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  1. dear songwriter family this is actually the first tune without featuring my favourite singer to work with - there are no vocals on this oneI made this track to learn ableton live. and it worked, i learned a lot my concern about this song is - is it too repetitive? too simple? working all alone on a tune is more challenging than if you collab with someone - so feedback is very welcome! https://soundcloud.com/cto-7/cto-desert-trail thanks in advance theo
  2. Woodwind sound only, from bassoon to flute. Inspired by spring events in the garden: https://musescore.com/user/18361371/scores/3964901
  3. Dear forum members thanks so much for all your feedback on the last tune (plasm), lots of ideas and suggestions i got from different forums made it into the new tune... so here it is, i hope you find it as sparkin' as i do! https://soundcloud.com/cto-7/cto-feat-sibyl-hofstetter-shes-got-that-sparkle feedback is highly appreciated! thanks for checking it out <3 theo
  4. dear forum members i'm into music production for a while now, but could never finish my tracks. this is about to change so here's my first song would be great to hear some feedback https://soundcloud.com/cto-7/cto-fea...fstetter-plasmthanks for listening and feeding back if you have some inputs!cheerscto
  5. I wrote this song about 8 years ago but was never happy with a certain lyric. I finally finished it up last week and went to make a quick recording. My sweet 12 year old jumped in to do harmonies last minute and did a great job! Anyways, this is a true story that I wrote when I was really missing my dad who passed from cancer when I was a kid. My hope is that it can bring peace to anyone who is having a hard time. I think anyone can relate, especially if you have lost a loved one. I'd love some feedback. Thank you in advance! You left us when I was 7 years old, Though you had no choice, I just can’t let go Years down the road, and here I am, Wishing for another chance to hear your voice again, Lord knows I’ve tried, but I still struggle to get by, And in my time of doubt, I wonder why, Pre-chorus Then I opened up the good book, and a note fell on the floor, Tears rolled from my eyes, I found what I was looking for, Chorus My dear son, I won’t be here long, The time has come, where I must move on, I’m going home, When you find this note, I’ll be gone, But I want you to know… matter where you go, you’re not alone, If you find yourself wondering if someone loves you, Look up above, I’ll be watching you, Remember… who you are, There’ll be times when you’re lost, and don’t know where to go, Get down on your knees and follow that road, And remember… that I love you son. 2nd Verse Can’t believe what I just read, I never knew what he would have said, Now I know, my fathers’ watching over me, Now I’m here with my own son, Asking myself if I have done, Enough to let him know how I feel, Pre-chorus I’m here watching you dream, And I need you to know, that you’re everything to me, Chorus My Dear son, I may not always be here, The time may come, where I must move on, but for now I’m home I’m here for you, no matter what you do, And I want you to know… matter where you go, you’re not alone, If you find yourself wondering if someone loves you, Look up to me, I’ll be here for you, Remember… who you are, There’ll be times when you’re lost, and don’t know where to go, Get down on your knees and follow that road, And remember… Bridge Life’s hard I know, but we all have room to grow, Without a challenge, how would we learn, Chorus If you find yourself wondering if someone loves you, Look up to me, I’ll be here for you, Remember… who you are, There’ll be times when you’re lost, and don’t know where to go, Get down on your knees and follow that road, Remember… that I love you son.
