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Challenge #44 Not eBooks

 

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=====Revised Version=====

I want real entertainment no battery required
I want the personal touch not a Nook or Kindle Fire
I want to feel her crisp white sheets between the covers
I want to read a printed book; I'm a print book lover 

I want to curl up on the couch; slip off her jacket sleeve
I want to flip her front to back whenever I please
I want to smell her printed pagies as I spread her open wide
I want to read a printed book that keeps me satisfied

Chorus
Not eBooks
Not eBooks
Not a spineless app from a digital store
Not eBooks
Not eBooks
Not eBooks

I want to run my finger tips up and down her spine
I want to claim her as my own as I mark and underline
I want to scribble in her margins all my intimate thoughts 
I want to read a printed book cause I like books a lot

chorus

You can post your lyrics on Songstuff
Facebook or Instagram
But I don’t want to read off a flat screen tablet
I’m a print book loving man

chorus

 

 

=====Original Version=====

I want real entertainment no battery required

I want the personal touch not a Nook or Kindle Fire
I want to feel her crisp white sheets between the covers
I want to read a printed book; I'm a print book lover 

I want to curl up on the couch; slip off her jacket sleeve
I want to flip her front to back whenever I please
I want to smell her printed pagies as I spread her open wide
I want to read a printed book that keeps me satisfied

Chorus
Not eBooks
Not eBooks
I like the feel of the real deal
Not eBooks
Not eBooks
Not eBooks

I want to run my finger tips up and down her spine
I want to claim her as my own as I mark and underline
I want to scribble in her margins all my intimate thoughts 
I want to read a printed book cause I like books a lot

chorus

You can post your lyrics on Songstuff
Facebook or Instagram
But I don’t want to read off a flat screen tablet
I’m a print book loving man

chorus

LANDR-Y12W50 & Y1W44 Not eBooks.mp3

Edited by jamestoffee
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Jamestoffee

     You have an outstanding gift for correlational homonyzing.  Only thee things that bothered me:  1.  There is not enough in the third line that completes it to me.  2.  For my taste, I thought the fifth line was kind of discusting.  And.  3.  If the music was done well it's a hit in my book, paper or otherwise.  No matter.  The idea is ingenious.

 

Louie

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Hi Louie, 

 

> 1.  There is not enough in the third line that completes it to me. 

I changed the 3rd line "Not a spineless app from a digital store"

 

> 2.  For my taste, I thought the fifth line was kind of discusting.

Some people like the smell of books....but thanks for the feedback ;)

 

>3.  If the music was done well it's a hit in my book, paper or otherwise. 

LOL Well I was playing around with drum loops and such.....anyways

 

Thanks for the listen and post :D

 

James

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James,  you never cease to amaze me with your diversity and talent. Very creative write and fun song!

 

 

Sandy :thumbup1:  :thumbup1:  :thumbup1:

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