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  1. This is my latest song - "Without You Here" - really looking for ideas about what to put behind the track i.e. instruments, percussion, added vocals, and also criticism on the song itself (i.e. flow/melody/harmony/structure/repetitiveness/memorability etc). Thanks in advance Lyrics: You're the real deal You're the one I didn’t tell you when you were around But I should have done It’s not like I need you and I’ll be okay They say you’ll find another one soon But I still miss you everyday (And now I'm) Sitting in a parked car hiding from the rain Screaming out the songs as the radio plays but It’s not the same without you here Dancing round the kitchen before we go to bed Laughing at my jokes they sound funny in my head You said it’s something bout the way she smiles that makes you want to love with her and not me You said there’s something bout the way she laughs but I know she won’t make you laugh like I did It’s not like I miss you It’s not like I care But I see you in every face and I can’t help but stare [Chorus]
  2. Hi guys, I've recently started producing this track and was inspired by Sting's "Ten Summoners Tales" album whilst writing. The theme to the tune is when you meet someone special, get to know them, get on really well just for a brief time, and then part and never see each other again. It has no lyrics, but I would love some feedback if possible on the track. If you would like to add vocals or lyrics, please let me know as I would love to hear vocals on this track. Many thanks, Kevin
  3. So, in keeping with its title, I finally got round to recording my song The Slow Reveal. The 'so' above implies that I am taking about a topic we have discussed previously, which we have, and which you can find here I have recorded a one on one version of the song here. It is not as slow as the title implies, nor is it supposed to be. I think it is long enough already and can't think what to cut to make it shorter if it was slower. All feedback welcome We had a long, protracted debate about the lyrics, in particular how to resolve the chorus, and I reflected on the feedback over a couple of years ( i was doing other stuff too!) and this is where they ended up. The Slow Reveal Anticipating Can’t stand the waiting Now it’s killing me How you’re thrilling me Seductive temptress Undress to impress I’m no average Joe At some cheap peep-show How can a man you’ve blindfolded see? I'll bet you enjoyed it when you told me (Chorus) You don’t know me Like you think you know me You have to show me your love is real But love at first sight That lasts one night And how could one night prove how you feel? It’s gotta last a lifetime The slow reveal The slow reveal Slip off your silk dress Show me some bare flesh Or must I suppose What’s beneath your clothes? Oh make it quick please Curtail your strip-tease Need more than a peek How my flesh is weak When will this man you have handcuffed be free? Oh how I loved it when you rebuffed me (Chorus) You don’t know me Like you think you know me You have to show me your love is real But love at first sight That lasts one night And how could one night prove how you feel? It’s gotta last a lifetime The slow reveal The slow reveal (Bridge) Do I hide behind a mask of pure lust Or is what you see all that is really there? Here lies a man you can trust Cause all I want, I swear Is to see your soul laid bare (Chorus) You don’t know me Like you think you know me You have to show yourme love is real But love at first sight That lasts one night And how could one night prove how you feel? It’s gotta last a lifetime The slow reveal The slow reveal ©Alistair McIntosh - 8 November 2013
  4. Hi, This is my original song, "Make you stay". I only joined Soundcloud two days ago and am not very skilled at recording/mixing but would love any feedback you can give (Lyrics, melody, structure, quality, catchi-ness, instruments, arrangement, tempo, voice etc). Thank you in advance https://soundcloud.com/alexxxiii/make-you-stay Lyrics: So this is how the story ends Decided we were better off as friends The way you look tonight with your sorry eyes and your goodbye smile Nothing I can do to make you stay Same old you and same old me Beginning to see things differently From the moment that we met you were saying things that I won't forget There's nothing I can do to love you less Am I wasting time trying to make you feel the same So I'll try and try change my mind cause I can't change the rules of your game but I'll still try Can we go back To when we were more than friends Can I be the one you love again Cause I can't bear to watch you walk away Darling I would do anything to make you stay Such a feeling such a rush It started off as little more than a crush and it's the way you look tonight with your sorry eyes and your goodbye smile there's nothing I can do to change your mind Am I wasting time trying to make you feel the same So I'll have to change my mind cause I can't change the rules of your game but I'll try So can we go back to when we were more than friends can I be the one you love again cause I can't bear to watch you walk away darling I would do anything to make you stay Back to when we were more than friends can I be the one you love again cause I can't bear to watch you walk away darling I would do anything darling I would do I would do I would do anything I would do I would do anything to make you stay
  5. Hey Guys Just started a new band called New Men. We made our first Musicvideo some weeks ago and today is Release Day! Please Check it out! You can find us on Facebook https://www.facebook.com/Music.NewMen/?fref=ts
  6. So this is a song I wrote that has a more "Future Bass" vibe to it but still is hopefully catchy. Would love to hear what you think! Stars, we’re the stars in the sky above, we make a constellation of love. And no matter where we’re going, we’re glowing. Our names up on the marquis, we live our life on a tv screen. We’re just living like stars We’re living like stars. Oh we’re just living like stars. Stars, our songs are playing on the radio There’s cameras flashing wherever we go. Now that we’re here we’re gonna run this show, Yeah we’re stars so we better glow. Our names up on the marquis, we live our life on a tv screen. We’re just living like stars We’re living like stars. Oh we’re just living like stars. The universe is full of darkness, imagine if the world was starless. No way to see the beauty that surrounds us. Everything’s gonna be alright cause the stars will bring the light. We’re just living like stars. We’re living like stars. Stars, we dance, in the dark of the night We laugh and we love and we doing alright Oh we’re just living like stars.