  6. I have only written country songs in the past. I wrote my first rap song back in 2016 & just had it produced last month. It is dedicated and inspired by my son who had some rough experiences in the early stages of his life. (That is him in the video). Thank you in advance for any critique you may offer. Now I know It’s only me myself and I I’ll stay solo No one else that I’ll rely From now on I know I’m gonna be alright Keep movin on I’m never gonna be defied I lost all my pride Things slipped through my hands Don’t have much to say Know I’ve blown my chance Once a dreamer Now I’ll pay the cost of wasting all of those days If I had my dirt bike still I would ride away, I would ride away, back to my hiding place Taking from others only robbed myself Of the goodness in my life & all the things I felt The things I did, I will not mention Not looking back and surrendering to the temptation Tripping, dealing and smoking I’ve been there and I’ve done that Sober, healing, hustling Currently where I’m at And I’ve been staring in the mirror with blood shot eyes I need help from three wise men…me, myself and I And my homies, my homies They gon end up in the sky Death is not up in my plans, I've got me, myself and I In the mirror is me I’m facing, In the mirror is me I’m facing Sometimes it’s hard to face him Sometimes it’s hard to face him Now I know It’s only me myself and I I’ll stay solo No one else that I’ll rely From now on I know I’m gonna be alright Keep movin on I’m never gonna be defied I left that night watching sister and mama cry To clear my head ask myself all the reasons why What made me do this? And what I’ve become? Only hurting myself, sister, daddy and mom A death trap just waiting in the wings I need to get out do bigger better things And to speak the truth no matter how it hurts Respect and loyalty is what they deserve I want the comforts of home To be where it’s quiet Not in the prison cell Finding myself in the center of a riot I wanna turn the key Have freedom and peace You can’t do that in the prison cell When you surrounded by all the police Been staring in the mirror with blood shot eyes I need help from three wise men…me, myself and I And my homies, my homies They gon end up in the sky Death is not up in my plans, I've got me, myself and I The devil hit me hard Yeah, he knocked me down But I got back up and I stood my ground Now I know It’s only me myself and I I’ll stay solo No one else that I’ll rely From now on I know I’m gonna be alright Keep movin on I’m never gonna be defied Now I know It’s only me myself and I I’ll stay solo No one else that I’ll rely From now on The devil won’t destroy me I know I’m gonna be alright Got me, myself & I Keep movin on No he won’t destroy me I’m never gonna be defied Got me, myself & I Keep movin on I will not destroy me I’m never gonna be defied I got me, myself & I Now I know It’s only me, myself & I
  7. Hey good people, Please have a listen and tell me what you think of the song/production/mix. Cheers, Geir
  8. Hi all, Recently I have composed some songs that I wasn't happy with the lyrical ideas, so I am looking to offer them up for anyone interested in a collaboration, to come up with the lyrics and melody. If you want to sing the song as well, then I am fine with that. Everyone is invited to join in. @john - don't know if you would be interested? @Mahesh - don't know if you would be interested? @Peggy - don't know if you would be interested? Here are the tracks: Cheers R https://soundcloud.com/moodman-1/home-17012017-2011/s-YyLo5 https://soundcloud.com/moodman-1/the-last-echo-18012017-2248/s-kh6N3 https://soundcloud.com/moodman-1/the-white-duke-19012017-2035/s-MwmLk https://soundcloud.com/moodman-1/this-charade-19012017-2139/s-Xsb6m
  9. Hey all, I've been hitting a roadblock with my song that I'm very pssionate about. I'm rebooting the theme from the Atari 2600 Centipede commercial in a whole song, and am trying to recreate the choir they have in the chorus. The issue, as you may have guessed, is that I don't know how to recreate a choir, with notes I can change at the tempo my chorus is in. I don't have a real choir or vocal abilities so I'm curious, how can I replicate the choir in the chorus of this song?
  10. Either you guys are using the same system as another site I'm on, or I don't know which site I'm on and I'm now posting twice without meaning to. Anyway. Copyright 2017 Vara La Fey. Fair use and all that. Tear it up, tell me how much you loved or hated or whatevered it. RADIO FREE WORLD I am the wild west the hornets' nest the thought you can't rewind I am the unopressed the wave crest that breaks across your mind I am the cuss-fest the bare breast I drive the censors wild I am your freenets your treasure chest so don't you touch that dial Just turn me on You know you wanna, you know you wanna Come, join the fun You know you're gonna, you know you're gonna I am Radio Free World I am Radio Free World Ah, what are you craving? Can you feel the heresy the liberty your masters warned about I am discovery an ecstasy you cannot live without So come taste the real me the blasphemy the lips beneath the veil I am your setting free the apogee I am the holy grail So turn me on You know you wanna, you know you wanna Come, join the fun You know you're gonna, you know you're gonna I am Radio Free World I am Radio Free World If I offend you I don't care I don't put black bars anywhere I serve all comers with a smile Once you get with me you ain't gonna touch that dial Just turn me on You know you wanna, you know you wanna Come, join the fun You know you're gonna, you know you're gonna I am Radio Free World....
