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  1. The first collab of Johan (Jambrains on SongStuff) and Karen under the banner of their new virtual band Ashes for Dreams https://soundcloud.com/ashesfordreams/love-gone-cold LOVE GONE COLD Verse 1:The thought of living life aloneOf rattling round here on my ownYou know it frightens meYou say your words meant nothingSo tell me why you said themPlease enlighten mePre-chorusYou said we'd last foreverTook my hand and promised never to let goSo tell me what has changed for you Cos how can I be better if I don't knowChorus:I'm standing in the ashes of a love gone cold, a love gone cold,I didn't even know the fire had died, a love gone cold,You wanted me to love you more, not cast you aside This is not the dream that I was soldVerse 2:You're right I fell so hard for you I spoke about our future with such confidenceI knew that I could bare my soulUnleash all of my demons without consequencePre-chorus:But fear has taken hold of meTurned me into someone you don’t knowI refuse to drag you down with me I had to turn the other way to let you goChorus:I'm standing in the ashes of a love gone cold, a love gone cold,I didn't even know the fire had died, a love gone cold,You wanted me to love you more, not cast you aside This is not the dream that I was soldM8:Can’t you see I’ll love you still my dear You might have turned from me but I’m still hereI’ll be the sun to melt that icy fearYou’ll be alright if I can hold you nearToo late my love, too late for me to stayIt wasn’t me who took your hand that dayI’m sorry for believing I could changeYou can’t love an illusion anywayChorus:I'm standing in the ashes of a love gone cold, a love gone cold,I didn't even know the fire had died, a love gone cold,You wanted me to love you more, not cast you aside This is not the dream that I was sold
  2. **** I DID A LITTLE WORK ON THIS EARLIER - ADDED SOME EXTRA INSTRUMENTATION AND BASS (FOR STEVE). I HAVEN'T RE-RECORDED THE VOCALS YET, BUT INTEND TO DO THAT NEXT AT SOME POINT THIS WEEK. I WOULD APPRECIATE ANY COMMENTS ON THE NEW MIX AND EXTRA INSTRUMENTATION... CHEERS THE NEW MIX IS FURTHER DOWN THE PAGE - WILL KEEP THE ORIGINAL HERE, IF ANYONE WANTS TO HEAR THE DIFFERENCE **** Hi all - this track is composed using the new Output Analog Strings and drums by Battery 4 (not really happy with them listening back). I will be adding more instrumentation and harmonies, but just looking for opinions so far. It is deliberate that I have kept the same pattern going throughout with slight changes. (Once I had got this far, I thought it was sounding like something else - if you have heard Dream To Sleep by H2O or Something Good by Paul Haig - you may think it sounds familiar!!! ) Hope you like... https://soundcloud.com/moodman-1/i-know-15042017-2115/s-pYc2E I KNOW (music/lyrics by Richard Tracey) If there was a little moment For me to be by myself Then I would take it Every once in a while If there was a little time That I could put aside for me Then I know I would be A better person for it I know I know If there was a little high To go with all of the lows Then I know I could See the clearing from the trees I know I know If there was a little feeling In amongst all the pain Then I know I'd live The life I'd want for me I know I know All the little things that make me feel this way All the little things that I need to do today I know I know I know
  3. Hi all. I've recorded a song, and would love to you guys' and gals' opinions on it. It's a rough mix, a bit out of balance especially in the coda. Please let me know what you think! Update: New version: https://soundcloud.com/will-sketches/rock-with-your-love-new-demo Old version: https://soundcloud.com/willem-h-de-boer/rock-with-your-love-additional-vocals
