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Hey guys, just wrote this song. Let me know what you think! Can't really seem to come up with a good name for it either, I thought of calling it "Drunk", but that just sounds more like a party song to me. For now I've called it "Headaches" but feel free to suggest something else! Over and over againDown this bottle for helpBut time after timeThere's just none to findI'm so hungover from lifeknow these headaches better than my mindbut lately, I swear I will trybaby, just hold on for tonightCause my head hurts but my heart's worse Just give me a chance I'll fix it, after this dance But I feel drunk, when I sing this Cause it wont make sense, cause we don't I wake up like I'm deadYou're sitting on the bedDon't tell me thoughI already knowGot so drunk that I couldn't speakGuess the Jack just spoke for meTold you things I didn't meanNow you no longer speak to meAnd my head hurts but my heart's worse Just need one more chance After one last dance And I feel drunk, when I sing this Cause it won't make sense, cause we don't Baby, baby , pleaseIf I feel it, aint it real?Ooh Ooh baby pleaseNo, dont you leaveAm I drunk, when I sing this? Cause it don't make sense, cause we don't My head hurts My heart's worse You said no more chances And I'm still here dancing noooo, baby noSo danm drunk, when I sing this It won't make sense, cause we don't
I have wrotten lyrics but see that I am french I don't know if they mean something. Just need you to tell me how to make it look like a real song... The Song: Freedom I can hear angels their voices, their bells please Lord let me go with them please Lord let me go with them pain makes of me a slave I need to be saved please Lord let me go with them please Lord let me go with them I want to feel secured I know they're my cure please Lord let me go with them please Lord let me go with them I need to feel free Even if I let the life behind me please Lord let me go with them please Lord let me go with them I know these lyrics are strange and look like a suicide song but it's not. That's just a kind of chorus we repeat without instruments (or just drumbs -like Nina Simone "Be my husband"-), like the slaves centurys agon they've inspired me. Be honest with me and tell it if it's bad...
Hi, Karl here! I recently composed a song and put some music to it, too. I wrote this song for a friend of mine who's no longer here, thus the title "For Her". I hope she'll be be proud to hear this. What do you guys think of this song? I really really want your honest assessment of my music so that I could further improve my craft. Thanks y'all! --- Here's the link to my song: and below are the words to it: The first time we met You smiled at me Sweet and easy Like you knew me so well We got along oh oh oh oh We had this world For both of us hmm alone We shared stories We'll treasure forever CHORUS: Your name I'll never forget Your smile I'll always keep Our dreams I'll try to chase I'd look at the stars And you're here with me once more Once more We talked and we left our troubles Far, far away 'Coz sadness was lost In the glimmer in our eyes In the glimmer in our eyes (Repeat CHORUS 2x) I'd look at the stars And wish you're here with me once more Once more Once more Once more Once...