  11. My new tune is a guitar based instrumental. Please have a listen and tell me: 1. is it exciting enough througout the 3.50s or do you fall out? 2. Is it well ballanced - or do you find any sounds/instruments/parts annoying or... just wrong? Your oppinion means alot, wether you are an amateur or pro! Cheers, Geir
  12. Just wrote this song, supposed to be a sort of stripped down country blues song, maybe with a little bit of a janis joplin vibe though. Let me know what you think! You have a power over me you hate to use but can't let it be Anything you say, I'll do I any kind of way, I let you Hurt me , cause that's what you do cause when you hurt me, it hurts you too and you hate yourself, like no one else So your favorite thing is to hurt me come back just to desert me and my favorite thing is to let you Do it over, baby do Then at least we share this blue You tear yourself apart cutting through my heart God danm drunk on this pain all we know are these games So you left it there for me to find did her like you do my mind hurt me, cause that's what you do feels like home, all we ever knew misery, sure loves company So your favorite thing is to hurt me come back just to desert me and my favorite thing is to let you Do it over, baby do Then at least we share this blue You love me, baby don't you too much for my own danm good sometimes I wish I'd never met you Cause don't you just love to hurt me Come right back to desert me And don't I just love to let you Do it over, come on do it over, baby do At least we share this blue
  13. I wrote this rap song back in 2016 dedicated and inspired by my son who had some rough experiences in the early stages of his life & had it produced last month. Now I know It’s only me myself and I I’ll stay solo No one else that I’ll rely From now on I know I’m gonna be alright Keep movin on I’m never gonna be defied I lost all my pride Things slipped through my hands Don’t have much to say Know I’ve blown my chance Once a dreamer Now I’ll pay the cost of wasting all of those days If I had my dirt bike still I would ride away, I would ride away, back to my hiding place Taking from others only robbed myself Of the goodness in my life & all the things I felt The things I did, I will not mention Not looking back and surrendering to the temptation Tripping, dealing and smoking I’ve been there and I’ve done that Sober, healing, hustling Currently where I’m at And I’ve been staring in the mirror with blood shot eyes I need help from three wise men…me, myself and I And my homies, my homies They gon end up in the sky Death is not up in my plans, I've got me, myself and I In the mirror is me I’m facing, In the mirror is me I’m facing Sometimes it’s hard to face him Sometimes it’s hard to face him Now I know It’s only me myself and I I’ll stay solo No one else that I’ll rely From now on I know I’m gonna be alright Keep movin on I’m never gonna be defied I left that night watching sister and mama cry To clear my head ask myself all the reasons why What made me do this? And what I’ve become? Only hurting myself, sister, daddy and mom A death trap just waiting in the wings I need to get out do bigger better things And to speak the truth no matter how it hurts Respect and loyalty is what they deserve I want the comforts of home To be where it’s quiet Not in the prison cell Finding myself in the center of a riot I wanna turn the key Have freedom and peace You can’t do that in the prison cell When you surrounded by all the police Been staring in the mirror with blood shot eyes I need help from three wise men…me, myself and I And my homies, my homies They gon end up in the sky Death is not up in my plans, I've got me, myself and I The devil hit me hard Yeah, he knocked me down But I got back up and I stood my ground Now I know It’s only me myself and I I’ll stay solo No one else that I’ll rely From now on I know I’m gonna be alright Keep movin on I’m never gonna be defied Now I know It’s only me myself and I I’ll stay solo No one else that I’ll rely From now on The devil won’t destroy me I know I’m gonna be alright Got me, myself & I Keep movin on No he won’t destroy me I’m never gonna be defied Got me, myself & I Keep movin on I will not destroy me I’m never gonna be defied I got me, myself & I Now I know It’s only me, myself & I
  14. 6x8

    6 x 8 is a song I wrote about not learning from the first time about getting into trouble and drugs with deep regret wishing you had your life back. Freedom and peace. CHORUS: C’mon yeah, c’mon it’s like that, It’s like that No mirrors to look at in my 6x8 Surrounded by hard walls that can’t even break My knuckles, my knuckles They gone pay for mistakes I want my life back now But I know it’s too late No mirror to look at in my 6x8 Surrounded by hard walls I can’t even break My knuckles, my knuckles They gone pay for mistakes I want my life back now But I know it’s too late With my head to my knees And the gavel they slamming down Before the man in the gown I knew what was going down I had my life back once But look how I took it for granted I had my freedom and peace But damn it for a moment I had it An addict addicted to trouble Dealing and smoking dope And now I’m only dealing with Noodles and a pack of smokes I had the comfort of home to pee where it’s quiet Now I’m pissing in the prison Surrounded by riots CHORUS: No mirror to look at in my 6x8 Surrounded by hard walls that can’t even break My knuckles, my knuckles They gone pay for mistakes I want my life back now But I know it’s too late No mirror to look at in my 6x8 Surrounded by hard walls that can’t even break My knuckles, my knuckles They gone pay for mistakes