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It's quiet, I like it. My mind comes alive.

I think it, I feel it. Is this the story of my life?

How do you live your life, you know you want to be good.

Close your eyes, see the joy, if I only could.

A moment, I see it. A breath in the wind.

It fills me, I want it. This is how we begin.

How do you take this time, can you make it forever.

It's there now, I have it, "big" was always there.

Sing it, sing it louder now, we're one now, sing it louder now

Sing it, sing it louder now, we're one now, sing it louder now

Long we roamed about, forgetting to be here right now

Long we'll run away, chasing all our secrets now

It goes by, I feel it.

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  • 2 weeks later...

Really like the soul searching, the reflection, the initial quiet building to the loud revolving finally to quiet finale'.

Great job, enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing your talent :-)

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  • Noob

Thank you very much. Appreciate the feedback. Think I need to finish it. Might be sad though.... Haha

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Hi Makoweb

 

I really liked this as well!!..it reads well...and it states your purpose, on the other hand if you want to expand from a poem to a song lyric, I think you will be able to do that, as your words ( to me) will work for either genre!!...great job!!...regards Mike

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Mak

yes I am here now and will try and make it forever ,  like this a lot

john

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