Wax For My Wounds

[omenrama]

Here are the verses I wrote for a song I am recording titled;

 

 "Wax For My Wounds"

 

 

Verse 1

 

Mad was I to forebear /

 

Gone / Now / As the wine /

 

Drink / Coalesce /

 

Thou sprangeth not whence thine person /

 

My father never cared /

 

Barrows / Let’s pack these travels shared /

 

Arrows / Pare a linen / Cicatrice /

 

Airs afoul / Here for now /

 

Gone the next /

 

Again I find myself here thinking /

 

Why you clean the mess /

 

To repeat myself again /

 

Chorus

 

4X

 

Hey baby / I'm running out of patience / 

 

Verse 2

 

I stay for that which might change /

 

Fear / Doubt /

 

Loss of time / Grief /

 

My self-perception /

 

Everyday is another sad memory /

 

So much so that I can’t think of anything /

 

Else that had com before you and I /

 

Made it official / A marriage of hell /

 

And the remedy /

 

For the sane of mind / And will to live /

 

My worried mother’s plea /

 

And all my father’s sin /

 

I’ve given all I can / You’ve taken long enough /

 

The sight of ribbon’s end / My patience wearing thin /

 

This hate I want not of /

 

For here we know the blood /

 

A wax for open wounds /

 

And the mourning of flesh thereof /

 

To let you know I’m done with waiting for you /

 

Chorus

 

4X

 

Hey baby / I'm running out of patience /

Edited August 18, 2014 by omenrama

[2ndSun]

I like how you link the lines, might just be me but it's hard too gauge the natural flow of the song. 

[omenrama]

Thank you.

Here is a link to the finished song if you are interested.

 

http://omenrama.tumblr.com/post/95063154028 or

 

https://soundcloud.com/omenrama/wax-for-my-wounds

Edited August 18, 2014 by omenrama

[2ndSun]

Liked the full track dude, how'd you make the beat?

[omenrama]

Thank you, I made it with some gospel/soul record samples and a bunch of other loops of which I cant remember the source material.