I want my life back now But I know it’s too late I stayed hungry Every day they feeding you crap But beggars can not be choosers So I’m throwing it back In line to take a fast shower They only give you minutes At home I swear I used to take a half an hour Tighty whities man I don’t even wear these Boxers, designer belts and Pants hung to my knees Had the comforts at home freedom and peace But I’m in my 6x8 And don’t even know my release CHORUS: No mirror to look at in my 6x8 Surrounded by hard walls I can’t even break My knuckles, my knuckles They gone pay for mistakes I want my life back now But I know it’s too late No mirror to look at in my 6x8 Surrounded by hard walls I can’t even break My knuckles, my knuckles They gone pay for mistakes I want my life back now But I know it’s too late Couldn’t stay away from trouble Or learn right from wrong Should of listened to the words Of another song I was young and stupid I spent some time in Juvie In the big house now Where I swore I would never would be Wishing I was at work And making all that bread And listening to the speakers Pumping in my head Ain’t no beats up here Some people rapping now Sometimes I hear them shout Get me the f*ck out CHORUS: No mirror to look at in my 6x8 Surrounded by hard walls I can’t even break My knuckles, my knuckles They gone pay for mistakes I want my life back now But I know it’s too late No mirror to look at in my 6x8 Surrounded by hard walls I can’t even break My knuckles, my knuckles They gone pay for mistakes I want my life back now But I know it’s too late
  15. I have recently written a new song that could become a viable single after more production. Lyrics below the link text: [ ] Verse Dreams are made alone Ghosts whisper through through her broken home I thought I had an out Insecure, brooding, drowning in the crowd Verse They came at me with force Paranoid vampires showing no remorse Stumbled and bemused All this lonely dreaming has her feeling used Chorus Walking through the valley of bloody suicides I've lost the easy answer, I'm fighting for my life Driftin through a portal of morbid fallen dreams All emotions dead, soul ripping at the seams Verse Opened my eyes chained Arms numbing, needles in my veins Unleash a scream or sigh Equally silent to these beings of blight Chorus Saw my dying day in my waking mind These shackles are eternal, rage is shooting blind Saw my waking lifetime unfolding in the flames losing blood so quickly they think that its a game Verse Relief slowly comes Broken nervous system, feeling on the run Shrug and walk away Their hidden faces leering, pampering their graves Chorus This cycle cannot break until a change is made I'm empty on ideas, distrubuting the blame Suspended and eternal this cycle cannot die Until I am taken from this wretched life
  16. I think it came out kinda nice Tell me what you think. Any feedback is welcome! If you like it, check out the other songs on my channel. Utopia - Surf the clouds: Thanks for your time!
  17. The song is kind of chill and melodic, not anything like edm. What do you think about it? Any feedback is appreciated! Utopia - Surf the clouds: Thanks!
  18. Hello everyone, Happy Valentine's Day! Here's a song that I made called Valentine Belated: CLICK HERE for LYRICS Please enjoy if you can bear it! xD
  19. Hello SongStuff, my name is Kiyash B. and I want to tell you my story today. Let’s get started… Playing with music which I never did before. I never thought to make career in music nor I think till this moment. I am still a beginner started learning music two months ago from YouTube. All I thought to make my wife’s dream come true. She’s a beautiful singer and I love to see her grow. We married last year (2016), and living happily. But, all off a sudden I lost my father, business and was under a lot of debts. Most of my family and friends quoted to me that she was unlucky for me. Even she started to blame herself during these drastic conditions. But, I never demoralized her nor I thought of her in that way. I sat overnight with a pen and a diary what I can do at this situation? Something that’s not only for me but for her. I saw the best way to express my love and feelings towards her is the music. Since then I started to learn music apart from being a cartoonist. I followed YouTube tutorials to create melodies digitally. Then I moved on to write some lyrics (mostly in Bengali and Hindi). And recorded the songs over cheap headphone mic which I used for Skype meetings. We haven’t used any type of studio recording mics or any other hi-tech hardware’s. At first I tried to show our songs to some producers but all of it was rejected. Still I never lose my hope to make her a star, I saw the best way is near me. It’s the internet! Yes! I’ve created a YouTube channel named VeenaDhara (one who holds veena, Goddess Saraswati). What I am trying to do? My wife Keertika is a great singer, but I am not. But, what I want to do for her is to make her voice reach every ears. She has a golden voice and I want to make her famous so that it can make those peoples quite whoever insulted my love. My intention are strong enough that whatever it needs I will do for her. Apart from that I am doing freelance works to sustain my family. Now whatever happens I promised her to never get back. I planned to make more compositions by this month and show it to the world. And I hope one day I’ll be able to make her famous. If you like to support my mission and genuinely loved our compositions please like, share, comment and subscribe to our videos and channel. VEENADHARA | YOUTUBE CHANNEL Let me know your views? Thanks for viewing such a long post!
