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[4EverClear]

People are probably wondering
Just what I see in you
And I know that you’ve been thinking about
That very same thing too
You’re worried because you don’t have a job
And you want your own place to live
You wish you could figure everything out
But nothing ever gives
You think your life is crashin’ around you
But I think its comin’ together
Since you met me baby let’s be honest
Things are working out a little better

You smile that perfect smile at me
And it’s like God’s here himself
Like he came down just to make me laugh
Like he cares for no one else
But the God I see is just heaven
Hidden in your green eyes
And the way you talk is just crazy
And the truth is I realize
You talk about working out
You mean going to the gym
We both know you won’t do it
We both know that I’ll win
You grow out your Irish beard
Until you’re red in the face
You know you need a trim
But you’ll let it go for days
There’s no where I’d rather be
There’s nothing I’d rather do
I’ll give my love, give it free
Give it all to you

You rap like you’re such a gangster
But then you pull those racist jokes
And you smile cause you think you’re funny
And I laugh cause it’s a hoax

You’re a pretty boy
But you’re a dirty boy
And I love it all the same
You’re a silly boy
You’re a goofy boy
But I’d take your last name

You’re beautiful, you look at me,
You whisper in the dark
I’m wondering what’s meant to be
Is this love really ours

You smile that perfect smile at me
And it’s like God’s here himself
Like he came down just to make me laugh
Like he cares for no one else
But the God I see is just heaven
Hidden in your green eyes
And the way you talk is just crazy
And the truth is I realize

There’s no where I’d rather be
There’s nothing I’d rather do
I’ll give my love, give it free
Give it all to you
I’ll give my love,
Take it please
I’m giving me to you

[DaniGirl13xx]

I really love the chorus to this.

[Carlythelyricist]

This is really good

[4EverClear]

Thanks guys! ♥

[Az09]

<p style="text-align: center; ">what you do is poetry not lyrics some lines and phrases naturally carry mellody even i dont know why some times in writing a line its not just about which words to use it  can also  be about which words i dont need to use  be word economicall heres what i did with your words i had to stop when i thought  the words stoped making sence remember words have to be like a great melody high quality  </p>
<p style="text-align: center; ">people often say</p>
<p style="text-align: center; ">what i see in you today</p>
<p style="text-align: center; ">and i know you must think</p>
<p style="text-align: center; ">in much the same way</p>
<p style="text-align: center; ">you have no job </p>
<p style="text-align: center; ">no place to live</p>
<p style="text-align: center; ">you wish some how</p>
<p style="text-align: center; ">whats free is what you give</p>
<p style="text-align: center; ">you think your life is crashin down</p>
<p style="text-align: center; "> </p>
<p style="text-align: center; ">but in your mind its comin round</p>
<p style="text-align: center; ">theres only me and you in town</p>
<p style="text-align: center; ">you smile that perfect smile at me</p>
<p style="text-align: center; ">as if only god can see</p>
<p style="text-align: center; ">like he came down to make me laugh</p>
<p style="text-align: center; ">like he cares for no one elses craft</p>
<p style="text-align: center; ">but the god i see is just like me</p>
<p style="text-align: center; ">heaven in your eyes for me</p>
<p style="text-align: center; ">and the way you talk is just crazy</p>
<p style="text-align: center; ">why is your love not for me</p>
<p style="text-align: center; "> </p>
<p>                                                                                                             from Az09</p>

[PhilJ]

The charm of this makes me feel it's personal - could be wrong. Plenty of good lines although i didn't know a beard could have a nationality!

Cheers.