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10/19/2016


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And if you ever miss me

Don’t say you wish to kiss me

Just look up to the stars in the sky

And maybe you’ll see

 

A constellation made of roses

In a million different poses

Know the door will never close

So just repose

 

Even though you can’t transpose it

Just know my heart will never close

For anything

May your eyes forever open

 

Oh my soul will never be sold

And your heart can never be cold

And you can never be told

That I’ll be gone


 

Anything they ever tell you

Saying how I never met you

Or gazed into your eyes of blue

Is only fool’s gold

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  • 7 months later...

More than a poem, this feels like a song.  With a little tweaking here and there ....  The last line in the second stanza is a bit awkward, in my opinion.  Thanks ...

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