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Joe Bell

Mercury leave

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I sing in the gold, I sing in the wind

Mercury sapphire, mercury bin

 

You float up the river

you float, and you breathe

 

mercury sunset, mercury leave

the targets of laughter

the women we creave

 

ancient pull wonder

furtive new beads

I risk all the sunset

I whisk you like leaves

Edited by Joe Bell

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I think this should be posted in the lyrics critique...no music included here.

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I risk all the sunset is a great line from you

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