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  1. I wrote this rap song back in 2016 dedicated and inspired by my son who had some rough experiences in the early stages of his life & had it produced last month. Now I know It’s only me myself and I I’ll stay solo No one else that I’ll rely From now on I know I’m gonna be alright Keep movin on I’m never gonna be defied I lost all my pride Things slipped through my hands Don’t have much to say Know I’ve blown my chance Once a dreamer Now I’ll pay the cost of wasting all of those days If I had my dirt bike still I would ride away, I would ride away, back to my hiding place Taking from others only robbed myself Of the goodness in my life & all the things I felt The things I did, I will not mention Not looking back and surrendering to the temptation Tripping, dealing and smoking I’ve been there and I’ve done that Sober, healing, hustling Currently where I’m at And I’ve been staring in the mirror with blood shot eyes I need help from three wise men…me, myself and I And my homies, my homies They gon end up in the sky Death is not up in my plans, I've got me, myself and I In the mirror is me I’m facing, In the mirror is me I’m facing Sometimes it’s hard to face him Sometimes it’s hard to face him Now I know It’s only me myself and I I’ll stay solo No one else that I’ll rely From now on I know I’m gonna be alright Keep movin on I’m never gonna be defied I left that night watching sister and mama cry To clear my head ask myself all the reasons why What made me do this? And what I’ve become? Only hurting myself, sister, daddy and mom A death trap just waiting in the wings I need to get out do bigger better things And to speak the truth no matter how it hurts Respect and loyalty is what they deserve I want the comforts of home To be where it’s quiet Not in the prison cell Finding myself in the center of a riot I wanna turn the key Have freedom and peace You can’t do that in the prison cell When you surrounded by all the police Been staring in the mirror with blood shot eyes I need help from three wise men…me, myself and I And my homies, my homies They gon end up in the sky Death is not up in my plans, I've got me, myself and I The devil hit me hard Yeah, he knocked me down But I got back up and I stood my ground Now I know It’s only me myself and I I’ll stay solo No one else that I’ll rely From now on I know I’m gonna be alright Keep movin on I’m never gonna be defied Now I know It’s only me myself and I I’ll stay solo No one else that I’ll rely From now on The devil won’t destroy me I know I’m gonna be alright Got me, myself & I Keep movin on No he won’t destroy me I’m never gonna be defied Got me, myself & I Keep movin on I will not destroy me I’m never gonna be defied I got me, myself & I Now I know It’s only me, myself & I
  2. 6x8

    6 x 8 is a song I wrote about not learning from the first time about getting into trouble and drugs with deep regret wishing you had your life back. Freedom and peace. CHORUS: C’mon yeah, c’mon it’s like that, It’s like that No mirrors to look at in my 6x8 Surrounded by hard walls that can’t even break My knuckles, my knuckles They gone pay for mistakes I want my life back now But I know it’s too late No mirror to look at in my 6x8 Surrounded by hard walls I can’t even break My knuckles, my knuckles They gone pay for mistakes I want my life back now But I know it’s too late With my head to my knees And the gavel they slamming down Before the man in the gown I knew what was going down I had my life back once But look how I took it for granted I had my freedom and peace But damn it for a moment I had it An addict addicted to trouble Dealing and smoking dope And now I’m only dealing with Noodles and a pack of smokes I had the comfort of home to pee where it’s quiet Now I’m pissing in the prison Surrounded by riots CHORUS: No mirror to look at in my 6x8 Surrounded by hard walls that