  7. Hey id love to share this new video with you. The song is about winter time and a bit of a love story. Its independently shot at a recording studio. Any feedback is welcome and appreciated Cheers https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=P_muKq13sQA
  8. Hi everyone. Here's a video of my band rehearsing a new song called Coastal. Sorry in advance about the quality, the sound is mostly being picked up by an iPhone. I hope it's marginally listenable, at least for the sake of criticism This song is in its early stage, what I'm looking for is just your initial impressions. Does the song feel cohesive? Any opinions are very much appreciated.
  9. Hi people, So I am a huge music lover myself and harbour hopes for singing. The only thing... I need honest feedback from you guys. I feel that my voice is more suited to slow/mid-tempo songs, so I tend to focus on them more. Here's a raw, home-recorded sample of the song "At Last"... please do let me know honestly what you think. Would really appreciate it Thanks, Sreyashi
  10. Hi everyone, my name's AndreaCarlo and I'm an English aspiring singer-songwriter/producer. I just wanted to showcase you one song I wrote, sang and co-produced around 4 years ago, when I was 16 years old, called "At Times". I'm 20 right now, am about to finish my degree, and am looking to work in music after I graduate. Obviously this was just a start for me since I was very young and I've evolved in my sound/voice/style now. However, I was wondering if you guys could give me general feedback and tips on the production, the song/lyrics, my voice, etc... If I had to describe the song's style, I would say it's kind of an eclectic fusion of baroque-pop/trip hop/d'n'b/ambient. I don't know if you guys could be better at classifying it genre-wise than me. I would say that the sound is along the same lines as something Clean Bandit, Marina and the Diamonds, Lana del Rey, Florence + the Machine or Lykke Li would produce (i.e. indie baroque music mixed with electronic and urban beats). Vocally, I would compare myself to artists such as Adam Young from Owl City or the Pet Shop Boys. I've done other songs as well but this one is my personal favourite, as the others were just kind of projects I did for fun: Any feedback/critique is highly appreciated!
  11. Hey everyone, Wanted to get some critiques/opinions on a track I have called Move Tonight. Lyrics: And I wanna know what happened that dayI never saw it coming no And all the events that led up to the nightWhen you got me aloneI think it started with an innocent hi But a dangerous toneAnd then as we drank our way into the nightI could feel it was moreWe were on the rooftop smoking upEventually we're high as f*ckI was joking I was gonna jumpYou didn't even see meYou were playing make believeand sat there telling everybody that you weren't drunkI just keep on thinking that I wanna spend tonight with youBut i'll never get the courage I'll wait here for you to make the moveEven though it's against the rules(Even though it's against the rules)Chorus:I wanna tell you that I want youBut I'm afraid that you'll believe meI wanna tell you that I want youBut I'm afraid that you'll believe meCuz All I really wanna do is hold youAnd all I really want is for the nightBut I don't want to tell youCuz i'm afraid you might believe meand make a move tonightThe next thing I knowYou were hanging on You were hanging on to meDragging me down the stairsYou were pulling me, pulling meI was acting like I didn't give a damnThe whispers saying "Oh My God I think they're holding hands"And I was in heavenIt was like the best dreamI was so afraid of waking up and being alone with meI was taking it in as you were spinning me aroundYou were dragging me to your bedKept on dragging me dragging me downI just keep on thinking that I wanna spend tonight with youBut we're running out of time it's almost lightCome on and make the moveEven though it's against the rulesI'm right here come on and make a moveChorus:I wanna tell you that I want youBut I'm afraid that you'll believe meI wanna tell you that I want youBut I'm afraid that you'll believe meCuz All I really wanna do is hold youAnd all I really want is for the nightBut I don't want to tell youCuz i'm afraid you might believe meand make a move tonightRepeats Thanks so much! Micky