  20. Let me know what you think!
  21. Hey Guys! Please give me some feedback on this cover I just created! If you like it please subscribe =D
  22. Hey guys, iv been playing for a year now and i decided to make a solo. I dont have a teacher to analyze my work so it would mean a lot if you guys could listing to my solo and tell me what you think and what i can improve on.
  23. This is a test recording of the chorus from my track distant. tell me what you think of the lyrics and ryhme structrure Lyrics>>>>>>>>>> i keep my distance from the devil spread wide apart avoiding sin revoking lust because i love from my heart a gift from my god l-ord jesus the freedom we want the freedom we want to be free with our god i was sitting quitely in meditation im contemplating is the matrix just a figment of imagination to my amazement my mind and body seperated but can the mind survive without the brains regulation i need more education for my minds elevation
  24. Howdy folks, Our band, Jerkatorium, is back with another entry for a songwriting & recording competition. This time around the arbitrarily chosen song title is High School Safety Pin Parade. When I heard the title, I immediately thought of the cool punk rock kids in my High School, so I wrote a song about them. I'd love any feedback (especially negative feedback) on any aspect of the song that comes to mind. High School Safety Pin Parade by Jerkatorium Verse 1 pins and patches, cutting classes all day, out by the smoking lounge wild and lawless in black nail polish they'll take whatever they can scrounge Chorus 1 in the high school safety pin parade get your degree in the high school safety pin parade Verse 2 plaids and flannel, let's dismantle those lame, old societal norms hair dyed brightly, shaved or spikey gotta have that punk rock uniform Chorus 2 in the high school safety pin parade if you wanna be in the high school safety pin parade Extended Chorus 1 high school where anarchy rules in the high school safety pin parade Verse 3 spikes and leather, ripped up sweaters and studs, the kind that you screw in chains and zippers, laughs and snickers you know they’re never gonna let you in Chorus 3 to the high school safety pin parade where standards matter the high school safety pin parade Extended Chorus 2 high school where everyone's so cool in the high school safety pin parade Bridge you know that you gotta go on display you know that's it's all for show in the high school safety pin parade Verse 4 straps and buckles, swollen knuckles from fists, to the side of your head boots and braces and lipstick traces it’s how you look, not what you’ve read Chorus 4 in the high school safety pin parade you'll get hammered by the high school safety pin parade in the high school safety pin parade so enamored with the high school safety pin parade
  25. "Finished" this song today so it's still super rough, just recorded it on my phone. Need a lot more practice with the guitar playing/vocals but any constructive criticism with the lyrics/structure/rhythm etc. would be much appreciated. Thanks Verse 1: Red wine and closed doors Touched the sky on your floor It was all a thrill at the start Caught onto your old tricks It was only skin to skin But you wanted me to feel that spark Pre-chorus: I fell from so high Just for fun We lit up the night Before we turned to dust Chorus: We were like fireworks But the pain was a slow burn Cuz you didn’t feel it in your heart The ground crumbled where I stood Was it because of her that you had to go and make your mark Well boy, I hope she broke your heart good Verse 2: Was it all play pretend? You say we’re just friends Brushed me off so casually Said the word to make me stay Just air to fan the flame Tragic serenity Pre-chorus Chorus Bridge: Broke your heart good Like you did mine, Never understood Tell me why Chorus