can’t even break My knuckles, my knuckles They gone pay for mistakes I want my life back now But I know it’s too late No mirror to look at in my 6x8 Surrounded by hard walls that can’t even break My knuckles, my knuckles They gone pay for mistakes I want my life back now But I know it’s too late I stayed hungry Every day they feeding you crap But beggars can not be choosers So I’m throwing it back In line to take a fast shower They only give you minutes At home I swear I used to take a half an hour Tighty whities man I don’t even wear these Boxers, designer belts and Pants hung to my knees Had the comforts at home freedom and peace But I’m in my 6x8 And don’t even know my release CHORUS: No mirror to look at in my 6x8 Surrounded by hard walls I can’t even break My knuckles, my knuckles They gone pay for mistakes I want my life back now But I know it’s too late No mirror to look at in my 6x8 Surrounded by hard walls I can’t even break My knuckles, my knuckles They gone pay for mistakes I want my life back now But I know it’s too late Couldn’t stay away from trouble Or learn right from wrong Should of listened to the words Of another song I was young and stupid I spent some time in Juvie In the big house now Where I swore I would never would be Wishing I was at work And making all that bread And listening to the speakers Pumping in my head Ain’t no beats up here Some people rapping now Sometimes I hear them shout Get me the f*ck out CHORUS: No mirror to look at in my 6x8 Surrounded by hard walls I can’t even break My knuckles, my knuckles They gone pay for mistakes I want my life back now But I know it’s too late No mirror to look at in my 6x8 Surrounded by hard walls I can’t even break My knuckles, my knuckles They gone pay for mistakes I want my life back now But I know it’s too late
  3. I have recently written a new song that could become a viable single after more production. Lyrics below the link text: [ ] Verse Dreams are made alone Ghosts whisper through through her broken home I thought I had an out Insecure, brooding, drowning in the crowd Verse They came at me with force Paranoid vampires showing no remorse Stumbled and bemused All this lonely dreaming has her feeling used Chorus Walking through the valley of bloody suicides I've lost the easy answer, I'm fighting for my life Driftin through a portal of morbid fallen dreams All emotions dead, soul ripping at the seams Verse Opened my eyes chained Arms numbing, needles in my veins Unleash a scream or sigh Equally silent to these beings of blight Chorus Saw my dying day in my waking mind These shackles are eternal, rage is shooting blind Saw my waking lifetime unfolding in the flames losing blood so quickly they think that its a game Verse Relief slowly comes Broken nervous system, feeling on the run Shrug and walk away Their hidden faces leering, pampering their graves Chorus This cycle cannot break until a change is made I'm empty on ideas, distrubuting the blame Suspended and eternal this cycle cannot die Until I am taken from this wretched life
  4. I think it came out kinda nice Tell me what you think. Any feedback is welcome! If you like it, check out the other songs on my channel. Utopia - Surf the clouds: Thanks for your time!
  5. The song is kind of chill and melodic, not anything like edm. What do you think about it? Any feedback is appreciated! Utopia - Surf the clouds: Thanks!
  6. Hello everyone, Happy Valentine's Day! Here's a song that I made called Valentine Belated: CLICK HERE for LYRICS Please enjoy if you can bear it! xD
  7. Let me know what you think!
  8. Hey Guys! Please give me some feedback on this cover I just created! If you like it please subscribe =D
  9. Hey guys, iv been playing for a year now and i decided to make a solo. I dont have a teacher to analyze my work so it would mean a lot if you guys could listing to my solo and tell me what you think and what i can improve on.