  12. Hello everyone. So this song I have working on for a long time. I have several times placed it in my "archive" folder. I never manage to create a good feel to it. But then I changed the whole groove and tempo, It started of with a very slow ballad sound and I now is totally transformed to uptempo sound. I have to say it was a little outside my comfortzone. But I loved work on a more fuller arrangenemt. I used some time with the groove (drums and bass) When I listen to it I kinda get a little retro vibe to it.. I also added some synth and some Dr.Rex guitar chords ( I can't play guitar myself, so I did the best of what Reason can offer of help). When the song was in developement I got perhaps over the top creative, but I had fun experimenting I have worked more on the mix on vocal and used "neptune" to adjust places where I sometimes can sound pitchy. The intro is a little weird. But since is a song about creativity and ideas.. I found it suitable that I am fiddling with radios and sounds The lyrics is a little repetative perhaps: I might be up for some changes there and also resing if needed. It's about me having ideas, maybe big ones and there is this someone trying to make things real. But then I am defending myself telling that why should one stop believing when there is much happening in this world. One Should never stop dreaming.. As usually is made in Propellerheads Reason. I am curious of what you think f the mix and the melody I got this idea, it's gonna be big I dont need to tell you. I have this moment, you wont be believe I dont need to tell you You heard it all before,I dont wanna say no more. I say "what if dreams come true" you say "Your eyes are forever blue" There is no reason to stop the dreaming There is no truth in stop believing. This world is rough, don't judge me by default. Maybe I'm lost, it's not my fault Dont turn your back on me, I'm calling your name Theres no need to fail me I'm gonna make it, I am what I am.. Theres no need to fail me You heard it all before,I dont wanna say no more. I say "what if dreams come true" you say "Your eyes are forever blue" There is no reason to stop the dreaming There is no truth in stop believing. This world is rough, don't judge me by default. Maybe I'm lost, it's not my fault This world is rough, don't judge me by default. Maybe I'm lost, it's not my fault Delussion is tough , it's not my fault This world is rough, don't judge me by default. Edited 2 minutes ago by Achazia
  13. A new version for this song, I changed many things; I was trying to make it sound better, less "clinical" or "robotic", I don't know if this works because after working a lot with it I might be deaf for this mix. Please comment, thank you very much for your help! LYRICS Why I can’t love my way? © Lyrics and Music by Fernando Dominguez once upon a time there was a world called discrim-ignite no one in that land had equal rights and it was just fine one day some people said oh wait! why I can’t love that way? why I can’t love my way? oh wait! some people said one day What if love is under-defined? we need to open our minds we think love is under-defined what if we’re thinking behind? one day some people said oh wait! why I can’t love that way? why I can’t love my way? oh wait! some people said one day so they burned them all tied to an old tree; a newborn law pride was in the air it was an odd smell coating their beds for many days one day some people said oh wait! why I can’t love that way? why I can’t love my way? oh wait! some people said one day What if love is under-defined? we need to open our minds we think love is under-defined what if we’re thinking behind? one day some people said oh wait! why I can’t love that way? why I can’t love my way? oh wait! some people said one day listen, it doesn’t matter who you love it doesn’t matter who you love listen, it doesn’t matter who you love listen, it doesn’t matter who you love listen, it doesn’t matter who you love
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  15. Thank you, SongStuffers! We appreciate all the feedback and critiques we got for this song. Looking forward to completing more songs with your help! You guys are awesome, Ken https://soundcloud.com/imken-2/wild-daisies-demo-tape
  16. Hey! My name is Vita Sky! And I am a young artist in pop genre. My girl left me for my best friend. I have my Kickstarter project and trying to record and album #YouLeft.
