As the crow flies

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AS THE CROW FLIES

Human nature will eat itself whole...
So mark these words as if they were your last...

Past weight of the cause
Pathway? The end of flaws....
Resolve burns ever more
No fear from the days before

So will i stand? - Will i fall?
Here - in the scheme of it all
No betrayal and no compromise
I'l look in the eyes - as the crow flies

Phase 2 - The visions revealed
Soleless... plated... - Control cannot exist
Reimagined - Heart concealled
Synthetic thought process that you cannot resist

So will i stand? - Will i fall?
Here in the scale of it all
No betrayal and no compromise
I'l look in the eyes - as the crow flies

So.....It's here we lay
Subdivision - Our cells decay
Is this the future? 
All we leave our kin?
Is this the price they pay for all our sin?

Tell me is this okay?
For future generations to see that day?

So..... Will they stand? - Or will they fall?

Machined - From specification
Positronic - This brain will not betray
Isolated revision?
All emotion burned and hatred stripped away

So will we stand? - Will we fall?
Here in the scheme of it all
No betrayal and no compromise
To look in the eyes - as the crow flies

[ttec4u]

 very deep.. it flows pretty good, and has a deeper meaning.

 

[robash]

I read your little side bar with this, and I think you got your something with a bite to it! It reads like some metal with depth to me. Had a great flow as well, and a good rhyme scheme. Is this to be a song? I think you have the workings of a great one at the moment.