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She was just a young girl

But her uncle had thought different

he put her in torcher and pain

and for life she's had the memories

She had went through rehab

scared when someone slightly touched her

She had no parents by her side

As they had passed and left her

She had built her own path

and created her own roads

Adored all of her family

but for life she's had the memories

She tried getting help but everyone let her down

She had to make it on her own

and mostly fell on the ground

But she prayed and worshipped god

For he was her only trust

To this day people hear the story and ask what was her name

She would say what i have said

She was never named but she created a name herself

From now on just call her FAITH

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Hi NA! what a tough topic you have tackled here. You tell the story from start to finish keeping the same emotion. It is raw and very beautifully done.

I was thinking the title might make a nice song too. If you ever wanted help with lyrics for a song I'd love to through out some suggestions.

All the best,

Lisa

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thank you  Lisa Gates for your opinion. I am grateful you liked it and making this into a song would be great!!!!!

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Hi! to put this in a song a few lines may come out or be combined into one line so we can have some structure  I'd like to use the title in the chorus instead of just the last line. If that does not appeal to you we could use the line "fell to the ground" as a refrain and have no chorus. This would save the title for the last line but in the end (when the song becomes a hit of course...lol) most people would call it "fell to the ground" because that is what repeated/hooked the most through the song.

I'll run a few suggestions by you in a bit.

Lisa

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