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Joyous Brown Deer Poetic Lyricism Open To Critique

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harmoniously dancing
 together so free
two sweet blue butterflys 
graciously greet
reflective gaze is, shimmering eyes
her tounge tastes the river
 as ripples the sky
a warm soft wind combs gently through her fur 
her dear heart is nourished as now so is she 
oh joyous soft brown deer, hop back to the trees
full of  gold, red and vibrant green coloured leaves
underneath birds with wings wide spread gliding east
picture you and me
us together 
floating so harmoniously
like leaves falling slow from a motionless tree
carried around the winds circling a spiralling breeze


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