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                                                                                        hey guys your comments mean a lot to me thank you

                                                                                        just my opinion on art...

 

            

                      ART IS WHAT THE MIND SPITS OUT

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                                     a work of art

                                     tells you all

                                     shows the mind

                                     a captured thought

 

                                     sunlight dancing on the sea

                                     falling leaves just left the tree

                                     silver lining around a cloud

                                     art is what the mind spits out

 

                                     love and hate

                                     the finest line

                                     mental blocks

                                     loud ticking time

 

                                     tossing and turning

                                     can't sleep at night

                                     new thoughts and ideas

                                     clear in minds eye

 

                                      landscape portrait

                                      photo sculpture

                                      metal or iron

                                      bicycle punctured

 

                                      sunlight dancing on the sea

                                      falling leaves just left the tree

                                      silver lining around a cloud

                                      art is what the mind spits out

 

                                      carved or painted

                                      drawn or made

                                      spots on a canvas

                                      paintbrush sprayed

 

                                      imagination wild

                                      full of pictures

                                      never stops thinking

                                      never resticted

 

                                       man or woman

                                       building or sky

                                       we take from the picture

                                       and create with our mind

 

                                       sunlight dancing on the sea

                                       falling leaves just left the tree

                                       silver lining around a cloud

                                       art is what the mind spits out...

 

 

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hey guys just my opinion on art

please comment means so much thank you...

 

 

ART IS WHAT THE MIND SPITS OUT
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a work of art
tells you all
shows the mind
a captured thought

 

sunlight dancing on the sea
falling leaves just left the tree
silver lining around a cloud
art is what the mind spits out

 

love and hate
the finest line
mental blocks
loud ticking time

 

tossing and turning
can't sleep at night
new thoughts and ideas
clear in minds eye

 

landscape portrait
photo sculpture
metal or iron
bicycle punctured

 

sunlight dancing on the sea
falling leaves just left the tree
silver lining around a cloud
art is what the mind spits out

 

carved or painted
drawn or made
spots on a canvas
paintbrush sprayed

 

imagination wild
full of pictures
never stops thinking
never restricted

 

man or woman
building or sky
we take from the picture
and create with our mind

sunlight dancing on the sea
falling leaves just left the tree
silver lining around a cloud
art is what the mind spits out...

 

 

© copyright house all rights reserved...

 

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A nice write, benjo. I like this and I love your title. A nice perspective look at art and how it arrives from the mind, spits it out. :) kudos  :jumping25:

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Hey Benjo

 

I loved this alot...while art is subjective...you got to wonder, what one person hates, another person loves, go figure....anyway...you hit the nail on the head, with this one....and a shout out to your chorus,  I loved it!!....

 

 

sunlight dancing on the sea
falling leaves just left the tree
silver lining around a cloud
art is what the mind spits out

 

simply great!!...regards, Mike

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hey guys,

 

                   thank you so much for those amazing comments made my day

 

MARILYN,  yeah it really does just spit it out at you some times at the most inconvenient times thank you so much lovely comment

 

MIKE,         i'm so happy you enjoyed this piece lovely comment thank you

 

SKIN,         hey man great comment yeah BICYCLE PUNCTURED was so meant really in line with THE UNMADE BED if you are aware of that one

                   just wanted the reality side to show, thanks again take care all...

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Hey Benjo

 

You welcome, looking forward to what comes next!!...regards, Mike

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Art is the soul and recording device of any and all of civilization, im glad to see that it is not totaly gone from the minds of our youth, keep it up i like your shit man!

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I liked the poem quite a bit. The only thing I didn't like was the word 'spit.' It just doesn't sound right to me. Spitting has the connotation of disgust, at least for me. So talking about the falling leaves and everything beautiful is being followed by the mind spitting. Perhaps that's just me...

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hey thrashimation,

 

yeah I see where your coming from with the spit, but if you think about it what i'm trying to say is art is everything all around but it has to go through the mind first

people have used almost everything as art even disgusting things so spit yes I agree with you not a nice word

but try to think of it as the mind being a machine and spitting ideas out great comment man thanks so much for taking the time to read it take care tony...

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benjo

Thanks for creative writing

                                     "love and hate

                                      the finest line

                                      mental blocks

                                      loud ticking time"

I love It

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