  10. This is a test recording of the chorus from my track distant. tell me what you think of the lyrics and ryhme structrure Lyrics>>>>>>>>>> i keep my distance from the devil spread wide apart avoiding sin revoking lust because i love from my heart a gift from my god l-ord jesus the freedom we want the freedom we want to be free with our god i was sitting quitely in meditation im contemplating is the matrix just a figment of imagination to my amazement my mind and body seperated but can the mind survive without the brains regulation i need more education for my minds elevation
  11. Howdy folks, Our band, Jerkatorium, is back with another entry for a songwriting & recording competition. This time around the arbitrarily chosen song title is High School Safety Pin Parade. When I heard the title, I immediately thought of the cool punk rock kids in my High School, so I wrote a song about them. I'd love any feedback (especially negative feedback) on any aspect of the song that comes to mind. High School Safety Pin Parade by Jerkatorium Verse 1 pins and patches, cutting classes all day, out by the smoking lounge wild and lawless in black nail polish they'll take whatever they can scrounge Chorus 1 in the high school safety pin parade get your degree in the high school safety pin parade Verse 2 plaids and flannel, let's dismantle those lame, old societal norms hair dyed brightly, shaved or spikey gotta have that punk rock uniform Chorus 2 in the high school safety pin parade if you wanna be in the high school safety pin parade Extended Chorus 1 high school where anarchy rules in the high school safety pin parade Verse 3 spikes and leather, ripped up sweaters and studs, the kind that you screw in chains and zippers, laughs and snickers you know they’re never gonna let you in Chorus 3 to the high school safety pin parade where standards matter the high school safety pin parade Extended Chorus 2 high school where everyone's so cool in the high school safety pin parade Bridge you know that you gotta go on display you know that's it's all for show in the high school safety pin parade Verse 4 straps and buckles, swollen knuckles from fists, to the side of your head boots and braces and lipstick traces it’s how you look, not what you’ve read Chorus 4 in the high school safety pin parade you'll get hammered by the high school safety pin parade in the high school safety pin parade so enamored with the high school safety pin parade
  12. "Finished" this song today so it's still super rough, just recorded it on my phone. Need a lot more practice with the guitar playing/vocals but any constructive criticism with the lyrics/structure/rhythm etc. would be much appreciated. Thanks Verse 1: Red wine and closed doors Touched the sky on your floor It was all a thrill at the start Caught onto your old tricks It was only skin to skin But you wanted me to feel that spark Pre-chorus: I fell from so high Just for fun We lit up the night Before we turned to dust Chorus: We were like fireworks But the pain was a slow burn Cuz you didn’t feel it in your heart The ground crumbled where I stood Was it because of her that you had to go and make your mark Well boy, I hope she broke your heart good Verse 2: Was it all play pretend? You say we’re just friends Brushed me off so casually Said the word to make me stay Just air to fan the flame Tragic serenity Pre-chorus Chorus Bridge: Broke your heart good Like you did mine, Never understood Tell me why Chorus
  13. Hi Folks Here's a new song that I wrote and recorded with my better half. Nits and crits welcome. Concrete Written and performed by Staypress with Elizabeth Greenway featuring James Griffiths on guitar V1 There's one thing of which I'm certain, puts a ring around my heart You're the one I can be sure of and that's a start When I'm down and feeling helpless and there's nowhere left to go You're the one I can rely on, you give me room to grow Chorus You and I are connected at the heart You and I felt like soul mates from the start You and I have a love that is complete We are concrete V2 When my confidence is waning and my self respect is low You inspire me in the darkness, you show me where to go When I'm low and overburdened you give me a helping hand You're the one who lends a shoulder and you understand Chorus You and I are connected at the heart You and I felt like soul mates from the start You and I have a love that is complete We are concrete
  14. Hello everyone, I hope this is the right section for this kind of topic. A while ago I heard a song in the readio and it had "do you really wanna go?"/ "I got you everything"/ "who you are", plus it has some really nice guitar (fingerpicked if i remember)(male voice) accompaniment, if anyone knows this song I would be REALLY grateful! It's been bugging me for almost a week.
