catching every fish in the sea but if you like messing how bout messing with me its not complicated, Im not talking about romance I just love the way you do your mating dance
  22. Hi! This is a video of a talent show I was in. I wrote this song called "Holding On Too Tight" and I performed it with just my guitar since that's all I really have! I ended up getting second place out of 21 (!!!!!!!!!) so I wanted some more feedback on how I performed and how I sounded and I guess the song in general! This was my very first time performing at all so I am definitely a beginner, but I really want hard honesty since I'm pretty sure my grandmother has to tell me I was great! Thank you! http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sjUEycxvwhE&feature=youtu.be
  23. "Trust In Love" - Music & Lyrics By Michael Law This is an original song I wrote. I wrote it based on something my mum said to me. She said "Love is a scary thing cuz you are putting your trust & heart in someone else's hands. But sometimes you have to trust they will do right by you. The world is a lonely place if you refuse to let anyone in." http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ve-BRKbvXMs
  24. Just wondering what you guys think of this song. I've been kicking this piece of music around a long time. This is the second lyric/melody I've written for it. I know it's simple and I'm not sure why I've been attached to it. Anyway any comments, criticism or impressions are welcome and much anticipated. As always take the gloves off. Thanks so much for your time and effort. It's always helpful! https://soundcloud.com/spadanny/the-world-without-me Here's the new one. I added some harmony vocals as many of you suggested. i also tried to work on the drums. Let me know what you think! https://soundcloud.com/spadanny/the-world-without-me-new woke up before the clocks today I listened to the branches sway I walked around inside my shoes I searched myself I searched for clues no one I passed would meet my eyes I wasn't there to my surprise I've seen the world without me and everything is ok I stood alone out in the street the cars passed below my feet the lights changed I wasn't scared I wasn't brave I wasn't there nothing to lose nothing to share and once I laughed without a care I've seen the world without me and everything is ok even Marie found someone new and someone lived inside my room and all my friends still got along I looked around, hell I was gone I've seen the world without me and everything is ok and it goes on and on and...
  25. Merry Christmas, Here's a song I'm messing around with. It's bare bones and could probably use some filling out. Any comments on the songwriting, arrangement, production, or otherwise are appreciated. As always, kick my butt. I need it. https://soundcloud.com/spadanny/ring-a-bell harmony vocal remix with new lead vocal https://soundcloud.com/spadanny/ring-a-bell-remixed The final (hopefully though do critique please) mix of this song. After consideration I decided to rerecord all of the vocals and add some keys. I also changed the line "do you ride a yellow bike" to "do you drive a yellow car" to eliminate confusion about the age of the narrator/singer. Thanks to Skyhammer for pointing that out. Made some other tweaks but I wont bore you. Let me know what you think if you have 2 and half minutes. As always thanks for the feedback! https://soundcloud.com/spadanny/ring-a-bell-2014-re-remixed Hello how are you I think we might have met before maybe I've seen you at the dollar store Do you ride a yellow bike, did you go to summer camp do you know a guy named ray that has a lava lamp I remember you out of the blue You ring a bell, do I know you well You ring a bell in my heart You ring a bell, do I know you well You ring a bell, think I love you wait a minute before you go you know it's not every day that you meet someone and you gotta say I think you were in a book I read or a novel that I said I was gonna write sometime, but I never did I remember you out of the blue you ring a bell, do I know you well you ring a bell, in my heart, you ring a bell, do I know you well you ring a bell, think I love you ring out ring out ring out ring out And if we never get together We can just say well whatever You ring a bell you ring a bell, do I know you well you ring a bell