  4. Here is my newest song, would appreciate any feedback at all! Thank you!
  5. Hey Everyone, I haven't been on here for a while, but I've been doing a good deal of songwriting and am excited to listen to some of your songs and write some critiques again. Any critiques of this song would be a great help! About my song, the mix isn't great and the vocal track needs some cleaning up (sorry for the mouth noises), but that stuff will come after it's fully written and recorded more carfully. I'm thinking I'll have a real drummer and bass player come in replace the programmed drums and my sketchy bass track, does that seem like a good idea or do you like what I have? Thanks! Lyrics: Bear in mind my shitty rhyme scheme Go ahead and say what you mean In my head my words don’t come off Nearly as first grade as they seem Cause I’ve been wasting my time And now I’m wasting your time, you’ll see Unrelenting words cementing My own elementary school dreams, what does it mean? I almost hope nobody listens Maybe then I’ll get off scot-free I doubt it but we’ll see Cause I’ve been wasting my time And now I’m wasting your time, you’ll see This is evidence that I've been wasting my time
  6. Hi all, started this track earlier while I was trying out the demo's for Rob Papen's Blue 2 and Output's Signal. The drums are Battery 4 and played by me (for a change). The vocal is a first take to give me a feel for what is working and what needs fixed. Need to do extra lyrics as these were the start of something I wrote a while back and forgot about, but they went with this piece. There is still to be more instruments added and a slight tweak of the arrangement, but I am hoping it feels like it is working, so I am looking for some advice for what is working, not working etc. Cheers Richard https://soundcloud.com/moodman-1/beyond-the-veil-09042017-1825 BEYOND THE VEIL (lyrics and music by Richard Tracey) Like de-ja-vu I saw the soul in you A heart that was so pure A moment frozen in time Unspoken words Hanging in midair Full of love and care The feelings were sublime And in that moment I realised I had passed Beyond the Veil Beyond the Veil No-one needs to know No-one needs to see Just what happened To me To me
  7. Hi this is my song 'I'm a crime to commit' Just want everyone to be honest as possible, is it good, bad or ugly. I've changed the lyrics slightly now they are: (Verse) Beautiful bitch, has got my back up against the wall, I'm a crime to commit, but it looks like you done them all. (Pre Chorus) Se--------------e me, see me walking away, then you're love--------ly, makes me wanna stay. (Chorus) Mo---------------------re, more, more, than I bargained for. Mo---------------------re, more, more, than I bargained for. (Verse) She got pi-er-cings, in all the right places, infectious lips, and that way she fakes it. (Pre Chorus) Lo--------------------------ve me, like its the only way, In--------------fect me, with your kiss. (Chorus) Mo---------------------re, more, more than you bargained for, Mo--------------------re, more than you bargained for. (verse) Dan-cing on the tables, she hypnotises me, Long red hair, right down to her knees. (Pre Chorus) Teach me, al the things you know, Infect me, love me until you go. (Chorus) Verse1 https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fFdXhmeUtmI&feature=youtu.be
  8. Hi all - haven't managed to get on much lately due to work and family commitments, but I started this a couple of weeks ago and meant to have had it finished by now, but can't find the time to continue with it. I am just looking for an overall feel from everyone to see whether the track seems to be working so far. The vocals are a temp at the moment just so I could get a feel for them. The lyrics were something I wrote for one of ImKen's tracks, but felt they worked with this piece. The drums were played by me for a change as I wanted something simple. The instrumental part is nowhere near finished instruments wise, but does it sound better with less and then build it up? What about the vocal harmonies? Any input would be much appreciated as it may give me the kick up the butt to get on with it. Anyway, thanks for listening and I am going to try and devote some time over the weekend to have a listen to the stuff you have all been posting. Cheers Richard https://soundcloud.com/moodman-1/guiding-light-25032017-2327/s-AVXXr
  9. So for those of you who have been on this forum for some time, this is my third song and am exploring yet another genre. Its more "pop"ish, with a hint of Ed Sheeran, but also a nice bass line that gives it a dance-y vibe! Would love critique of the song as a whole!
  10. Here's one I tracked last night. I had intended to call it something with Azure in the title, but I realized there's a video game out called " Azure Dreams". I decided to call it " Press On" instead. I thought the mood seemed to fit a kind of struggle going on. I listened to it on the way to work and it seemed a little loud for this genre, I listened on headphones and it seems to have a bit of a bite in it around the 3-5K. Is it just me or do you hear it too? It seems worse on my headphones than with open speakers. Thanks!
  11. Hi! Here's a second instrumental song. I wanted it to be pretty chilled and catchy. Any critique is very much appreciated Thanks, Chalter
  12. Hey! This is my first time posting here, and I'm looking for pretty much any suggestions, and criticisms. I'm new at song writing, and I feel pretty lackluster. If you have general comments, or tips to help it would be much appreciated! Thank you for your time :)! Lyrics: You spoke of a willow Tree And being In love I spoke of a burning in my lungs I feel if I don't look away I'll likely turn to stone You point out the Birds returned I'm not sure I would have known You're Sown with pedals and a hope I'm not sure you know
  13. Just finished my second song - it's still very much a first draft and has a few problems, but I'm going with it for now. Any feedback is appreciated greatly! I produce all of my music as well, so any feedback on the instrumental is also welcomed! Thank you!
