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#1 User is offline   comradeB 

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Posted 22 January 2010 - 02:35 AM

no title for this one, but i wanted to get some feedback. this is all me, the other guys haven't even heard it. call it an exclusive. suggestions please.

http://www.yousendit...xUnIwVW1Ga1E9PQ


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Posted 26 January 2010 - 01:28 AM

View PostcomradeB, on 21 January 2010 - 08:35 PM, said:

no title for this one, but i wanted to get some feedback. this is all me, the other guys haven't even heard it. call it an exclusive. suggestions please.

http://www.yousendit...xUnIwVW1Ga1E9PQ


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Would it help if i put it on soundclick?

http://www.soundclic...7&content=music
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Posted 26 January 2010 - 10:15 PM

View PostcomradeB, on 26 January 2010 - 12:28 AM, said:

Would it help if i put it on soundclick?

http://www.soundclic...7&content=music



nice mellow melody, interesting with the change after the 2nd chorus kinda gave it that Coldplay feel to it sorry if that offends but its the only comparison i could think of
i think with some bass and bits and pieces of guitar fill this could be quite good

good work so far


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Posted 31 January 2010 - 09:40 AM

Great voice!
Nice vocal arrangement with the a a a aaah.
In general when introducing a beat like you do in the chorus, for me it doesn't sound good if it disappears again (except maybe for some kind of breakdown). So I would keep some percussions in the 2nd verse too.
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Posted 26 February 2010 - 08:09 PM

Nice and mellow just how I like it I wish my voice was that good.
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Posted 27 February 2010 - 07:20 PM

View PostcomradeB, on 21 January 2010 - 08:35 PM, said:

no title for this one, but i wanted to get some feedback. this is all me, the other guys haven't even heard it. call it an exclusive. suggestions please.

http://www.yousendit...xUnIwVW1Ga1E9PQ


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thanks everybody for your feedback.
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