  17. Longfellow Music Looking for a composer/producer to work with I've written over 150 lyrics. I've got about 20 songs made and another 10 in the works. I've collaborated with a couple of members of Songstuff. I've never had a bad collaboration experience. I write country/rock/pop/r&b/rap. I can write from a man or women's perspective, I've even written a couple of duets. I have a home studio that I'm trying to learn right now. I have about 15 basic melodies with lyrics that I'd like for someone a little more experienced to help me put together. ready to work!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Revebnation https://www.reverbnation.com/longfellowlyrics Website http://www.longfellowlyrics.com/ facebook @longfellowlyrics Instagram https://www.instagram.com/johnbergeron/ Lyric collection https://app.box.com/s/4x198wbkjs2rpc2xbqgzvo0d28izc6uo A few songs The reason(Donnie) I'm not ready (Ken Fukuda) Searching for myself(Red Bonfire) Foolish ways(Ken Fukuda) Missing you(Ashley)
  18. Hi guys, this is a song I've been working on for a lot of weeks, at the same time I've been studying more music theory and digital music crafting I hope you can give me some feedback on it. Thank you! Fernando. I worked on this new version, trying to fix some things using your generous feedback, thank you very much. I think it is much better because of you guys. I THOUGHT IT’D BE EASY © Lyrics and music by Fernando Dominguez empty house tonight bad dream of others I have lost my appetite dinner for loners frozen peas and fish microwaved perfectly steam shapes dance just like you did it happens frequently oh, I thought it’d be easy to live without you and keep the dog alive and the cat and these broken hearts oh, I thought it’d be easy to live without you and keep the dog alive and the cat and these broken hearts nothing can undo this change in color torn wallpaper in our room used to show blossoms love was just a thing we took for granted little memories of it keep crawling downstairs it’s been like two weeks or nine months since you left our home but that’s all right, I’m walking the dog tonight it’s been like two weeks or nine months since you left our home but that’s just fine, we’re on our way to survive oh, I thought it’d be easy to live without you and keep the dog alive and the cat and these broken hearts oh, I thought it’d be easy to live without you and keep the dog alive and the cat and these broken hearts This was version 1: https://soundcloud.com/fer-dominguez-674800964/i-thought-itd-be-easy
  19. Just released a new track called “I seek love”! It´s a beautiful pop rock song and I think it has good melodies. Thanks for listening! Seb
  20. Here's my latest track. Nobody Gets Out of Here Alive. Check me out on https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCd_8-CXEJRGT2TS9DhyrsvQ Nobody Gets Out of Here Alive My star crossed lover Watch you falling from the sky A crash of thunder Then you disappear from sight Baptized by fire Lighting my desire And nobody gets out of here alive tonight Nobody gets out of here alive My senses screaming But I don't hear a single word Strangers creeping But careless fingers will get burned I'll beg steal or borrow For another tomorrow But nobody gets out of here alive tonight Nobody gets out of here alive Nobody gets out of here alive tonight Nobody gets out of here alive When it comes I'll run Far from the light When shes gone So long I live another life But I won't dare look twice For I worry that she might return I'll beg steal or borrow For another tomorrow But nobody gets out of here alive tonight Nobody gets out of here alive Nobody gets out of here alive tonight Nobody gets out of here alive Tonight Tonight Tonight Tonight Nobody gets out of here alive tonight Nobody gets out of here alive
  21. Hi everyone, This is a song I wrote from way back when I was a teenager and over time I did rewrite on rewrite. So I am asking you guys for your feedback. overall. Oh.... I am not good with playing chords as yet, this is just the track and me singing. http://www.soundclick.com/bands/page_songInfo.cfm?bandID=495672&songID=13442433 College Girl©2016 Irwin Abrigo(Verse 1)I’m in love with a college girlThere’s no other like her in this world If she loves me I don’t knowI would like her to tell me soI’ve got joy when I go to sleepCause she’s the only girl I will seeI’ll never do her any wrongIf she loves me back so strong-oh(Chorus)College girl please don’t let me downCollege girl oh baby girl I need you so muchCollege girl I’ll never bring you down to the groundCollege girl you don’t know how much I need your touchCollege girl let us beLet us be(2nd Verse)Been looking at you for so long There is always one thing on my mindIs that one thing that you may sayYou’ll say to me I’m not your kindI don’t want you to think that wayBecause my love for you is trueI know another College school boy Could be looking at you too-oh(Chorus)(Bridge)When we graduate from college into UniversityI’ll be at your side and together we will beTogether forever, forever together you and meBut that wouldn’t be a realityUntil you say you’re in love with meCollege girl I love you soI love more than you never know(Chorus)
  22. Hello friends I have another song here. I was not planning to write more before I actually finish my previous ones. But I had this chorus melodyline in my head " when the night is young I put on my shoes" so thats where it started and it ended up into lyrics about missing someoone, but i also imagine is about missing a passion she has (like dancing). It also ends well for once. So I am working on many things at same times now. The outro is a little bit long, but I enjoyed playing the organ and doing this rich choir could be cutted I think All critics are welcome of course! I also played with de essing. it might be I did to much. Everything is done in Reason 8.3.2d7 Here are the lyrics: Dancing with Shadows Verse: When you are gone I have a story I want to tell, about passion and love that went blind. There is no one in this world that is going to say, I need distraction from my troubled mind. Seasons are fleeting, many moons have passed me by. There's no secret I miss you much. Echoes and whispers of your voice still make me cry and I remember your tender touch. Chorus: When the night is young I put on my shoes. I keep dancing alone with shadows of you. With you. Verse: When I am moving I have many seamless thoughts. I feel the fire still burns in my heart. I get this feeling that I am not quite alone that someone is watching the performance of my art. Chorus: When the night is young I put on my shoes. I keep dancing alone with shadows of you. With you. Bridge: All of a sudden someone takes my hand. Someone says: "This is not the end." Chorus: When the night was young I did put on my shoes. I kept dancing alone with shadows , dancing alone with shadows , dancing alone With you... Outro but now you are here I am dancing with you..with you..