  15. Hi all - because I can't just get on with all the stuff I have started this year, I ended up starting something else late last night. It is a very rough work in progress. I like the start part, but don't know if it should remain a verse or change to a chorus, or if the chorus I have at the moment should become a bridge!!! Excuse the singing, it was a rough one to get an idea of a melody over the music and it was quite late on last night, so didn't want to wake anyone up. The title is a place holder at the moment and probably the lyrics for what is the chorus at the moment are ad-libbed and place holder. I quite like the lyrics for the verse, but not sure of the last line. Any thoughts at this time would be a big help. Cheers Lyrics so far (words and music by Richard Tracey) I've not regretted what I've done I've been the father and the son I've been together and I've been as one I've seen the storm, I've seen the calm I've lived through cold I've lived through warm I've been the right hand to your left arm But I need to tell you Things are going crazy Never want to feel like This is all a cliche Need to do it once As I won't get a replay Please remember me I don't want to fade away
  16. If I get a few minutes, I'll try to post a rough recording of this, last minute song. G D G And we sang Old Lang Syne C Em Am And we kissed at midnight D Em C And we swore the New Year would be better than C Em D The one we left behind G D G Yesterday is gone C Em Am Tomorrow is on the horizon D Em C May all memories be sweet C D G And pains never brought to mind
  17. https://soundcloud.com/wkamen/somewhere-final I drift across a secluded beach. I feel the sand beneath my feet. Impressions fading in the sand from a turning tide. I catch a fragrance in the air, i stop to look in wonder as it captivates my senses with serenity. I close my eyes, and see you on that beach swaying to the sound of the waves. A brief vision of all that was beautiful is but a memory. Somewhere Somewhere where love began Somewhere where love blossomed Somewhere only we know I came across a frail beach pea once blossoming binding the sand. Is this the spot our hearts blossomed binding our love? Adrift in the shallows of a changing tide, time ages, understanding deepens and beauty reveals in different forms. Visions of what we shared, once blowing in with the sea breeze, now, nothing more than broken shells scattered in the sand. Let’s go back to those moments of magic to talk about it and put the broken pieces back together to complete our voyage. Somewhere Somewhere where love began Somewhere where love blossomed Somewhere only we know Somewhere only we know
  18. A new version for this song, I changed many things; I was trying to make it sound better, less "clinical" or "robotic", I don't know if this works because after working a lot with it I might be deaf for this mix. Please comment, thank you very much for your help! LYRICS Why I can’t love my way? © Lyrics and Music by Fernando Dominguez once upon a time there was a world called discrim-ignite no one in that land had equal rights and it was just fine one day some people said oh wait! why I can’t love that way? why I can’t love my way? oh wait! some people said one day What if love is under-defined? we need to open our minds we think love is under-defined what if we’re thinking behind? one day some people said oh wait! why I can’t love that way? why I can’t love my way? oh wait! some people said one day so they burned them all tied to an old tree; a newborn law pride was in the air it was an odd smell coating their beds for many days one day some people said oh wait! why I can’t love that way? why I can’t love my way? oh wait! some people said one day What if love is under-defined? we need to open our minds we think love is under-defined what if we’re thinking behind? one day some people said oh wait! why I can’t love that way? why I can’t love my way? oh wait! some people said one day listen, it doesn’t matter who you love it doesn’t matter who you love listen, it doesn’t matter who you love listen, it doesn’t matter who you love listen, it doesn’t matter who you love
  19. Hey all, Just wanted to run this by you. Did this as a recording experiment to try something new. First time I've put together something with both live drums and a key track that was played with no programming or note editing. Anyway, as a "live" thing and a general experiment, I'm not particularly concerned with stuff like the mix, arrangement (lacks a bass obviously), or pitchiness of vocals. One day I'll do a studio version that "fixes" some of that stuff. In the meantime, mainly looking to get thoughts on the song itself: Overall melody and concept (i.e. being a shorter, non-repeating song with essentially three verses?) Thanks in advance! Lyrics: You always talk to me, Baby, when I'm asleep. You say the same old things, Every night. But honesty, Keeps me pretending dreams, Even if all this seems, Impolite. But every word, You think that I never heard, I know that it sounds absurd, But they meant the world to me. But I don't try. An answer would only lie. And I can't imagine why, You would take the time to see... We're just two pieces in similar places, But you're moving forward, and I'm losing spaces. Yeah, I know the rules, I just don't know the game. So I’m gonna roam, wherever the wind blows. Soon I'm coming home, so unlock the windows, If I can't get in, I'll have no one to blame.
  20. Hey, this is santa talking to you, or someone more humble ! ho ho ho This is my last contribution before saying goodbye to 2016.Let's say this is about recent turns of events that terrify me to my very soul. Ha ! Skub helped me getting this in correct english and he also breathed good lines when necessary.Hope you'll find a minute or two to pinpoint all the flaws !Stop, disarm and leave out the fictionLose the robe and show me you're real !We are from the jinxed generationTrading flesh for money, bad deal !No air, no room, no god in the skiesFrom the start, you were told not to moveFear will sure cut you down to sizeNow clap your hands and Santa will groove !Chorus I've caught a glimpse of your powerA true compassion for each otherDon't fall for the liesOf the clown in disguiseTime to make up your mind !In the woods lie sleeping the offspringLocked in chains by a fistfull of liesMice unaware of the deadly springHypnotized by some old lullabiesTime and again you were given an optionBut the footprints were so hard to followEntangled in the system malfunctionHang up the phone and let the wind blow !
