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Update: I took David's advice (*except for the strip club portion) and changed up the video. I think this one turned out great, but who knows? Thanks a lot to everyone, especially David for the ideas on this. Making videos is not fun….

 

 

Hello everyone,

  I wasn't really sure where to post this, as the video is still a work in progress. This is my first time making a video, and this is just a rough sketch of what I think the video could look like. The footage is all royalty-free stock video, except for the shots of me playing and singing.

 

 

 

 

-Michael

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I just wanted to say well done Michael :thumbup:

 

Is a very beautiful song Michael!!

 

Well done. Nice video too!!

Hey, thank you both very much for watching. I'm still making changes to this to hopefully make it better

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David: Man, I can't say enough how great those ideas were. I tried to make this one seem more real and show the song in the process of being written. Thanks for taking the time to watch and help out, brother. I really needed help on it.

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yea damn david , your in the wrong biz !!! some great , I mean great input to this !! think this is good , but hell when you read davids input , your like hhhmmm , and start thinking in that direction , damn good input , ,did I mention  that all ready ??

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WOW: Just saw the new video now!!

 

Is absolutely wonderful! youre a multitalent Michael... What is it you cant do?
 

I think I love you!!! :D

 

 

Awesome work!! Good job Michael!

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WOW: Just saw the new video now!!

 

Is absolutely wonderful! youre a multitalent Michael... What is it you cant do?

 

I think I love you!!! :D

 

 

Awesome work!! Good job Michael!

 

Thanks a lot Gry! Im glad you liked it, and you know I love you too :lol2:  Cant wait to hear your next song…I feel like it's been too long

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well hell , count me in , told Michael I would come see him where ever , so off to the club we go  !! lol, really though that insight on the song and vid was right short of brilliant , least for me it was ,anyway, like whats going on !! 

rock on !!

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  • 2 weeks later...

Though I'm a little disappointed there's no scene where you're stuffing dollars into g-strings, I love the new video.  Simple, poignant, and very effective for this song.  Having it all b&w was a good creative choice too.  Kudos, My Friend!

Thanks a lot, bro. Certainly couldn't have done it without your creative input! 

 

….apparently, bringing a video camera into a strip club is frowned upon. Who woulda thought?

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yea , I learned that a few years back , go figure

rock on !!

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Hi Michael

 

Love the video, I think the shots giving impression of writing/rewriting over a period of days really works.

 

You have created snapshots of a relationship and this makes it believable.

 

Good luck with it  :)

 

Jan

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Hi Michael

 

Love the video, I think the shots giving impression of writing/rewriting over a period of days really works.

 

You have created snapshots of a relationship and this makes it believable.

 

Good luck with it  :)

 

Jan

Thanks, Jan. I'm glad you liked it.

David gave me some great advice on making this

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Michael, what have you done to the video? It's awesome.

 

How you've managed to capture the images of "Katie" that inspired you to create the melody and then the writing stage of the lyrics and then putting the 2 together.

 

Truly inspirational and it should be on MTV or similar. Fantastic video that draws you into the songs story and hooks you.

 

Well done m8 :thumbsup2:

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Super awesome video indeed Michael. Can't wait for you to become famous and charge us $100 to meet you and get your autograph! ;)

 

 

Best to you, my friend.

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Michael, what have you done to the video? It's awesome.

 

How you've managed to capture the images of "Katie" that inspired you to create the melody and then the writing stage of the lyrics and then putting the 2 together.

 

Truly inspirational and it should be on MTV or similar. Fantastic video that draws you into the songs story and hooks you.

 

Well done m8 :thumbsup2:

 

Super awesome video indeed Michael. Can't wait for you to become famous and charge us $100 to meet you and get your autograph! ;)

 

 

Best to you, my friend.

 

Hey. Thanks a lot, guys. This video is based off of David's excellent ideas, so I owe him all of the credit.

Glad you guys liked it!

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Well, I'm a bit late to the party here, as it's my first time exploring the 'musician's lounge'...

 

but holy moly, Michael - what an incredibly beautiful song!  I LOVE it.  You are a very talented musician and your video is awesome - it is so real and honest…  so, so good!!!

 

Off to stalk your youtube channel and find some more of your music :)

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Great quality. I'm a lyricist. Hoping to find musicians to take my lyrics to the next level. If you are so inclined, you can view a few of them at Smashwords.com - The Lyrical Life

Thanks 4 the high quality song and video.

CS

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  • 2 weeks later...

Nice video and great song Michael.

I joined this forum a bit after you posted this but I am glad I stumbled upon this topic.

I like it.

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Rob: Thanks a lot, man. Im glad you liked it. I'm guessing we need to plan a Songstuff field trip to the "shoe show" after this topic. I'm always down

:phone:

 

Zed: Thanks of watching, and I'm really happy that you like it! cheers!

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