Rap Book [public]

[boombastic]

So I avoid spamming these forums with new topics every time I feel like running off my fingers, I decided to make a little compilation or rap book of some of my stuff. Whenever I post for critiques i'll post or edit here. Lmk if you think this is a cool idea! idk how it'll go 

 

 

February 

 

 

27th, 2017

 

• 1| My rhetoric is esoteric, lines so dope that the blind can feel it
• 2| I know I'm slightly enigmatic, but when the shapes are matching
• 3| No overcasting could ever withstand the shine that I'm blasting
• 4| My messages are drastic larger than a creature from the Jurassic
• 5| Period I'm classic read that shit backwards, man I'm nasty
• 6| Arcane magic casting fire spells across the atlas 
• 7| Brown lipped bastard born in a planet enduring disaster
• 8| I wish life moved faster

 

• 9| Cause in history we find the answers, in the present we're inflicted with dizziness
• 10| Lost in this world our only goal: find a pretty bitch, mo' petty shit 
• 11| End up dead like Nicky Santoro in Casino, some viciousness
• 12| I rather be me than some goalless wishful bitch 
• 13| Pockets are empty and my fingers induced to pull the loot
• 14| Little head influences my legs to chase the cooch 
• 15| Wanna make music so loud that I upraise the roof
• 16| Work is what I'm abrasive to, cause a better me makes for a W

 

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[TheSylentType]

I liked your song bro and that acapella worked great with it, though you can spam these forums though think you will get better/more feedback that way!

[boombastic]

I appreciate the feedback my friend! 

[ImKeN]

I don't know much about the current rap music - I've only listened to Coolio back in the 90s - but I generally liked the flow in your lyrics.

The depth or the content of the lyrics was quite impressive though, that kind of lyric will always appeal to every person no matter what genre they usually listen to.

 

Great stuff,

 

Ken

[boombastic]

Thanks ken I really appreciate the feedback! 

[Mblack]

You can tell you've got talent by how you were able to create each line with the words you used.  Great job