  21. Woke up this morning, no idea what I must have been dreaming about, but I rolled right over and grabbed my glasses and my phone and typed this out. It happens that way sometimes. Big Bass Drum I went to see the prayin’ man Who lives up on the mountain He showed me algorithms He made for everyone He said he planned to sell them For a dollar thirty seven Then all the little children Could all get into heaven Every single person The poorest of the brethren Could afford the algorithm That was his intention Since cost wasn’t a problem No need to be forgiven For the thieving and the stealin The cheatin and the killin Just use the algorithm And we all get to heaven They’re a dollar thirty seven Come and get you one I said brother on the mountain That’s a big bass drum All you’ve ever needed was love
  22. This is a new song I have written and would like to hear your feedback/comments I Wanna Be Loved©2016 Irwin Abrigo(1st verse)First time I saw you, saw youFirst time I saw you, first time , first time First time I saw you, saw you passing byI suddenly got this feelingI suddenly got this feelingThis feeling, this feelingThis special kind of feeling (Chorus)cause I wanna be loved Yea I wanna be loved I wanna be lovedI wanna be loved(2nd verse)Though you don't know me, know meThough you don't, know me, Though you don't,Though you don'tThough you don't know me I was wonderingIf you felt the same way tooIf you felt the same way toothis feeling, this feelingThis special kind of feeling (Chorus)cause I wanna be loved Yea I wanna be loved I wanna be lovedI wanna be lovedCome over to the house next doorCome over to the house next doorCome over to the house next doorCome over to the house next doorSo I called you on the telephoneSo I called you on the telephoneYou got nothing to looseYou got nothing to loose(Chorus)cause I wanna be loved Yea I wanna be loved I wanna be lovedI wanna be loved
  23. Hello folks! reworking the first song the band i'm in wrote many years ago. thought it was quite a simple song, but pretty sentimental to me. Looking for comments about anything! Looking to see how i can refine this! ===================================== lyrics: ===================================== [verse1] Don’t ask me where I'm going Well, You don't have to know There's nothing left to worry You can just let me go [pre-chorus] What now my love, Now that you're gone, I'd be a fool To go on and on… What now my love, You cant let go, Why say Hello? [chorus] Slowly yet for sure I can’t seem to remember your smile Slowly yet unsure I thought I would Get over you someday [verse2] Don’t have to think about me Just go do what you love I’ll pick up all the pieces I'll be fine alone [pre-chorus] What now my love, I’m not that strong, I can’t get on When I’m left all torn What now my love, Won’t you hold on Why can't it be
  24. Hi everyone! Figured I'd make this post to show the final products of the last songs I have posted for critique in here, and to thank you all again for such great feedback that really helped me to improve my songs. I released my EP yesterday! Since I posted the songs here I've had a drummer and a bass player play on them, and got the tunes professionally mixed and mastered. Three of them I had up for critique in here, and then there's one new song on there too. (I've added the vocal harmonies to the choruses on Where I Stand, as you wished for David. Thanks a lot for that suggestion, it really made a difference ) Thank you all again for all feedback, you were of GREAT help! Here's the Spotify link, add to your playlist and subscribe if you like! Soundcloud:
  25. So I have part of the first verse but I don't know how to arrange it as well as make it flow better sinking in this bed she lies awake during the night with the voices of her demons I don't know what to write after that I was thinking to put "that feeds off what she fears the most" but there's no rhyme any ideas? I also have have the chorus that I'm pretty happy about Eyes close at the touch of the blade the numbness starts to sink in curtains close as the rain falls as she hides between these walls she just wants to fade away advice? Tips? Thanks