  14. Hi folks Here's a new song that I wrote and recorded. Nits and crits welcome. I'm Not the Bad Guy Written and performed by Staypress V1 I'm sick of saying sorry for things I did not do I'm tired of building bridges so I can get to you V2 I feel like I've been branded a monster among men I think I'll build a time machine and put it right again. Ch I'll admit your jealousy didn't bring out the best in me But I'm not the bad guy i don't deny I lost my cool, being made to feel a fool But I'm not the bad guy V3 I'm tired of feeling guilty for things I should have done I'm sick of being sorry for fights I never won Ch Middle bit I'd be the first to admit I was wrong If you'd allow me to talk that long The thought of you was heavenly, reality was hell Who's the guilty party? You know damn well Ch to end
  15. I did this bit of a song quickly earlier today for the challenge Richard started. I suppose I broke the 60 seconds rule but I think I like what I started so maybe I'll work it into a bigger BIG kind of track... I dunno. Interested to hear what people think so far anyway. UPDATED - I've extended the song (I kicking the arse out of the same progression counts)...did some new stuff. I wanted to try something different, so instead of using lots of synths I just used an X-705 Space Organ for all the keyboards. Seemed like a good idea at the time... This is freshly put together so maybe a mess... I'll know tomorrow but I like posting when I've just done something so this is what I got... If anyone says it sounds like Air Supply, I will find you and I will kill you. Following Randy's mention of 'Polyphonic Spree'... I'm recruiting singers for this. I'll do a new mix/version when it's all together... I'm not totally happy with many elements of it yet. If you'd like to sing along...anyone who can get a reasonably clean vocal recording and sing pretty much in tune is invited to join in and send me a dry vocal wav (or multiple wavs) to mix in. The plan is... sing along with the 'Burn em all, burn em all, light up our eyes, burn em all, burn em all, be warm tonight, their souls are hollow, their souls are hollow' part. I'm looking for a group vocal effect, not lead vocals.... have a listen to some Polyphonic Spree to get what I mean. If you're interested just PM me. The track is now downloadable. If it doesn't work out... my apologies in advance...I just want to try the idea if anyone is interested to join in. No worries if not. https://soundcloud.com/monostone-1/lost-now/s-PjpgM We're lost now Baby don't frown We're lost now We're lost now Baby don't run The trees around us Won't make a sound Free the fire Burn them down Burn them all Burn them all Light up our eyes Burn them all Burn them all Be warm tonight Their souls Are hollow Their souls Are hollow
  16. Thanks so much to all of you that helped on the last song I posted :)! I'm starting to attempt recording that one currently. I'm wondering if you guys have any advice/ critique on this one which is not nearly as finished, and I'm going to work recording without video once I get some advice. Particular with lyrics, and the Chord progression (if you can call it that), and the "chorus" if the guitar works, and generally if it sounds any good. The breaks between the lyrics are rough, and I'm not sure how I want to go about it. Any help, comments, and critique are appreciated (I don't have anything other than YouTube at the moment, and I'm not sure how to get an audio file on YouTube(with a picture in the background). That's why it's still a video.) Lyrics: You see me as a wounded dog Bleeding, flees in my paws Leading, seeping in your claws I'm so scared to leave my room Terrified that I might see you soon Dear I know It's not your fault You don't feel the way I do Or at least you don't want To Why'd ya Stay just long enough To make me feel the sting of loss I saw the sun bleeding blue this afternoon I couldn't help but to Wish you, to lay me in your lap Feel the touch of rain on your back to see your kind eyes facing back To Hear the way you breath in Dear I know It's not your fault You don't feel the way I do Or at least you don't want To Why'd ya Stay just long enough To make me feel the lack of your touch To make me feel like I was enough
