Black Sheep

[JBoy]

 I was young once, couldn't understand
The outside world and its's chilling hand
Then one day the sky came falling down
Crashing all around without making a sound 
As I go to stand death takes me by the hand
Cutting life short,ruined future plans

 

Pictures of my life flash before my eyes 
Of a better time when no one had to hide 
Family secrets shared but never out of spite
Avoiding its target,staying out of sight 
These lies being told within each other's home
Family has been known to create a bitter soul

 

No remorse for those who quit
No second place to gold
A constant competition,hunger games I shoot my bow
Aiming for my target to create a better home
Now my goal given others left the role
Independent son watching from above
Leading his pack into happiness and love 
Never to back down from any type of crowd
Listen to the sorrows of his loved ones he's allowed 

 

Pictures of my life flash before my eyes 
Of a better time when no one had to hide 
Family secrets shared but never out of spite
Avoiding its target,staying out of sight 
These lies being told within each other's home
Family has been known to create a bitter soul

 

Step up to the plate,show them firsthand
Family keeps the faith no matter how it ends 
Never disappointed,always understanding
Learning from mistakes showing their true compassion

 

The sun is breaking out
The storm has passed us now
A sky full of birds singing heavenly sounds
As I look up from the ground
Death has come and gone 
Leaving me with the crown

[RikGrimesIsDead]

helps to leave feedback on other users songs from time to time,i see you just post your content and reply about your content?

im sorry feedback is earned on here bro......so if you want a detailed response,give a little first  

all the best

[Alex Witt]

I really like your flow man, good rhyme scheme. Youshould try to put more words inside a bar that rhyme, and still accomplish what your are trying to say. 

[Anonymous9]

Your lyrics have a good natural flow and your lyrics aren't boring either.

 

Only thing I think (and I could be wrong) is that you're lyrics are a bit vague - nothing specific is happening. Things are mentioned but not continued like:

 

"Independent son watching from above
Leading his pack into happiness and love".

 

Otherwise, good job, keep it up ,

 

Anonymous9