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  1. Cloak and Dagger

    (Sung Softly) (V) All you angels come to me speak softly devil's sleep don't you sob don't you weep find your wings he's fast asleep devil's sleep (Music) All you angels blessed n' well cloak n' dagger no-one tell se cre cy angels oath slice all strings from devils grove Whoa oh oh demon seed devils gloat pushing down angels throat (Chorus) (Loud fast beat) Yeah lovely angels all come to me Let's shout out loud You Black Hearts Bleed no sin for angels to flee their cell pour devils blood into gates of hell yeah gates of hell gates of hell yeah (Repeat V 1 n 2) Come on angels collect your wings pack your bags grab your things moans n groans ignore his needs he's only human all devils bleed yeah devils bleed Watch him bleed in secrecy (Chorus)
  2. (V) I met an angel.....as she was walking by/ but I was a player.....a devil in disguise/ N' I started thinking......of loving her that night/ but devil horns N' angel wings, doesn't make it right (Chorus) N' boy she was a beauty/ as pure as apple pie---- not a trace of a raindrop/ had ever fallen from her eyes---/ and I didn't want the blame, for rain fallin' from the skies-- cause raindrops are tears, fallin' from an angels eyes/ (V) Then we started talkin' but she fell to realize that an angel can be tainted, all from a devil's lies-/ I didn't want to hurt her, didn't want to see her cry-/ cause a devil can't be chained, even if an angel tries--/ (Chorus) but boy she was a beauty/ as pure as apple pie--/ not a trace of a raindrop/ Had ever fallen from her eyes--/ and I didn't want the blame, for rain fallin' from the skies--/ Cause raindrops are tears, fallin' from an angels eyes--/ (V) As we began to grow, I refused to recognize---- how this angel stole this devils soul, and changed his foolish pride--/ She spoke of purity, and things I'd never known/ N' it was hard to believe, I had to let my angel go--- (Chorus) (V) As she turned to say goodbye, thunder screamed and called---, then lightening lit up the skies, and fire--- began fall-- rolling down the mountains, blazing to the skies---- cause fireballs are tears fallin' from a devils eyes/ and I didn't want the blame, for fire fallen from the skies--/ but you can't blame an angel, for the tears that a devil cries/ (Chorus)
  3. I Could Do That Too

    Hi All I think this is too slow It seems to drag a bit to me anyway any advice for the next step would be appreciated. I would do that too © G Yeomans 2015 When did you stop loving me Stop wanting Stop caring Find it too hard to go on sharing love When did you stop loving me How did you stop needing me Start Leaving Deceiving Find in your heart you didn't need my love How did you stop needing me Because If I knew Then I would do that too Who is it that's holding you When your crying Who’s trying To get all the love that he can buy my love Who is it that's holding you I wish I knew I could have done that too Where was it that you first met In an alley In the shadows In some out of way place no one goes anymore Where was it that you first met I wish I knew I might have stopped that too. Why did you stop loving me Stop wanting Stop caring Find it too hard to go on sharing love Why did you stop loving me I wish I knew So I could do that too
  4. I Survived

    a quick write , lol again as working on something and got into LG'S haunted one, this came out , very quick and rough but was here so posted it as it came , any and all crits welcome , a bit dark for me but ........ I felt my fears rip as they went into overdrive all my daylight i burned for you ,the cold of night felt the blood drip tasted this bitter life tasted these bitter times you pulled the pin and i exploded inside came within an inch of my life caught my breath and realized i survived but now i can't trust what I'm seeing everything's covered in lies feel I'm being hunted as you change your disguise I hear the key turning why try to come inside? do you feel your not finished , and want another try ? but I shut out those yesterdays feelings with my final goodbyes couldn't reload your gun take a taste of your suicide came within an inch of my life caught my breath and realized i survived yea I survived you tried to be the death of me oh how you tried you stood there just watching me but I .... I survived I survived I survived came within an inch of my life caught my breath and realized i survived yea I survived
  5. Anything

    this came during a break , and scribbled it down on a few napkins, so put it up here so I wont lose it , did a few edits during another break , lol not a lot of time to write , any and all comments welcome rock on !!! Anything… 11/10/13 Banging on this antiqued heart It’s so hard to stop once I start These tears I thought have long been since gone away As I watch them play in a setting suns colored rays As Now they play in the sunsets colored rays Searching these cracks in the ceiling Trying to keep my emotions from peeling away Grabbing hold of straws I Some call memories Grabbing hold of stars So that I might see Grabbing hold of anything That may brings you back to me Grabbing hold of anything ….anything Exhaling an old exhausted breath Looking sideways searching for my friend Or anyone that could explain Why I’m the winner in a loser’s game Searching these cracks in the ceiling Trying to keep my emotions from peeling away Grabbing hold of straws I Some call memories Grabbing hold of stars So that I might see Grabbing hold of anything That may bring you back to me Grabbing hold of anything ….anything Tomorrows light is shining so bright Like flames in a fire my eyes dance(watch) with delight Standing in the shadows I can only watch(wait) and see If tomorrows light can bring back our yesterdays what I set free Searching these cracks in my the ceiling Trying to keep my emotions from peeling..Away Grabbing hold of straws I Some call memories Grabbing hold of stars So that I might see Grabbing hold of anything That may brings you back to me Grabbing hold of anything ….anything
  6. Remember

    Standing here alone Don't even have my phone Watching cars go by Letting time fly I close my eyes and remember Way back in December When we were happy
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