  17. Well, this is what I came up with this afternoon. The birds and slight road sounds aren't sound effects by the way, I just caught them from outside while recording the guitar and decided to keep them. Simple tune, I didn't have much time. Maybe I'll expand on it...not sure... Any feedback welcome. Added a new part and reduced the repeat on the end part. Does it work? Another update 10th March, now including some bass. https://soundcloud.com/monostone-1/distant-cars03/s-IO7C4 UPDATE WITH SHREYASI https://soundcloud.com/monostone-1/distant-cars08lessverb/s-3fNeZ Words - Evenings cold On the stone With my feet In the road Counting hours Wanting more Counting hours It’s a dream for the few Close my eyes to the truth It won’t be long Until the night It won’t be long Feel it in the sound Of distant cars The empty roads cold Waiting for Golden lights Golden lights Arms open wide Hope through fear All those years behind the tears Let’s go home Graceful love Painful love In the evening glow It's getting late and the world is waiting Mistakes are made In the evening glow Evening's cold On the stone With my feet In the road It won't be long Until the night It won't be long
  18. Hi guys, Here's my first attempt at a song, let me know what you think! Thanks
  19. I've went in and done some things with this. Different guitars, switched the verses, extended fade-out, etc… Any comments are welcome but I'm mainly looking at the mix. My goal is to get it to sound good enough for a free download. Gracias - Randy Donkey Kong Randy Drilingas, Just1L ©2016 I never did care for what you said. It didn't even make much sense. Trick all the dreamers. Make 'em believers. Then you let it go to your head. When you're high do people stare? And if so, do you even care? Did'ja read too much of everything? And turn your mind to dust. The rumors, the trollers, agenda promoters. You never know who to trust. When you're high, do people stare? And if so, do you even care? Donkey Kong's got Mario on a string. He's gonna need to pass him. To beat the game. Sometimes the eyes that gaze from a stranger. Can't see past the nose. No need to fear the jeers from a neighbor They'll never make you feel at home. Could you be, Should you be, Do you even wanna be, Do you even wanna be loved? Then don't forget the words of a mother: "If you can't say anything nice, say nothing at all." When you're high, do people stare? And if so, do you even care? Donkey Kong's got another trick up his sleeve. Well... When you're high, let 'em stare. When you're low, let 'em stare. I don't care. Finally posting another tune. It's been a while. I've got multiple things I'm going to do/change to this but I figure it's at least at the listenable stage. Some things I know I'm going to do, some things I might do depending on feedback. The 2 musts lyrically are switching verse 1 and 2, and changing "win" to "beat" as noted in the copy. Also concerning the lyrics, I'm not really interested if you read through it and get it all. I don't consider this to be that kind of song. I'm going more old school with the vision of "if you hear it on the radio with no lyrics" what stands out and what feeling do you get from it. There is a reason for each of the lyrics though. For example each of the chorus "When you're high…" lines has a slightly different meaning each time, pertaining to the preceding lines. I plan to re-sing it all on a day when I'm feeling more mo-jo. And I also plan to re-do the lead riff guitar and bass. It's the first song I've struggled nailing the guitar parts for, at least my definition of nailing. Mixing thoughts are of course welcome as well. Enjoy if you can. Ideally, you'll want to turn it up.
  20. Hi, a distinctly 80's ballad..if you take a listen, I thank you.. Hey, can't you see, it's the only way it should be, though your love is gone, you linger on, in my window of extasy.. fade, into blue, when I thought my love would breakthrough, did I misconstrue, when I fell for you, It was the only thing I could do, Don't let me go, love me forever, don't ever, set me free. you've captured my soul, it's now or never, don't ever, let me be.. clouds fill my eyes, when I think of your last goodbyes, as you walked away, left me castaway, I could only, wonder why, Hold on to you, is the only thing I wanna do, If you turn away, after leading me astray, then You've hit me, right out of the blue, Don't let me go, love me forever, don't ever, set me free. you've captured my soul, it's now or never, don't ever, let me be.. take a moment and think awhile, let me hold you again, I'll remember the way you smile, in the faces of all my friends, Guitar solo Don't let me go, love me forever, don't ever, set me free. you've captured my soul, it's now or never, don't ever, let me be..©KNmac best to all fellow muso's..
  21. I'd like to hear some feedback on this tune, Control Freak. Any suggestions about this recording and production, accompaniment, lyrics, and whatever else you can throw at me. I'm mainly concerned about the instrumentation because I'm not very skilled on synth and was experimenting. This song has been re-written a few times and I think it's improved with each re-write.