  23. Hello, This is a song I wrote and recorded a long time ago. It has cheesy electric drums and was recorded on one of those all-in-one units. I'm mostly just curious what people think of it. I really can't change the recording, although it could, I suppose, be rerecorded. Anyway, that's my preamble. Don't hold your thoughts at all on it though. Any critique is very welcome. As I was sleeping in the middle of the night in the quiet and the bliss a willowy woman in the pale light blew me a careless kiss she was as soft as a butterfly and her dress glowed like the moon and her kiss took heaven by surprise and shook the shutters in my room it was late in November and the frost was on the ground I followed her into the distant woods where the darkness is profound and now I'm wandering all alone where there isn't any light and I can't see to find my way out of this never-ending night I heard the chimes dancing in the eaves across the river came a chilling wind the door flew open on a sudden breeze and life was over and the cold crept in
  24. Hi this is the first thing I've finished in a Year, it is a rewrite of a folk rock song by James Frazer, the lyric is by Bryan Williamson. James Frazer plays the bass and the acoustic guitar. Everything else is my fault. I am not to concerned about the songwriting on this more the production, mix etc. It needs Hobo ears if your around David it would be much appreciated. I am attempting to use affects less and have a more natural sound. Including subduing any vocal reinforcement. Cheers Gary © B.K Williamson, James Frazer, G Yeomans 2016. I got found when I was just fifteen By a Little girl with warm brown eyes Had me sitting on top of the world I believed I had wings to fly Funny thing about love It doesn't feel a thing love'll lift you up to the highest of highs Stand back and watch you fall Chorus: Everybody knows we all bleed red Everybody feels the pain Nobody cares about another broken heart And the road doesn't know your name No the road doesn't know your name I got lost when I was twenty-three when I told lies to my loving wife Something died down in my soul that day Lost a little part of my life Funny thing about deceit It pushes trust aside deceit ’ll work like poison the slowest of deaths Sit back and watch you cry Chorus: Each year my heart’s grows a bit more dark Light's growing dim an' slowly fading out Dreams are all a bit colder it seems And the angry snow falls down Funny thing growing old Now you feel every pain Age’ll make you wise you've seen everything before Then change watch you fail Chorus:
  25. Lead Me Back (Amy Abernathy 2014) Here lying in bed, Circles in My head, Engrossed in confusion, that’s nothing new. Awake watching the clock ticking, And drowning in Memories of you. (Chorus) Lead me back to where we were, When we were so in love. Lead me back to where we were, When my kisses you could ‘nt get enough A Flash from the past and words said. At times I think I want to walk away. A Bag full of broken dreams. I call to you but don’t know what to say. (Chorus) Lead me back to where we were, When we were so in love. Lead me back to where we were, When my kisses you could not get enough. (Bridge) You say slow down but I dive in. We’re off course and going astray. If you would lead me back to where we were. You know I’d say ok. (Chorus) Lead me back to where we were, When we were so in love. Lead me back to where we were, When my kisses you could not enough. ( outro) Oh lead me back Show me what to say. I want to work it out, So please lead the way. Amy Abernathy CC 2014 I don't know what genre this should be, I mostly write country, but this could go in other genres, just not sure which one. Lead Me Back.docx