  22. This is where pissing around will get you. Seems that's all I do, nothing ever gets a fine polish on it. My question concerns prosody, should this be slowed? Seems when I do that it's just mired in the boring level of blah. Down To The River Hammered in the coals of a fire lost Shot from the age of Homeric lust The tip of love's arrow, well it pierced my lung But it missed my heart, I had none, it went Down to the river waters keep Down to the river where it's black and deep Down to the river where it's too damn cold to come home Love is an owl over fields of prey I was caught while dawn was threatening Clawing for the heart of it's victory won Well love left hungry, I had none, it went Down to the river waters keep Down to the river where it's black and deep Down to the river where it's too damn cold to come home I pulled her close when the night was young When still she needed to know I was strong But her moon fell over and her sky went numb When she reached for my heart, found I had none Down to the river waters keep Down to the river where it's black and deep Down to the river where it's too damn cold to come home Come home
  23. Hey everyone! I posted for my first time on here a week or so ago and wrote and recorded another song in between that time and now. I am just trying to find "my voice" or the genre where I can really shine as an artist and would appreciate feedback on this most recent song. (I know the mixing may not be 100%, I'm making all of this out of my college dorm room ) Lyrics below... My hands are tired from healing the pain, so far away but I’m still feeling the same. Its crazy how your words catch fire, its like you rule an empire. You got me questioning what happened to the love, to our one great nation under God. Try to forget the hate when I sing this song. We can walk down this road, but we can’t do this alone. We gotta learn from our past and move on… To the better days Come together, arm in arm, staying strong through the eye of the storm To the better days Spread a smile, walk the extra mile, on the road to the better days. I wanna feel the rush, I wanna feel free, bask in the light of the American Dream And if you’re hanging on by a wire, hang on and climb higher You got me questioning what happened to this place, to a time of happiness and grace. Try to forget the hate when I sing this song. We can walk down this road, but we can’t do this alone. We gotta learn from our past and move on… To the better days Come together, arm in arm, staying strong through the eye of the storm To the better days Spread a smile, walk the extra mile, on the road to the better days. We won’t go quiet into the night. We just keep moving moving moving moving onnnnnnn…. To the better days Come together, arm in arm, staying strong through the eye of the storm To the better days Spread a smile, walk the extra mile, on the road to the better days.
  24. Something different from "Rock Bernd": http://soundclick.com/share.cfm?id=13540169 The song's lyrics: while the bathtub slowly is filling up she downs her pills with a glass of red wine she tests the water to make sure it's fine somewhere she'd read it must not be too hot resting her head on a bath pillow she'd brought she's all set for her bath - peaceful and quiet she reaches out for the razor blade knife as soon as she feels the numbness set in she's overcoming all pretence and disguise she's overcoming his deceptions and lies she's hearing music wonderful, beautiful music now, that she's joining the angels' choir she is fascinated by billowing clouds that soon begin col'ring the water bright red while contemplating what might lie ahead she's getting tired and dizzy at last she's overcoming all pretence and disguise she's overcoming his deceptions and lies and she's hearing music wonderful, beautiful music now, that she's joining the angels' choir she's hearing music wonderful, beautiful music now, that she's joining the angels' choir
  25. - Vocal approach 1 - - Vocal approach 2 - Crossroads /verse If with time I still remember you know it won’t be without regret because I know you have been trying hard and it makes me sad now I see it fall apart but there always seems there is nothing I can do to make you feel alright /verse With every dream we had now broken a love once strong has turned too plain yet something with her face makes me remember how it was but that was then and it doesn’t really matter anymore /chorus And all the promises we made we broke them all along the way but if only you were here I think I´d stay but all we brought together falls apart /verse Just like a cold winds quiet whisper like eerie chills and winter winds but spring will come again and it will soothe away the pain, those yesterdays just hoping that someday I'll find in truth to hope she’ll be alright. /verse (extended) And now the years are rolling by me they seem to glide away with ease Like thunder in a thunderstorm ,Like shadows on a shadows wall with every fight that starts a cry as If she ever cared for how I felt and always came with reasons, not complaints and never cared to listen, it’s not sad we should fall apart /chorus And all the promises we made we broke them all along the way but how I do how I do love you seems all we brought together falls apart